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mishtib

@mishtib

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

mending hearts says it all . the story starts here .
good start

waiting

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farzu3008

@farzu3008

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

superb part . i reads both part 2 and 3. amazing writing dear. so geet carrying maan child. happy that maan is not so ruthless ans accepting that its his baby. wondering who hit her so badly. perhaps her family wanted her to abort the child and she ran away. eagerly waiting for next

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

phew...thank God...Geet ke bachche ka baap Maan hi hai...

main to pareshaan ho gayi hoon kitne FFs se jahan Geet ko pregnant kisi aur ke bachche se bana dete hain and then Maan has to give his name...

but thank God jaise bhi ho but Maan is the father and he knew it very well...

from reading flash back of Party night where Maan saw Geet it seems she was drugged by some one to make her come in that party...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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dhakdhak22

@dhakdhak22

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

lovely dear😊

geet is pregnant wth maan child😃

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Awesome update
wht happend to geet ???

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Lovely start

Geet is pregnant with Maan's child hmmm

Waiting for more

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Thank you all for the lovely comments

@ kiran di .. Didu i am glad that u r relieved that geet is carrying only maan's child .. Even i didnt like it when maan has to sacrifice

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

** MENDING HEARTS **

part 4

his eyes captured that small dot that will soon capture his life .. Though maan was with many girls but today the feeling of being a father was too prominant and that too with the girl who had unknowingly made her place in his life just with a one night stand.. But before his eyes would look at her , he found her fingers slowly gripping his hand it was something that sent current through his spine.. The feeling that was related to heart and was certainly marked as poius and divine even he doesnt know what will be the consequence of having her in his life... She was like a small kid who was searching for warmth to assure herself that she was safe and sound ... His eyes looked at her face that was twitched with the worry and pain.. But why .. He was defintely confused seeing her expressions in the unconscious state that even the small smile that was reflecting on her milky white pale face was looking like it would fade in some time...

maan 's heart started to beat fast as he didnt want her to be in any kind of pain.. The maan singh khurana who never cared for anyone other than his daadi and him was now all of a sudden attracted towards her.. His mind was giving him conflicting thoughts while his rational thinking was making everything messed up...

maan : dont twist geet it will hurt you...
maan certainly wanted her to be like what he wanted but will all her comfort and want...

geet was gaining her conscious so when she tried to open her eyes her head started to throb in pain and the silent tears started to pour out of those close eyes making him restless..

he was about to call the doctor when he found himself wiping those tears and his fingers started to caress her forehead making her twitched eyebrows to become steady and she lied down again with the comfort that his hands provided...

after say precisely twenty minutes he found her staring at him with those doe shaped hazels opened in confusion finding a new person in front of her...

geet not recognising him or his earlier presence in her life asked him...

geet : where i am... Wo... Llog... She started to see around when she saw herself in the hospital.. Everything white and colourless. She looked for someone familiar but her eyes only got what she longed for... Aloofness .. No one was there for her.. Even she tried to found her daarji but disappointed eyes only shed tears...
geet : koi nahi aaya... Daarji abhi bhi naraj hai mujhse... But i didnt do anything wrong main to... Jaanti bhi nahi ki...

suddenly her words froze and his temple scrunced in anticipation..
maan st : what the hell is she talking about.. She is talking about being pregnant or about that night... Maan this girl is a mystry.. Get her information as soon as possible.. She is like a open book she doesnt even sense in which condition she is...

maan sit beside her and asked her politely seeing her crying...

maan : do you know geet that you are pregnant... He wanted to confirm his doubts...

geet nodded in a yes and she pleaded him to not tell this to anyone ...

geet : please kisi ko batana i have already let down daarji but believe me i didnt do anything... I dont even step out of house... Bus veerji ke saath wo bhi jab rajji saath ho... Please kisi ko mat batana... I will leave from here like everyone want...

maan : geet are you sure you dont know anything about this... I mean...

geet started to cry and he stopped his interrogation making her calm...
she was way too innocent but how old is she... And how did she came to that hotel that night .. He had do something she was havng no memory of that night but he was having infact now after knowing her he had to be more protective about her.. She is just like a child carrying a child herself...

he with his long fingers wiped her tears she was sniffling her eyes were already red may be from crying and lack of sleep but right now she needs to think about her life and the little life that was connected to her

geet : kisi ko nahi bataoge na...

maan : haan nahi batunga par pehle promise karo that you will do what i say say... Rogi nahi... She nodded and smiled a little..

maan : wait for five minutes i will come ater meeting the doctor..

geet : jaldi aana...

maan: hmm... He went looking at her longing eyes...

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here is the next part

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago