SS I Will Fulfill Them All Chap 3 Update Pg 9 - Page 9

Originally posted by: -B.N.K-

chapter 1

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First i thought that is pramad and he just died and I was thinking how predictable of u saras phakie😆 then u just gave me a jhatka saying its some other dude who just took saras's death and gave him his life to saras .and the name is kanhaiya ..the chaliya ...😭 (actually i m happy bcz he is there to do his chal ..im literally crying of happiness ) he saved my saras and showed him a way ...and i was hooked shana ...😭😭 😭 koi toh aoo meri saras ko sahi rasta dekhaoo in that real show 😭😭

then

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to be honest i did not understand the need of that two sis ..or that mom, may b u have something in mind .but true mango tree ...u know shana i have 5 mango tree back in my country ..😆 its gonna sound over dramatic i was visualizing him there in our yard ..loved it 👏

He smiled at himself as his new assumed name was called for.

i kinda show this line in my head and u know what that do to me .
but yeh who do u need that two side actress ...budget jayada hai kya 😆😆

chapter -3

this chapter made me realize that i m in denial that i dont care if kumud get married to someone ...


Oh Kumud .Is their a way to forget u ?

the reason im being late bcz of that ..i cried on that line ...really is there any way for him to forget her shana 😭😭 ...what the hell i started watching this show ...why the hell they picked jen ...why why why 😭

next part ki liye ak week .🤔..tujhe nhi paat tune kisko invite kiya yaar ...aj se spamming chaloo ...humare mange puri karooo ..

chapter 4 post karoo 😡😭😒

Originally posted by: -bornalee-

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aww its awesome shana..🤗

the whole scenario was playing in front of my eyes while reading..

that part wen he saw someone beside d window..my heart skipped a bit..

here i wanna thank mr vidya dhan for arranging the meeting between this love birds😳

the last part was marvelous 👏 i dnt hv words to describe..the pain the hurt was visible..they still love each other n kumud she knows he loves her n wat his weakness..aww😭 😭

but there was something missing u knw..tat feeling of togetherness & love tat was missing..

n i felt tat in ur ss, good job👏 👏

all the while "lootera" sad background score was playing in my head😆

its like a spoiler for us😳

update soon..

waiting..

Originally posted by: shana0127

u did not feel the togetherness coz there was no togetherness...i deliberately made that scene crass placid...no lovey dovey saras and no love lorn kumud...coz kumud now is a a egoistic , cynical, hardened daughter in law of a strong political family... and saras all new person for whom his past is dead and buried and one who lives for his new adopted family

...so now the love will blossom in all new forbidden way

...a restart step by step once again...read the prologue ...i just made bony and u will know what this ss is all about

Originally posted by: shana0127

omg u read it so carefully...fist chapter is ..yes a bit complex...will make it easy for others now...many did not understand it...may be it was too high level 😆

that mango tree ! ...i love my countryside too ...whenever i go to India...i always try to visit my village and feel at home seeing those green mango trees and peacocks which often come at our roofs...so sent saras there to have some quality time 😆...so u too have mango trees 😃

those extra girls and maa...well wanted Orfen saras to have a family ...plus i have my own plots ...dont worry they will come and go...what will remain is saras and his kumud 😆

thanks tony...i feel so so good by reading ur comment ...its a prized encouragement for me

yaar tony ...my German classes take lot of time plus household work ...so i write a paragraph or two everyday depending on mood and then finally update it on weekend ...so dear u will have to wait...promise u will get a quality chapter with all passion and drama 😃

Originally posted by: arshicritic

Shana,

Loved it so much, you have captured the intensity of Samud meeting so well, can't wait for chapter 4 now. 👏