SS I Will Fulfill Them All Chap 3 Update Pg 9

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SHANA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: kittenlover
waw waw waw!!! they met...😳😛 .Its wonderful... I am excited I cant wait more... This is going in a very nice nd pleasant way...
great responsibility is on ur shoulder.Time takes to heal the pain .The romace needs to blossom from the begining...
I guess these are gonna b in the forthcoming episodes of SC.
You are doing a nice job.. Nice writing style.Nice going..👏👏
Watching SC is giving a little pain now a days, But reading ur SS gives me pleasure and feel comfortable... I am enjoying every bit of it...😳
Plz update soon.. :)
Waiting ...

'thanks dear...present sc is giving me headache so i sat and wrote my version...yes it will be somewhat like this in future ...but u see i just cant wait ...lol

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SHANA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: mandygill
shana a big🤗 from me for such a beautiful piece of writing..desperately waiting for the next chapter😊

thanks mandy ...tera next chapter kahan hai...mine will come next weekend now 😊

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Sarah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Hey shana glad to see you are back! But where you disappeared?your writing always amaze me... You are getting perfect as a writer with each update... i hope to see a pm for manveer ff as well :)miss you :D

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SHANA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: MsLuscious
Hey shana glad to see you are back! But where you disappeared?your writing always amaze me... You are getting perfect as a writer with each update... i hope to see a pm for manveer ff as well :)miss you :D

thanks dear its so good to see old friends back 😊

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Mrs.Toni Rode Vyas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

chapter 1

👏 👏 👏
First i thought that is pramad and he just died and I was thinking how predictable of u saras phakie😆 then u just gave me a jhatka saying its some other dude who just took saras's death and gave him his life to saras .and the name is kanhaiya ..the chaliya ...😭 (actually i m happy bcz he is there to do his chal ..im literally crying of happiness ) he saved my saras and showed him a way ...and i was hooked shana ...😭😭 😭 koi toh aoo meri saras ko sahi rasta dekhaoo in that real show 😭😭

then

chapter -2

to be honest i did not understand the need of that two sis ..or that mom, may b u have something in mind .but true mango tree ...u know shana i have 5 mango tree back in my country ..😆 its gonna sound over dramatic i was visualizing him there in our yard ..loved it 👏

He smiled at himself as his new assumed name was called for.

i kinda show this line in my head and u know what that do to me .
but yeh who do u need that two side actress ...budget jayada hai kya 😆😆

chapter -3

this chapter made me realize that i m in denial that i dont care if kumud get married to someone ...

Oh Kumud .Is their a way to forget u ?

the reason im being late bcz of that ..i cried on that line ...really is there any way for him to forget her shana 😭😭 ...what the hell i started watching this show ...why the hell they picked jen ...why why why 😭

next part ki liye ak week .🤔..tujhe nhi paat tune kisko invite kiya yaar ...aj se spamming chaloo ...humare mange puri karooo ..

chapter 4 post karoo 😡😭😒

Edited by -B.N.K- - 12 years ago