Itihaaz gawaaah hai....

sareeta thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#1

Itihaaz gawaaah hai....ki premi kabhi nahin mile... jeete ji.. aur maut ne tho unhe ek kiya hai ya nahin , ye pata nahin... haan mana zaroor jaata hai ki unhe ek kiya hai...

Par sochne waali baat hai... ki agar zindagi ne unhe milaya nahin, tho maut ke naam par tho duniya judaai ki duhaai deti hai, tho unhe maut kya milayee....

Heer Ranjha, Romeo Juliet, Laila Majnu... and najaane kitne aur....inme se aise kaunse premi hai, jo jeeete ji khush reh paaye hai... jitna gehra pyaar, utni hi zyaada judaai aur doorie...

Agar khush rahe hai tho wo log, jo shaadi ke bandhan mein band gaye... aur chand palon ke liye sahi... khush tho the....

Tab yahaan ham yahaan Shiv aur Ipshita ki baat kar rahe hai... itna gehra pyaar, judaai tho laazmi hai.....

Itihaaz gawaah hai... Itihaaz gawaah hai....

-Sareeta

Created

Last reply

Replies

22

Views

1.3k

Users

10

Likes

1

Frequent Posters

pippa thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#2
Wah! Kya shayari ki aap ne! Aaj itihaas gawah hai ek nayi shayar ki janam!!

Move over, Javed Aktar, Amrtia Pritam and all the rest! Honestly! Why don't u seriously consider scriptwriting or lyrics writing, sareeta?

These lines are truly sublime and way too good for the Shiv/Ips rista that has an illicit underbelly to it.

Anyway loved reading it aloud.
Edited by pippa - 19 years ago
139271 thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#3
👏 👏 loved it!!! maybe we shud act as if we like shiv-ippy pair more than ShivGauri. and then ekta will surely split them up, since the couples we like she splits them up
Edited by shivgauri - 19 years ago
Nazrin thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#4
😆 👏 👏 wah wah wah wah .....sareetaji kya kikha hai.....👏 majah aa gaya......
i agree wid pippaji.....aur hume khushi hai k hum us itihaas ka ek hissa hai jo gawah hai is nayi shayer ki janam ki 😳
Edited by nazrinkhan - 19 years ago
illuminated. thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 19 years ago
#5
👏 i am speechless....as always at ur AWESUM shayari....TUSSI GR8 HO JEE 👏 luved it PUREY DIL SE.......keep up he GR8 work sareeta dii 👏




Saraa
JCluvs srk thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 19 years ago
#6
oy hoy.....kya baat hai yaar
3 angels thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#7
sareeta kya baat hein... 😊

mein bhi wah wah karti houn iss kubsoorat shayri ke liye..

aur wah wah aap kho bhi sareeta..

awesome and great lines ..just superb... 👏 👏 👏

totally agree with pippa these lines are totally sublime ..

i agree with her on this too... "Shiv/Ips rista that has an illicit underbelly to it".

agree with the others also ithihaas gawaah hein ek nayi shayar ki janaam ka...

saachi sareeta how i wish ekta and her team have the chance to read your thoughts and the replies which have so much depth and truth in them..

at least they can learn something good from your writings...

keep it up sareeta...really appreciate reading your thoughts.. 😊 👏

vcool thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: 3 angels

totally agree with pippa these lines are totally sublime ..

i agree with her on this too... "Shiv/Ips rista that has an illicit underbelly to it".

agree with the others also ithihaas gawaah hein ek nayi shayar ki janaam ka...

saachi sareeta how i wish ekta and her team have the chance to read your thoughts and the replies which have so much depth and truth in them..

at least they can learn something good from your writings...


wah wah wah....sweety!!!!👏👏👏, and sooo agree wid 3angels cudnt have said it better😃, i also hope ekta can read ur thoughts and replies so that she can know wat true talent is😳!!! awesome sareeta simply awesome!👏👏👏

sareeta thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: pippa

Wah! Kya shayari ki aap ne! Aaj itihaas gawah hai ek nayi shayar ki janam!!

Move over, Javed Aktar, Amrtia Pritam and all the rest! Honestly! Why don't u seriously consider scriptwriting or lyrics writing, sareeta?

These lines are truly sublime and way too good for the Shiv/Ips rista that has an illicit underbelly to it.

Anyway loved reading it aloud.

Gosh ! Pippa Ji, aap ne tho aaaaaj itnin tareef kardi , ki mujhse itni khushi sambhli nahin jaa rahi...( ahoi... why am I sounding like Gauri... eeeks!! Waise bhi Gauri se aaj kuch bhi sambhla nahin jaa raha.. na khushi( hai kya?) na gham... )

Ahem... THank you sooooooooooo much for the kind words!! Ayyyoo script writing and me... aap mazaak kar rahe ho..? I do not think I can hold on to a train of thought that can transcend into a full fledged script...

Am so glad you enjoyed.. it..

Aur Javed Ji and Amrita Preetam, might have a good laugh, in Gabbar singh style..."Yeh kaun hai re , jisne humse panga liya..." and I will be a little bheegi billi!! 😆

sareeta thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: shivgauri

👏 👏 loved it!!! maybe we shud act as if we like shiv-ippy pair more than ShivGauri. and then ekta will surely split them up, since the couples we like she splits them up

Hey thanks a lot , am so glad you enjoyed it....Know what we dont have to act... Shiv and Ippy will not be together for they love each other tooooooooo much.... itihaaz gawaah hai na... Pyaar kiya... tho no milan...!!! 😆

And they even forgot abt Anaakali's saying.."Pyar kiya tho darna kya.." yeh dono tho philhaal wahi kar rahe hai... dar rahe hai...

Time to get Gabbar uncle...who will explain... "Jo dar gaya ..samjho mar gaya..."😆

Tho Gabbar uncle ke hisaab se Ipshi maregi , kyonki wo dar rahi hai..!!!

Ok, that was totally haywire.. but anyways!! 😆

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".