SS I Will Fulfill Them All Chap 3 Update Pg 9

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Mrs.Toni Rode Vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: shana0127

quizz to ab leni padegi ...sweeti bata saras ka new name kya hai 🤣

uska naya naam karan hui ..OMG ..😳😳

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ILTHBEB

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Mujha nahi pata tha..u r a gud writer..well i wl read ur ss frm now..but may b u won't get regular comment..uskai liya advance sorry.

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-bornalee-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

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unres sorry for being late😳

first part is so emotional,wen i was reading for first time i had tears in my eyes😭(i read d first part long ago,d day u posted it but due to my ghatiya net cudnot log in n comment on it )

the first line itself gave me goosebumps

His present name gave him life , kept him breathing.But today he did want to live ,he did not want to breath, he just wanted to go into an endless sleep , a permanent samadhi.

Today he lost it all .His past ghosts his , self reluctance costed him most precious thing .The lady that had brought oasis in his deserted life was now a mirage .He saw her leaving to her new house ,new family and a new man.They said he was very rich and his family well cultured.Good for her ,she will live amongst human and not the conniving foxes .Now she had a man who will be by her side always and not someone who always wants her by his side .

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

2nd part is also superb..he made a new identity dev..now he lives for devs family..m eager to knw how he will meet kumud n free her from tat jallad pramad(😡)

ps:but madam dnt leave this ss in a mid way like u did to ur previous work..😡

mstill waiting for ur tat ff wer kumud has a daughter n she has lost her memory..aapko yaad hei???😆

Edited by -bornalee- - 12 years ago

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-bornalee-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: shana0127

quizz to ab leni padegi ...sweeti bata saras ka new name kya hai 🤣

shana humi ki class le rahi hei kya😆 😆

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: -B.N.K-

uska naya naam karan hui ..OMG ..😳😳

i willgive u to dino uncles if ever u take that name here ye saras aur gautam ki duniya hai 😡 kisi khakre bechne wale ki nahi 😆

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SHANA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: nabiii
Mujha nahi pata tha..u r a gud writer..well i wl read ur ss frm now..but may b u won't get regular comment..uskai liya advance sorry.

its ok nabii read when u have time ...i too write when i have time 😃