will u be mine forever ?yes or no?32pg43

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hey first of all i would like to thank all my readers for married to me ?my first ff.i would like to thank all the writteers who has inspired me to write and write.if any scene or anything resemble ur ff,pls writer ,don't think that i copied but think i took it as a inspiration.presently i will only write two ff.first one i have already post 3 parts .i will write the next part later.pls bear wit me...

this srtory start when jai scolds for working her for after nites and she cries coming out having the check and massi convince her to use the check .then in the night in bani's room she was sitting and crying sitting down in the floor and head was in the bed. she cried all the times and felt sleep keeping the head on the bed and her one hand was over the bed . jai suddenly felt thirst and no water in jug and asual scolded tony for not keeping the water and went out to drink water when he was passing bani's room he saw her bedroom door was open .he slowly peeped inside and saw the position how bani was sleeping and was murmurning under his nose that how irresponsible she is and etc.. and entered her room slowly. he went near bani to see what she upto?he saw her sleeping ,one hand on her stomach and one hand on the bed his eyes suddenly felt over the diary near by and it was open he first thought it is bad habbit to read others diary but he wanted to read it as something from inside said to that so he could may be know the truth.he first picked bani up in his arms.she in her sleep just felt warm and cuddled him and gently made her sleep over bed .he saw her innonce and was amazed by her beauty.she did not change her cloths.he then slowly picked up the diary and went and sat in his room and started reading it. Hh started to read by one by one from first .he came to now about the pia and puskar's love story and the cd and why she had to hit ranveer in the head and why she returned to wm after soo much of insults.and she also wrote that how jai must have felt when his marriage thing happen and how she was feeling guilty for not saying the truth at first about pia and puskar and some how she considered herself for jai's behaviour towards her sis after marriage as she would have said him the truth .this wouldn't have happen and when she left him and how sad she was feeling and when she came to know about the park road raaz,her pregnancy and last about the ranveer and jig 's plan about jai's property and she was doing it only to save his property.and today when jai scoled her and insulted her offering his money and how she felt it..

at the end munna's eyes was fill with tears .he felt so guilty for treating bani like that and when he read about her to jai he was like ,no one has loved him soo much not even roshini.. he first got really angry and decided to go jig and ranveer and give them back ,but stood and remembered bani's writing if she says to him he would get angry and he will loose all pproperty that' why she has not said anything to him.then he made up his mind and started thinking of a new plan which will fail everybody and a smile appeared to on his lips. not only that when he read the diary he came to know about bani;s mom dead that she killed her self and bani founded it when she heared the cassette .he was now much happier.(as in my story baani came to know of the truth before itself as the day after her return to walia mansion she came to know bout the truth of her mother's dead)

he made a plan to trap bani and make her confession .his first aim was to know the truth from rasi .then to make fail the plan of jig and ranveer.he was just top of the world when he found out that how jealous bani was and how much she loved him.he felt like he was the most stupid and lucky for having bani as wife and unucky for not able to recoqnice bani feelings for him.

preview: what is jai's plan?who will helphim?

davia

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swatinarang thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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davia.
g8 start. please continue soon.

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good start
wonder what has jai planed.
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that was a really nice start! 👏 👏 👏
pls continue soon!
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next day morning when bani got up she was surprised that how she was in bed and saw her diary lying down (yes jai came back and left it back as he have to make confes bani the truth )she then went to get freshen up .she came down to have breakfast .surprising everybody was present and saw that some thing in house was different did not know why?jai was sitting there peacefully and was eating like noithing bothered him bani came and sat near him in her chair. and everybody was busy with their own breakfast.tony served her breakfast she just started eating .on the other hand jai was not able to control his laughter but has to and make a serious face. and keep.he then suddenly called ranveer and said he his going to pune for a big project and he will handle it and he said to sign for that and ranveer very happily sighned it without reading it . bani did not like it and gave them a heavy look with anger.not yet they have not finished their breakfast they were on.adi burst a joke which made everybody laugh but not bani as she did not want ranveer to that project because it was a important project and she knows about ranveer .she was lost in thoughts.and jig said here somebody doesn't like our happiness and that why doesn't laugh.jai gave a angry look to jig. And left the dinning table(hey he was almost finished)and bani also got up and went into the kitchen without having her breakfast.tears were rolling down on her cake cheeks .but she wipe it.she then received a message in her cell that she have to meet tarun in his office.so she left immediately.

in tarun's office.he explained to bani that jai has asked her to talk to him personally , if she wants the divorce to happen soon.she question him he said he says he has no idea why jai was doing that and he has I am proffestional lawyer.and he will never compromise in his work.then bani thought for while and was little bit confused and atlast asked were he asked her to meet he replied in his hotel .in his personal room .since he need to talk about divorce. bani was like why he called me to his hotel that to his personal room?..and goes there..( as she now where his personal room is.)she knocks the door he ask her to come in.when she was about to open the door some one opened it from inside. rosy (the girl who danced in that party)was coming out.on seeing bani she turned to jai and said darling i am leavin now but don't forget my proposal and just left smiling bani was fully jealous but couldn't show it out. She entered the room .on other side jai was enjoying seing her face reaction and had a sweet jai walia smile in his face.ani came and asked what the matter why u asked me to come ?he said did tarun tell u anything ?she said that she was asked to come to talk about their divorce.he said fine he will give her the property and divorce and too in a week if she agree for his few conditions.she asked what was that? he took the file from the bed and handed over her.and asked her to read.jai walia was thinking at first she will say no then she will agree later.but for a surprise she says yes. he says he knew that she will agree as she want his property as soon as possible.he ask her to sign it.she does."so we have to leave now"jai said .bani says she needs to pack her things at first as she was pregnant and she need take the necessary things.he said smiling that he was surprised that she is caring about the baby.(actually not .since he was just playing with her.)she says she is pregnant that why.. and move angry .jai says her to take his car since she has sighned the agreement .and smiles turning .bani left and was walking thinking about the agreement.(in agreement it was written that she needs to be with him for one week whole that too alone in his farmhouse. one by one the conditions will be explained while the story proceeds.)she thought she will not able to forget the one week as after that she have too leave the house.she went near jai car and got inside .and the driver took her too home.she can't say the truth too family member's as it was mentioned in the agreement.so she lied to everyone even massi that she is going for her friend's wedding in nagpur and she is leaving right now .she told them she forgot to inform them earlier and left to pack her stuff.she took all things and packed .she took her camera along with her soo she would take jai pic without knowing to him as it will be a memory for her.and afte doing she came down and took massi blessing and left .obviously tony carried her stuff to car and kept it in the back of the car then she went back too the hotel..on the way tarun called her she even lied to him as it was strictly specified that she should not inform her lawyer.(what about jai's cloth hey… actually he already lied to family that he was going to Singapore for a 10 days .not only that he took only few suits and othes were casual wear.he was in full mood)bani was thinking about that girl what proposal she thought as rosy mentioned it before leaving.so many stupid thought were flowing in her mind that she must have proposed jai for marriage etc…. then she reached the hotel.jai came out and driver gave the keys to jai and went away.jai came and started to drive .bani did not say anything.(wait a moment where was bani sitting ,haila she was sitting at back seat why? Very simple inorder to avoid speaking and thinking of the past she pretended to be in a sleepy mood and slept in the back seat .(acting) jai on other hand was thinking act bani how much ever u want but u wont able to act after we reach there .so jai has something in his mind what is that?

Keep guessing …
Preview:jai forces bani to sleep with him(shocked ? be shocked until next part ).

thanks for ur replys.
davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i really enjoyed reading it cont soon.......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow that was g8.
cant wait 4 the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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what an interesting ff. i'm really intrigued and want to know what will happen so please update soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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davia,
g8 part. please continue soon.

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for ur replies.here is my lenthy part. i hope u all enjoy it.
3 a.

they reached the farm .before reaching farm house jai first take her to the clinic for check-up.doc was surprised to see both of them to gether as bani used to see doc alone and jai used to follow her after that.on entering doc said i am happy as both of came along.check-up was on and bani was taken to sonography.for the first time jai was with her when he saw the baby move he was so much in excitement and kept a wide mouth spread on his face.bani was also happy since she was with her husband for first time.she felt happier when she saw jai face but couldn't express it.both were in the same position.he just want to take bani in his arm and give her a hug but no they can't as the drama was on…(hey hey hey).the doc says everything is normal and bani should be happy mentally then only the child health will be good .and doc instructions go on.jai just hear everything carefully.she was only three months pregnant.then they left to farm house and reached there. after reaching jai ordered the ser vant to take bag to the room(in the agreement it was written that jai and bani would be in the same room and and it also said that jai will check his baby mean he will touch bani's stomach and feel and talk to baby everyday.not only that he said fter te divorce also she should be with him until the baby was born .)bani entered the farm house and remembered what happen when they came last time.

but this time she was happy since they will be all alone and although she acted in front of him for his property she always wanted him in her side that to this time as she was pregnant.she silently went to room to get freshen up.as she left jai paid the servant and said not to come before a week and gave him a holiday.after the servant left with a huge happy face he closed the door.bani opened the door of the room and entered it and took out her towel .the agreement paper fell down she slowly picked it up and thought why agreed for the agreement as it was mainly written that if she did not agree for this she will not get any property and not divorce and jai will also take her child. and if she agrees she will get divorce soon and she will be able to save jai property.and also she will be able to take some good moments along with her.and wiil live her remaining life with that.

it was quite pleasant afternoon as it was not too sunny nor too cloudy just good.a perfect romantic climate.it was lunch time bani came out of her room to dinning area as she was already hungry .she can wait but not the baby. the lunch and dinner \was already cooked by servant.she slowly takes her food and sits in her place and about to take a spoon suddenly a voice come "stop"she turned and saw jai was standing there he said "did u forget the agreement that we r supposed to sit and eat together and u r forgetting it.and if u don't follow I won't give u divorce.remember that" he came and served himself and sat in his place.and was about to eat and looked at bani and said " why r u looking at me ? atart eating ,because of u I don't want my kid to get suffer.' rest of the time they ate quietly .bani was about to get up when jai said where r going don't forget u have to eat for my kid.u have eaten only for u not for my kid."bani was like what's wrong with him.infront of him I ate so much and he is saying I have to eat for my kid .she was confused but before she could react jai came made her sit again and started to put some food again and asked her to eat it.she was about to say something opening her mouth.jai just took some food and fed her she was shocked .he said don't look at me eat for my kid it is still starving. And sarted saying 'I don't know how many days u have left my baby starving." bani was just like doesn't know to react because she has not seen this kind of jai walia .and goes on with eathing.(but on other hand he was enjoying feeding her and looking at her shocked face and thought his plans have started working.)

asual the phone starts to ring she was about to pick it ,jai stopped her hands and took the phone and swithch of it and turned to bani and said " i have clearly mentioned that u should not use ur mobile and u should only use the mobile which I will give u.and no incomings only out goings.if u don't obey the agm I won't give u divorce(jai words made her thing that he was blackmailing her and forcing her to everything what he wanted her to do.she was also little scade as she was able to see old jw in him. But his words of repeating his baby and won't give u divorce made her get irritated.actually jai plan was like he will make her get so irritated that she will confess the truth in anger or frustration.that what he wants.) then jai place the new mobile to her and said u will only use this.she had no other choice .she took it and dialed the number(actually the call was from pia asual) and started talking pia said she called her to say she is going to bangalore for business purpose and bani was surprised because even puskar said that .but felt something is totally wrong.(actually jai called puskar and made him confess the truth by gving him pia and bani kasam .and he had no choice except to tell the truth.u know when he went to puskar and asked him to confess? i will tell u later in next part.puskar itself will tell.and jai handedovered his deal to puskar and send him to bangalore and pia too as he wanted both of them to get along because he thought then only stupid pia will not disturb her sis and him.)

bani ate it without any choice and went to her bedroom.bani was so confused,irritated ,angry ,happy due to jai walia and left the table without bothering to ask jai whether she would clean the table.but jai was happy as he wanted to see this bani because then
only he will able to make her confess.because she was having mixture of emotions. she went to room and sat in the bed and was leaning on the bed's back holder.she was lost in the thought. here in dinning table jai was cleaning the table himself with full smiling face(hear I am itself smiling like anything as I am happy to write this.)he then took some badam milk(already prepared and kept in fridge.i like cold badam milk.)and cut some fruits for her and took it to the room .she was lost in thought he came and placed the tray in front oh her saying to have it. she said "now only I had my lunch and u r saying to eat more I can't"he replied 'this is not for u ,it for my baby in ur tummy" and placed his hand in her tummy(over her dress as she was in her chudidar)and started talking to the baby "baby bhook lagi hai?i know ur mom is not eating properly.i don't wan't u to be like pia massi (she is ver slim that what he is mentioning) I want to u be like walia kid not dixit. I mean I want u to be healty .so don't worry if ur mom doen't take care of u I am always there. u r mom can't stop me as If she stops me she won't get divorce.(bani was getting irritated and she din't like him saying the baby should be like walia not dixit.she was angry too.she felt like puncing him but can't she don't want to spoil things.so she kept quite)jai was happy since he was doing and caring for his pregnant wife and his life=bani.
he then picked up the glass and asked bani to drink .she was angry and irritated she want to push it away but was not able to jai:bani open ur mouth vaarna" before he could say anything she drank it in one sip.then he placed the fruits in front of her asked her to eat she did that also . then he asked her to go with him for a walk ,she said she is sleepy and don't want to walk and if he wants he can go.jai replied "ok".then he moved .bani slowly layed down and pulled her blanket and thought "how unpredictable this man is.jai just went ouside and kept the things and came back.bani was just pretending to sleep and and he came inside , went on the other side of the bed and he also layed down .pulled his blanket and his hands went inside the blanket and directly placed over bani's tummy .she was like "what r doing mr. walia?" he said "I am sleeping with my baby. And I will also tell him good stories" 'if u oppose it I won't ….' Before he would complete she just layed back since she doesn't want to hear that.

davia .

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