SS I Will Fulfill Them All Chap 3 Update Pg 9 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: mandygill



goli nahin maarte toni..eye candy to zabardast hai bas acting damdaar kar le..tu bhi iska show dekhna phir kehna kaisa laga😳



main show kaha dekhi ..main toh uski neck and face deka ...😆 but show ka story wory kuch khasnahi tha ...konsa show me ah raha hai oh ..😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: -B.N.K-



main show kaha dekhi ..main toh uski neck and face deka ...😆 but show ka story wory kuch khasnahi tha ...konsa show me ah raha hai oh ..😳😳😳



savitri from life ok, his scenes will start from next week!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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tony mandy ,..i agree ashish acting me zero hai ...but then he is learning ...rolf...ab har koi Gautam nahi ho sakta na ...lol

he is coming in savitri ...am not much excited abt story of the show...i dint like it...just want to see how ashish looks ...and how stry moves...will give him a chance at least

mustache ...arry nahi ...i dont like it much...hope they dont make cartoon out of him...lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shana0127

tony mandy ,..i agree ashish acting me zero hai ...but then he is learning ...rolf...ab har koi Gautam nahi ho sakta na ...lol

he is coming in savitri ...am not much excited abt story of the show...i dint like it...just want to see how ashish looks ...and how stry moves...will give him a chance at least

mustache ...arry nahi ...i dont like it much...hope they dont make cartoon out of him...lol



😆pata nahin shana kya karega aur kaisa dikhega..lets hope for the best! i just watched the show out of curiosity, i was like..ye kaisa show hai🤪
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Posted: 12 years ago
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All I can Say is.. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: -bornalee-

res

unres sorry for being late😳

first part is so emotional,wen i was reading for first time i had tears in my eyes😭(i read d first part long ago,d day u posted it but due to my ghatiya net cudnot log in n comment on it )
the first line itself gave me goosebumps
His present name gave him life , kept him breathing.But today he did want to live ,he did not want to breath, he just wanted to go into an endless sleep , a permanent samadhi.

Today he lost it all .His past ghosts his , self reluctance costed him most precious thing .The lady that had brought oasis in his deserted life was now a mirage .He saw her leaving to her new house ,new family and a new man.They said he was very rich and his family well cultured.Good for her ,she will live amongst human and not the conniving foxes .Now she had a man who will be by her side always and not someone who always wants her by his side .

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

2nd part is also superb..he made a new identity dev..now he lives for devs family..m eager to knw how he will meet kumud n free her from tat jallad pramad(😡)


ps:but madam dnt leave this ss in a mid way like u did to ur previous work..😡
mstill waiting for ur tat ff wer kumud has a daughter n she has lost her memory..aapko yaad hei???😆



yes yes yaad hai ...but that ss is too futuristic ...i found people hard to connect with it...will continue with this one ...coz its more nera to the novel at present

will continue that old one when thiss ss matures 😆

just wait for next chapter he will have his first meeting with kumud and jallad pramad too 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67

Chapter 3





It was stormy night . Dev and his family were drenched as they made their way to the well-lit beautiful Dhan Laxmi Mansion that stood stern and high at ParkVilla Road ,Mumbai. Geeta and Reema were awed to see the well maintained gardens and the fountain it had in the center.

'Bhaiya they must be really very rich naa', blurted Reema the youngest sister.

'Yes they r rich ' Dev replied as he groped for the keys in his pocket.

Mr. Vidya Dhan his employer had requested him to stay at his place. He had offered him and his family there newly renovated out house till they had searched good accommodation for him and his family. Accepting the offer was difficult but then Dev had no choice. His employer worked from home and temporarily employed as his assistant. Temporary because they said he suited to be a manager but at present they needed an assistant.

Reema and Geeta rushed in as soon as he opened the doors .They jumped out of happiness. This new house was like their dream house .It had modern lights ,all walls painted a well-furnished strange looking kitchen .Shower wala baheroom and above all now they had their saperate bedrooms.

Bhaiya the house is so big na ! ' the girls exclaimed.

Yes ' he smiled at them and looked around the house . The house was a decent one though too good to be an outhouse. It was good for time being but he needed to search a new one soon.

'First unpack and make some tea 'commanded Shanti devi. She had been silent all through the journey .Coming to the city was a difficult decision .She had started hating it since her only son died .But she could not say no when her new found son requested her . This new anglic man now had her sons name .He was now her Dev and she was proud of it. It was she who requested him to accept the job as Dev Chandra Shastri. She knew it was strange but somewhere it made her feel that by this her dead son will have what he always wanted .

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He chose the corner bedroom .It was silent and peaceful .He opened the window and saw beautiful moon shining out of clouds. The rain had stopped but clouds still covered the stars and moon peeped out now and then. He breathed in the fresh air and sighed. Life !

Something caught his eyes .Across the garden was the main mansion where Dhan family lived .His window somehow gave the direct view of the rooms at second storey of the mansion .It was late night but still a room had the lights on .The windows of that room were open too. He looked carefully and tried to visualize the thing at the window .it was some woman .She looked carefully .She had long hairs flowing down her shoulders ,she was peeping out of the window to look at the moon. The silent night and the shimmering moonlight made her seem like a beautiful nymph staring at the moon with wind playing with her long hairs.

He was struck .Am I dreaming ! She is so much like '.he thoughts trailed away. He shut the window behind him and sank in the bed .

Oh Kumud .Is their a way to forget u ?

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It was six o clock in the morning .She rose from her bed .One more morning in life .One more day to go. Life had been a daily ritual for her since she came in Dhan family. They all loved her. She was a dutiful bahu and assumed to be a dutiful wife too. Alas! she never had her husband in nights. He was always at some very important meeting and she always knew where and with whom. Infact everybody in house knew it but nobody spoke. It had taken few months for her to realize why her husband never had time for her even on their wedding night but now she was used to it. This is the life she herself chose and she was bound to be happy with it.

She looked at Radha Shyam , lit the lamp and sang her morning aarti. She was always alone when she sang ,alone with her Shyam lost in him. She heard the foot steps .Her family has come .She turned to give aarti. As ususal her father in law was there. His eyes filled with joy and pride as he saw Kumud Sundari his prized bahu. A trophy he won over his rival Laxmi Nandan .

He took the aarti and sighed .If only his son knew what gem he had at home.

'Has pramad come back home', he asked .Why do I ever ask he thought to himself. Dont I know the answer !

Kumud nodded in no ,her eyes lowered . She walked to her mother in law and gave her the aarti.

'Kumud beta .My new assistant is joining us from today. i want u to help him with work ' requested Vidyadhan .Instantly changing the topic and coming direct at business.

His wife Mandakini looked at him curiously ' R u in ur minds ? U r asking our ghar ki bahu to wok with that stranger'

' Yes I have too. All thanks to your loved son who does not care for his father.I have to work for politics too mandakini and business is going out of my hand. I need help.'

'I know .U need help ', snapped his wife , 'But then did not u say , this new assistant u have hired is a brilliant one. So let him handle it. Why drag my bahu into it.

'Beacause now its your bahu who knows most of my business .I want somebody from family to guide him initially. Later he will handle it on our behalf. '

' And what about Bua ji .She is coming from teerth yatra and she will always want Kumud bahu for help', complained his wife.

'U and ur Bua ji ', puffed Vidyadhan ' Have a new servant for her .I need my intelligent bahu to take care of my business '.

Mandakini Devi had no answer to it. She loved her son. But then she knew his weaknesses. It was greatness of bahu who never complained and had everything silently. Otherwise which woman would bear another woman in her mans life. But her bahu never complained. Sometimes her silence her forbearance did worry her but then she had no way out.

They had already cheated on Desai family by not telling the truth of their son. Just because they thought having beautiful and intelligent bahu like Kumud will change everything.But what she failed to understand was that there son had gone so far away from them. So much indulged and lost in love of a bar girl that he could not see the virtues of Kumud .

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Vidya Dhan was an ambitious man. He had a successful business and now he had a thriving political career too. He had expected his son Pramd Dhan to help him but seeing his disinterest in business and politics he had decided he will bring an able bahu for the family and Kumud Sundari was an able bahu for Dhan family. Now he had his hopes on her. She was intelligent and had a knack with business. He had assigned her most of his business duties irrespective of constant complaining and whining of his wife, whom he knew will never give up at her worthless son.

Kumud helped her father in law Vidya Dhan in his study which was now his home office. Kumud had been assisting him with his work. But this was not enough. Vidya Dhan had to do go out on campaigns and it became difficult for kumud to handle his business duties all alone along with household duties. it was she who had asked her father in law to appoint an assistant and he was here now.

She had not expected to work with him. But then she will have to initially and then she can hand over the duties to him and be free .

She heard the knock at the door and looked at her father in law.he nodded and she answered to come in while she lifted the pile of files to arrange them in rack.

The man came in.Dressed smartly in formal pants and shirts with black cotton blazer.

Vidyadhan smiled at the young man with acknowledgment.He was proud to have him work for himself.He was always proud to hire the best and this young man was the best.His honest bright eyes had made him sure he had the right man for his work.

'Hello Mr. Dev Chandra Vyas .Welcome to my office.', and then he pointed to the lady who was busy arranging the files

'Meet my bahu Kumud Sundari.She will be helping u with work'

The very name struck him like a thunder and he felt his legs go limp when she turned to face him.

She was the lady dressed simply in saree but looked elegant .


Her face turned white when she saw him.he could see the sudden anger brewing up in her eyes.Her hands shivered and she let the files fall abruptly.

'Are u ok bahu ', called Vidyadhan who could not decipher the reason behind her trambling hands.

'Yes pitaji , i am fine.' She tried no rush out of room . But the phone rang.

'Bahu pick it up and say I am on my way', requested Vidyanath who was preparing to leave

Kumud obliged, 'Ji Pitaji'.

'Bahu help Dev he is new .I will see u both in the evening'. Vidya Dhan made his way out leaving his daughter in law and new employee unknown to the actual tension brewing between them.

He picked up the files and started arranging them in shelves.

Kumud snatched the files from his hands and blasted 'What r u doing here? In my house'.

He knew what she meant and replied calmly 'I did not know its your sasural'.

'O really Mr Saraswati Chandra, Oh I am sorry u have a new name , Devchandra ! 'she taunted.

'I never lie u know that', he said with an obvious nod.

His calm was killing her . 'I don't know anything about u ', she shrieked

'But then u still know my real name don't u '

'Yes I know ur real name and I wont let imposters in my house', she fumed.

'As u wish go and tell ur loving Pitaji , who I am and when they ask how u know me tell the truth as well. Beacause I know u too don't speak lies.

She grinded her jaws ,her cheeks reddened with anger. Bearing this man was getting impossible for her.

She could not think straight and suddenly her mind echoed with dreadful memories of past. She marched out of room .Her thin body shaking heavily.

He looked at her .She had not yet forgotten him her anger was immense.

Crash

The crashing sound broke the trail of his thoughts .He looked and saw that Kumud had stumbled down the lamp. He rushed to help .But the frail lady was in no mood of taking his help. He picked up the broken lamp to make way for her.But shattered pieces of lamp glass were scattered everywhere .She stood up to walk . He looked at her feets .No sleepers. She has always been like this . She never wore sleepers in house. Why he never knew. He tried to stop her but all in vain .She stubbornly walked through them .At last he grabbed her forcibly and made her sit on the sofa.

'Let me get this cleaned first. Then u may go ' he said trying to maintain his calm and continued with cleaning of shattered glasses.

Kumud sat wincing in pain .She tried to pick out the glass that had pricked in her feet. Saras tried his best to ignore her and continued with his work. He knew she wont let him help, Instead would walk on glasses once more. So better it was to let her do her task.

He searched for first aid box and found it under the desk. He slowly placed it by her side and stayed away. Suddenly his eyes caught hold of her feet .He looked in shock she seemed to have deliberately rummaged her legs on broken glasses. It was now unbearable for him not to feel her pain.

Impossible, she had no right to put herself in pain like this.

He took her feet and tried to take out the bits of glasses she tried to push away his hands .But his hold was strong adamant to do the task so she had other way out she gnawed her nails into him his arm making him wince

He did not care. She had always been stubborn he knew that but this time she was trying to make it feel .

He slowly picked out all bits and then bandaged her feet while she stiffly stuck to sofa her stern face rummaged with tears.

He looked at her stiff composure and took a deep breath. 'U have every right to hate me Kumud .i deserve it but I give u know rights to hurt yourself

'Who r u to give me rights.' She sashed in rage 'U r nobody to me Mr Saraswatichandra . I hate u and know ways to hurt u too.', her side lips twitched as she continued 'hurting myself is the best way to do so'.

He was shocked to hear such words from kumud and his heart melted in self guilt as he saw her limp out of the room.


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Shana


Chapter 4


(Next weekend )



Edited by shana0127 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww its awesome shana..🤗
the whole scenario was playing in front of my eyes while reading..
that part wen he saw someone beside d window..my heart skipped a bit..
here i wanna thank mr vidya dhan for arranging the meeting between this love birds😳

the last part was marvelous 👏 i dnt hv words to describe..the pain the hurt was visible..they still love each other n kumud she knows he loves her n wat his weakness..aww😭 😭
but there was something missing u knw..tat feeling of togetherness & love tat was missing..
n i felt tat in ur ss, good job👏 👏
all the while "lootera" sad background score was playing in my head😆
its like a spoiler for us😳

update soon..
waiting..

Edited by -bornalee- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waw waw waw!!! they met...😳😛 .Its wonderful... I am excited I cant wait more... This is going in a very nice nd pleasant way...
great responsibility is on ur shoulder.Time takes to heal the pain .The romace needs to blossom from the begining...
I guess these are gonna b in the forthcoming episodes of SC.
You are doing a nice job.. Nice writing style.Nice going..👏👏
Watching SC is giving a little pain now a days, But reading ur SS gives me pleasure and feel comfortable... I am enjoying every bit of it...😳
Plz update soon.. :)
Waiting ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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shana a big🤗 from me for such a beautiful piece of writing..desperately waiting for the next chapter😊

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