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Posted: 12 years ago
DIa was parekh's daughter
hmm i knew it
loved mayur scene
i want next part full of mayur

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Wow finally mayor were together and parekh got caught

Now everything is fine

Great update

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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update
Mayur and their gang solved the case nicely
gr8 part
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful part Fiza
really nice update
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Omg diya is parakh's daughter
Really interesting and amazing update
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amazing updt fiza
so it is diya who is the culprit ..loved mayur press meet
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
its a huge chapter...pardon errors..

Chapter: 17

Mayank: samrat benji ko sath rekhna.. mjhy samjh nhi araha hai k kab se usko diya k baray mein pata hai…

Samrat: sach mein yaar… usko diya bht pasand thi…

Nupur: kaun diya.. woh caf wali…

Mayank: tum janti hoo… he said in surprise… him discoing it with nupur mean he was serious… dam it…

Nupur: haan he told me … k interesting larki hai and he think they can get along with eachother… per masla kya hai

Samrat: diya parakh ki beti thi.. she is involved in all this

Nupur: wht… per yeah kasay… OMG.. benji..

Mayank: yeahi tu samjh nhi araha hai..aur us ullu ny humain pata bhi nhi chalny diya

Samrat: I just hope k usko aj na pata chala ho… itna achanak nhi ..

Mayank: n I hope woh us k sirf achi lagti ho… not in love with her…

Nupur was silent in this discussion not because she has nothing to say… yet she was not feeling good.. she was feeling dizzy and whn she felt she will fall … she griped mayanks hand to support

Mayank: nupur.. he griped her shoulder ….

Nupur: I m fine

Samrat: tum ghar jao foran.. isko lay ker ja yaar is k tu deemgh karab hai..baqi sab mein dekh lo ga…

Mayank: tu yaha dekh.. hum ghar per baat kertay hain … aur tum… ap tum hilo tu ghar se..

Nupur: mayank I fine..

Mayank: nupur shut up wanrna im literally gona pick up…. Yeah jo I am fine I am fine k button daab gaya hai nah..stop it…. Dekh raha hai kitni fine…. Shutup or I will make u shut up…

Nupur: haan taky kal newspaper mein khabar aay… sadu Sharma was romancing his wife khulam khula… OMG…

She said dramatically leaning on him walking to there car… he made her sit and drove back to home… informing maa that they are cuming back with nupur… he now or than was checking her… assuring she is fine…. But she who was leaning back with her eyes close opened it and frown irratatly

Mayank: kya hoa ur ok

Nupur: mayank tum kitni speed per chala rahy ho

Mayank: kyun tumhain ajeeb lag raha hai …sorry mein aur slow kerta hoo

Nupur: SLOW… are u mad… is se zayda taaz tu gadha (donkey) gari chalti hai.. for god sake speed up

Mayank: tumhara deemgh karab hogaya hai … and donot interrupt let me drive carefully.. jerks aay tu

Nupur: mayank plss…. Atleast 20 se uper tu jao … mein nhi kah rhi 80 km/hr chalo but alteast 60 per tu aao yaar… asay tu hum direct tumahry bachy ki birthday per pochy ga…

Mayank: he glared at her and she was hiding her smile… tum mera mazak ura rahi hoo

Nupur: nhi cuto… she pulled his cheek

Mayank: nupur ur distracting me…

She chukled and went near him and pecked his cheek

Nupur: kya kero ur looking so cutee…

Mayank: nupurr… tumhara deemgh karab hogaya hai kya… abh jerk lagta tu… jani pls be careful yaar

Nupur: clam down mayank .. mjhy kuch nhi hoga.. car drive se mjhy nausea nhi hota… u can speed up… itna slow maat chalo pls… ur a very carefull drive and u can take care of me n us… so trust on urself.

Mayank: I donot belive I can…

Nupur: mayankkk…she winced … it wasn't ur fault… and u DID saved us… tum ny hi bachaya na humain… plss

Mayank: pata nhi… chalo ghar agaya

The door was opened my her mom and she moved forward and hugged her tight..trying to sooth her pain…

Nupur: maa I m fine .. donot worry…

NM: tum sach mein sab ko dara diya nupur…

Nupur: per ab tu agai hoon na bulikl perfect ..

NM: sab thik hai tabiyat bhi …

She was touching her face lovingly …it has always been such .. evrytime she thinks tht she has got use to to see her daughter fighting the danger she fail to not be sacred for her…

Nupur: mom.. ap bilawahay asay ker rahi hoo

NM: han han teri beti jay gi na asay tu pocho gi

Mayank: meri beti khaini ni jarahi…

He almost shouted and they both look at eachother and laugh

Nupur: see us k pita shiri us ko kahini nhi jany day ga..

NM; han tu thik hai… koi zaroorat nhi hai.. us k ghardari seekhy gay aur phr achi se jaga us ki shadi ker k bhej day ga… hain na…

Mayank: mein ghar jami rekho ga… aur ap dono k zayda meri tang khichny ki zaroorat nhi hai..huh…

Nupur: aur mein bulkily perfect hoon… mom pls…

She was still checking her…

Mayank: han han bht perfect.. abhi behosh horahi thi…

NM: kya .. mayank is ko room mein lay jao… mein kuch khany ko bhejti hoon tum dono k liyan.. yeah tu jo hogi behosh tum bhi hojao ga…

Mayank: maaa..

Nupur: kyun mayank…. Tum bhi… hoo.. she said make her mouth in O and covering it with her hand teasingly tich tich…

Mayank: NUPURR… bht bol rahi hoon nah abhi batata hoon.. he pick her up.. and took her to their room and placed soflty on bed… placing sum pillows on her back…

She was tired she was really feeling drowsy..and now when she is being showered by his care she is feeling like being just like this… it was wonderful to be back with him.. nothing explain its joy..… she pressed her head and he came sat beside her.. caressing her head ..

Mayank: tabiyat thik nhi hai nah….

Nupur: she smiled and shifted her head to his shoulder…she missed it leaning on him… his caress.. his care… all she missed so much …. thik hoon bus kuch khaya nhi hai… islyan shayd asa feel horaha hai… aur phr tum bhi itny dino baad milay ho na..tu socha thora tu nakray kero nah…

Mayank: had hai nupur…. He kissed her head holding her close

Time was pasing and the only thing she was feeling was his continuous caress on her head and other hand holding her close ..resting his plam on his baby… he was dead silent and she knew ..mayank being so much silent is not good.. he needs to speak..t o let it go.. the more he will keep it to himself the more he is fighting with his pain his fear

Nupur: I was sacred too..

His hand stoped and he pulled her more close… wanting to stop her ..not to go back to the day tth has just passed…less than 24 hrs yet seems to be ages to be passed away.. evry min was killing him… evry second was painful..was death..but sumwhere she wants to let him know tht she was scared to literally she was..

Nupur: when they place their gun on my head… I thought I will never be able to see u.. more than tht I thought I will never let my child see the world.. will never let u feel him.. I was sacred u will hate me all ur life… u wont hate me for this… she said looking upto him with line of moisture…

And next she was in bone crushing hug of his… with his head dipped in her neck….

Mayank: how could u even think of tht.. can I even think of hating u …but u shouldn't have done this nupur… atleast behave as hostage … u shouldn't have taken the risk.. I know ..its ur duty to save all.. but for once I want u to think just about u… me.. our child… bus.. its scared me… it made me dead… knowing tht ur there I cant even go inside .. it was hell to behave like an officer… for once in my life I regret tht I was a officer not civilian…

Nupur: she made sum space and looked at him…cupping his face in her plam.. wiping a tiny tear tht was cuming out of his eyes.. mayank shedding a tear made her heart stoped right there … she knew wht it means… to the extend he must be broken… this job ..danger and his life.. all has made him rock solid.. this side has came even infornt of her for the first time

Nupur: u shouldn't be mayank… if u were not an officer … how would u have rescued ur wife…

Mayank: If I wouldn't have been an officer… I wasn't been in fear tht my wife life is in danger because of me… if parkah just once have got to know..he closed his eyes

Nupur: mein hoon na tumharay pas.. bulkily thik… aur woh sab bhi thik hai… socho kitny sary loog asay hi soch rahy hoga… aur kuch bhi tu nhi hua nah…

Mayank: mjhy koi farak nhi perta… I donot want to think like a mahan …. Samjhi tum…. Tum ainda as kuch nhi kero gi.. samjhi… asa kuch bhi nhi jis se tumhari life ko danger ho….. u cant even think, or think of doing anything tht make u go away from me.. u got it.. stop smiling im very serious abt this…

Nupur: maaynk

Mayank: promise me tht u will not

Nupur: MAYANKKK..

Mayank: no im not listening to u…

Nupur: fine .i have other ways to ..

He knitted his eyes browns and the they went wide.. and than he was lost to.. the way she kissed him, made him forgot everything.. and remember one thing she was there with him… with him she is here… he pulled her more close making it more deep.. crushing her in his arms.. and then broke away

Mayank: freak did I hurt u… I am sorry ur oky nah

Nupur: mayank I m fine… kuch nhi hua… pagla gay ho tum

She chuckled and he glared..

Mayank: I need to meet ur doctor..dos n don'ts ki list banao ga….

Nupur: tum us se kya kya pochny waly ho

Mayank: everything…. Pata tu ho sab… sab se zayda tu I can kiss n u know wht or not..or kya

Nupur: chup… tum akelay hi jao gay.. mein nhi jao gi tumahray sath… kuch tu sharam kerlo..

Mayank: acha abhi apny pati per khudtay hoay tu Sharma nhi aai thi….

Nupur: mera pati hai mein jo chahy kero.. mjhy haq hai..

Mayank: aay hay mein sadqay jao tumahry haq per….

He leaned to kiss her.. yet has to broke realize the knock on door… knowing it must be maa with food…

Mayank opened the door to be greeted by samrat n benji too who almost pushed him side way and went to nupur… followed by NM.. who he made entered taking away the tray of food…

Samrat: kasi ho bhabi… aur champ kasa hai..

Benji: kya champ champ lag rekha hai.. yaar humary ghr mein wasy hi larkiyoon ki kami hai… ek aur tu anay doo..

Nupur: agreed… sirf benji meray sath hai…

Bnji: I m bahabi jaan… he bowed down and took place next to her…

Nupur: tu thik hai…. She said looking at him holding his hand..he smiled and sigh

Benji: ya I m.. kinda… I really liked her.. but han never loved her… thts good

Mayank: tujh pata kab chala..

Benji: first second meet mein hi mjhy kuch shak hua tha..per phr socha police wala hoon islayn asa lag raha hai…. Phr dheeray dheeray kafi sari cheesay ajeeb lagi.. jasy mumbai mein delhi airport k map.. jo is ny baray arm se cover kerli baat…. Per yaha aker kafi sari baatein usk ghilaf horahi thi… jasay har bar jam mein us se jammer break kerny k kahao tu woh change hojtay hain… hotel k security break hoi.. tab the way she behave with me… she tired to seducse me.. and than jab mein ny dig in kiya tu security cameras waha ki hi wifi ko use ker k break kiya gaya…. Tu I was getting sure..lastly jab mein ny airport k jammer mein password dala tu sab clear hogaya…

Samrat: kya…

He smiled pitifully

Benji: I love benji..

Nupur closed her eyes and maaynk too sighed and press his hand on his shoulder..

Benji: pls woh us ny kaha tha nein ny nhi… so relax.. haan bora laga .. allah allah ker k ek larki hath aai thi woh bhi gai… manhooso tum logo ki kaali nazar hai…

Mayank n smarat smiled… he is too good but then they know he was hurt to

Benji: mein soch raha hoo bearded hojao..log mjhy seriously lay… lag ta hai waqi ya tu bht he dumb ho jo sab mjhy hi bewaquf banay k sochty hain…

Mayank: aur tu ny yeah sab humain kyun nhi bataya

Nupur: kasai baatein kerty ho mayank apany moo se koi bolta hai kya..

Mayank: is mein na bolny wala kya hai… hum dost hain

Nupur: phr bhi koi self respect hoti hai…

Samrat: is mei self repect ki kya baat hai yaar

Nupur: kyun ni hai.. ab koi apany moo se boly ga he is dum…

The all looked at her shocking and then laughed… even benji cant help to join them

Benji: this not fair I tell u…

Samrat: gosh ur soo back… he hugged her from side.. and the other side was mayank…

Benji: mein bhi tu hoon…

And he jumped from front

Mayank: aram se benji…

Benji: mjhy pata hai..itny dino se hum hi kayal rekh rahy thy.. zayda baap bany ki khoish na ker

Mayank: mein khoish nhi ker raha hoon .. mein hoon….

Benji: try kiya bighar hi.. yeah kasay hua

And this time it was nupur who smacked his head with a pillow..

Nupur: mjhy bhook lagi hai mjhy kaha doo..

Samrat: per tu ny nhi bataya ..k tu ny humain kyun nhi bataya

Benji: seriously I donot know yaar…. I was doubtful not sure tu bus… per ek masala hai…

Mayank: kya

Benji: hum us ko zayda din custody mein nhi rekh sakty

Samrat: humaray pass soobt nhi hain… she is involved in all this we cant claim…

Mayank: whtever… nhi hoga tu na sahi… she can be out.. hum try ker sakty hain..kahin se shayd humain soobot mil jay…plus officer k samny us ny confess kiya hai

Benji: woh aram se kah sakti hai k hum us ko in sab mein involve kerny ko ker rahy hain…

Samrat: let see to all this again..koi loop whole hoga… oye tum dono akelay akelay khao gay… hum bhi hain

NM: samrat pehly jao aur gunjan se baat kero..akeli hai woh waha…

Benji: kasa pati hai tu

Mayank: koi fikar hi nhi hai.. had hai.. khany per attack kerny per nazar hai… biwi ki koi iflar nhi ..very sad..

Samrat: he smiled at maaynk who was mischievously wiping off sumthing frm nupur's lips..at last things for fine…… dekho tu zara.. mayank Sharma ki smile kasay waps aai hai..

benji: woh bhi khulam khula romance k taraky k sath..

Mayank: tu meri biwi waps aai hai..woh bhi after long months… aur ap k finally forever..

Beni: but ek chees yeah diya agar parkah ki beti hai tu riya us ki biwi… I mean diya aur riya ki age mein kitna difference hoga

Nupur: thts wht I was thinking

Mayank: diya us k frst wife se hogi.. she died delivering diya… diya apni nani k sath hoti thi tu I nevr knew she is so old

Nupur: dhoka hua meray sath

Mayank: kya

Nupur: tumhari age kiya hai.. parakh riya were ur frnds … mein lut gai…

Mayank: nupurrr…. Parkah got married in his village at 17… diya was born when he was 19…. Aur woh mjhy se bara hai…had hai tumhari tu… han aur riya was his second wife..parakah se almost 10 years younger hogi.. she was such a sweetheart yaar..is parahak ki haraktoo ki wajha se

Nupur: per kya hoa tha

Benji: parkah k admi ny bhagny ki khoish kit u mayank ny riya ko pakara riya k hi khany per.. as woh chahti thi k parkah arrest ho aur wapas po*na wala ban jay yani honest halaky woh khabi bhi honest nhi tha..thora bht corrupt he was… tu parkah k admi ny aim mayank ko kiya but he missed n riya got shoot

Nupur: freak….

Mayank: we took her to hospital tried everything but..

Nupur: hmm tu islyn he is angry with u…

Benji: exactly..aur hato mjhy bhi khany do mera dil tuta hai mjhy extra milay ga////

……………….

The night he was catching up with all tht happened in Mumbai.. the will be leaving back home in a day or two.. Depending upon her health … he was getting all the info about her docs wht they said… wht not, how she feels, n wht things she is going thorough… watching her expression… looking at her glowing face..w ith all the excitement blushes and happiness was all tht he wants in his life forever.. he kissed her in between her continues talks making her frown and he chukling saying she was looking so cute he cant resist … with loads of argument he made her sleep… as hse was hell tired and need to take rest .. but he was nt able to remove his hand nor eyes from her baby bump … it was unbelievable and was giving him Goosebumps.. a life inside life.. was so amzing… he was even scred to go near and hear or talk yet after sumtime he bended..removing npurs head from his shoulder .. and went to his baby..

He was thinking wht to say

Mayank: kya baat kero… pehly usko batao tu mein kaun hoon… us ko mein koi dekh thori raha ho,.. point kitna confusing hota hoga… ankhein band mein log bateein ker rahy hain.. kaun kaun hai pata kasay chalta hoga..

Nupur whose sleep broke when he placed her head softly on pillow was having hard time controlling her laughter… ACP Sharma who solved the most difficult case just now… was appearing like such in delima.. amzing she said in her head… kitna socha hai usko dekhai nhi day raha hai… introduction tu banta hai..wah

Mayank: hmm better hai ..pehly mein introduce kerta hu… he literally clered his thorat… hi baby… this mayank…. i m ur dad..

She opened her eyes and her mouth was in O…. wht on this earth he is talking…. Amzing..this can be done just by sadu sharama

Nupur: aay bhagwan mjhy himat day… yeah kya hai.. bond james bond…

Mayank: tum soti kyun nhi ho.. he was so starlet by her voice

Nupur: asay ghuftogo suno gi na tu jag hi jao gi… mayank tu apny bachy se baat ker rahy ho ya… kisi head se… had hoti hai.. hi .. I m mayank .. mayank Sharma… nam tu suna hi hoga…

Mayank: meri marzi mein jasay chahy baat kero us se tum ko kya..he said sheepishly

Nupur: pyaar se baat kero us se…warna I will make sure woh apany kan band kerly..

Mayank: acha really aur tum asa kero gi kasay… tum asa ker hi nhi sakti

Nupur: mein kuch bhi ker sakti hoon… mein maa hoon… she said rising her hand in air

Mayank: tu ooh maa. Imitating her.. chup chap soajao mjhy baat kerny do..

Nupur: aay bhagwan mjhy himat day.. aur meray bachy ko sadupan se bacha

Mayank: nupur… tum soti kyun nhi ho…

Nupur: tum kyun nhi shotay ho taky mein bhi sojao…

Mayank: nhi sogo.. mjy baat kerni hai.. I have ..i mean we have to catch so much… I wanna know tum ny is ko kaun kaun se filmy dekh dkeh ker pakaya…

Haan so baby where were we..

Nupur: introduction per… is ko shak hai na k tum usk dad kasay ho.. maa itni cool ..baap namakul

Mayank: dekho beta apni maa ki batein bulkily nhi suna woh chahti hai k tum mjh se bulkily bhi interact na kero… u see she is kinda jealous…. Aamm din hotay tu I would have been cudling to ur mom.. n doing loads of think

Nupur: she smack his head… abcho k samny kasai baatein kerty ho tum

Mayank: mein ny kya bola..thinks mein talking bhi ata hai tum ko kya laga.. despo…

Nupur: maaynk phr se depso nhi…. Aur pls sahi se laito nah… mjhy suna hai… usko bhi sunay doo… she pouted..

Mayank: maan lo ur jealous of ur son..

Nupur: haan tu… ur not giving me attention… she pouted more.. and he chukled and pecked her pout…

Mayank: Mrs Sharma… yeah junior Sharma bhi apka aur senior bhi.. phr apko kis baat ki tension hai… apky chahny walo ki list mein tu ek aur k inclusion hony wala hai..

Nupur: rehny do ..jab se mein aai hoo tum sirf us se hi baat ker rahy ho…us k bara mein hi poch rahy hoo..meri pregnancy ..baby k doctor ..baby ki cheesay n all nothing for me…. U didn't missed me..

Mayank: aww…. Junior hum bad mein milty hain… han tu Mrs Sharma….really …

Nupur: aur nhi tu kya … tum ny mjhy dekha bhi nhi… mjhy se picha bhi nhi…

Mayank: he cupped her face ..mjhy pochny ki zaroorat nhi hai to know ur oky or not, u missed me or not, u feared or not… I can read it….

He said it with so much seriousness, and passion ..he was caressing her cheek with his thumb and she felt her eyes getting teary

Nupur: kafi filmy tha …

Mayank: hmm… per sach bhi hai… he kissed her softly and made her lye down… patting her head… ab sojao ur too tired to take all this… oky…

Nupur: hmm.. she cudle more to him

Life was back at its place…. With many thing happening.. where benji lost a part of his life…and mayank nupur got back to their life's… it was always not perfect ending.. it always about sumthing to gain and sumthing loss… yet at the end of the day..they know one thing..they all of eachother with them.. no matter how ever the day starts or end

THE END..

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Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

PHEw…

Season 3… I am actually amze to see tht this season is complete too.. and u all loved it so much to…

Im not sure I will write n epilogue to it or not… wasy I haven't planned one…

Thank u all for being here..loving this ff so much always.. and having interest in reading such concepts…

Love ya all waiting for ur comments..details this time please..silent readers pls do give ur words…

ANila kaha ho tum. ..

Ramzan Mubarak to all of u ….even for a time I have made u smile or have made u feel good pls pray for me … and if I have hurt u or touble u pls forgive me….

Take care…

Fiza Ahmed

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow. Such a beautiful end aapi
Bht excellent... keep writingg
Ek wpilogue toh banta hai na??;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very mnice. Plz write epilogue

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