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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Sushiii!!! Lovely update ❤️!
I absolutely love the build-up to JaGan love story. Its awesome !
What I found really cute is the way she refers to him as Docsa 😆 Indo-Western fusion 😉!
Ratan Singh really seems like an advanced villain to track all their movements. And its a good thing Jagya has sensed something wrong is going to do some investigating himself.
Looking forward to the next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Libra123

Sush.. Awesome .. Continue.. Like it the way the main story is running in the front ground and sanchi running in the background.l I wish the serial goes this way... But in the serial main story jagya Ganga is running in the back ground and anandi, sanchi, Shekhars story running in the front ground...


rama 🤗
i am very happy that u liked it 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zephyr29

Sushiii!!! Lovely update ❤️!

I absolutely love the build-up to JaGan love story. Its awesome !

What I found really cute is the way she refers to him as Docsa 😆Indo-Western fusion 😉!

Ratan Singh really seems like an advanced villain to track all their movements. And its a good thing Jagya has sensed something wrong is going to do some investigating himself.


Looking forward to the next...


thanks zephy 🤗
ratan the evil😈

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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

she was about to go he stopped her,"I have been observing what happened to you why are you looking so lost?Is there any problem please tell me ,I will solve it.."he asked.


"When the right time comes ,I will tell you for sure,"she said the words and left .


He was diappointed..

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part 5:
"what's wrong with ganga? Now this is irritating me, why she doesn't want to share it with me."he was angry and disappointed.He want to protect her from every danger,he cares for her safety.
Lal singh was observing restless Jagya,he did a noise as if he correcting his throat and said,"what happened?"."Nothing lal, have you observed ganga, she is looking lost since Mannu's b'day. She actually cried out that day,thanks to sponge bob.."he remembered the moment and smiled
Lal asked,"then.." ,jagya continued,"In the car,she was looking sad.., I asked her and she replied her that she will tell me at the 'right time'.. what shall i do know?".
Lal was happy may be somewhere his lost friend was back,he was finding joy in small things.. coming out of thoughts lal heard his voice again ,"Lets go for sight seeing tomorrow, you, me ganga,nandu .."."Only us , fine then.. this is something better.." jagya said."lets leave morning itself.."
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Ganga was also in not so happy mode ,she don't want to tell him anything about ratan singh to doctersaaheb and any of his family members.
She got the fb of the moment happened few minute ago,his eyes were asking her ,"what happened to you ganga?" but she couldn't give answer... his disappointed face gave her extreme pain.."why are you not telling me?" his eyes were questioning her but she couldn't reply..
She came out of thoughts,splashed some amount of water on her face."I will not tell doctersaa" she was telling this to herself many times.
she took the mobile in her hand ,the mobile started ringing."Hello" she said in a normal asusual tone without even a trace of fear in the voice.
"Kyun beendini ,how is udaipur, oh sorry you din't visit any place right..." he asked ."you have fallen even low in my eyes Ratan singh,a boy you are trying o take revenge from a boy,shame on you.."she said .
"everything is fair in love and war, it is all happening because of you if you have come with me that day itself would all this happen, you ,me and our son 'mannu' would have been happily living in laxmigunj.."he said.
"Don't even try to take his name, you are not a man that's why you are taking all this stupid methods to harm others and win the war," she was almost shouting ,"If you are dare enough this time hurt me, put me in danger that too infront of everyone."she was challenging him.
"wish granted,"he said and he cut the call.Ganga was shocked ,"what have I done?"she cursed herself.
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"Is everything ready?" ratan singh asked his men."yes, master." they said and left the place.Ratan gave a evil grin.
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NEXT DAY MORNING:
Jagya got up as early as possible, he stood infront of ganga's room.He was about to knock the door, just then she opened the door.Just a hit on her head missed,"sorry.. sorry.." he said in a exciting tone, she was feeling sleepy,"what docsaa. ?" she asked.
"Looks like my idea of early morning escape is failure,"he thought to himself."we will go for sight seeing afternoon. I don't want to listen 'no" thats itt"he ended and returned to his room.
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Ganga was helping in cooking breakfast.DS,Sumi and Gehna were engrossed in the conversation with Anandi. Jagya was playing with Mannu.
sanchi just woke up and asked for coffee,Ganga made it it was not in the way she drinks, she looked around Jagya was looking at ganga, he was asking for water,"I will bring jagdish" sanchi took the glass and ran towards him.
Lal singh controlled his laughter,"excuse me." he said and left the place."So jagdish ,any plans today?" she asked him."yes, i mean no. why?" he was stammering .No matter how sweet she talks he always felt awkward while talking to her, may be on the earth the only person she talks properly is with him. but he can't forget the question she asked about Anandi in sankrantri celebrations.
"I want to gift Mahi bhaiyya , I must order a boquet, we both will go."asked sanchi."Go jagadish, buy something from ourside also "said dadisa.He can't say 'no' to Dadisaa."Ganga you also come with us " jagya asked."I have lots of work to do,"said ganga"Choori ,after that press my feet too.they are really aching," DS ended.
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Edited by sushiani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
@sush.. Beautiful .. Continue.. But do make Ganga go with docsa...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Libra123

@sush.. Beautiful .. Continue.. But do make Ganga go with docsa...


thanks rama... 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shankythebest

Sush,amazing.Loved it.Update soon.


from now i will update soon..
thanks shanky🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Very good update, Sushi!
Awww poor Jagya! Kya plan banaya aur kahaan phas gaya 😆!
Sanchi is looking for chance to get Jagya for herself, Ganga is so preoccupied that she doesn't want to come and Lal Singh is thoroughly enjoying the proceedings 😆.
So Ratan Singh will attack soon. Hope Sanchi is the one who becomes victim by mistake 😈!
Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zephyr29

Very good update, Sushi!
Awww poor Jagya! Kya plan banaya aur kahaan phas gaya 😆!
Sanchi is looking for chance to get Jagya for herself, Ganga is so preoccupied that she doesn't want to come and Lal Singh is thoroughly enjoying the proceedings 😆.
So Ratan Singh will attack soon. Hope Sanchi is the one who becomes victim by mistake 😈!
Waiting for next part.

thanks zephy😳
@bold- lagta hai sanchi ne tumhe bahut irritate kiya😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sushiani

thanks zephy😳

@bold- lagta hai sanchi ne tumhe bahut irritate kiya😆

Ye poocho ki when doesn't she irritate 😡 😵 🤢!

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