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siumi thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
hi ๐Ÿ˜Š
i have just read all the parts of ur ff ๐Ÿ˜Š and i must say u r very good ๐Ÿ‘
well i hope that jai's plan will work ๐Ÿ˜ƒ and bani gatting irriteted ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜‰
awesome, ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ
and plz just continue ur ff ๐Ÿ˜Š
i'll be waiting for it ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
here is my next part. u all be happy .because after this part.more lovable incidents are going to come. so enjoy.don't forget to reply...

After short nap bani got up and saw it was 4;45 p.m she thought she slept for a long.but she din't see jai near her and thought where he must have gone and went slowly to see where was him.she saw him coming out of another near theirs.they both came face to face she was quite surprised since she saw jai in casual wear .he asked her " kya dekrahi ho?" "kuch nahi" she replied. He then whent to kitchen and took juice and asked her to drink.she thought about saying something but thought if say s, then he will again repeat the same lines so without choice had to drink the juice.jai was like oh she is being controlled by me now. Thanks to tarun who gave me this idea.and if raasi has not opened the truth to him on asking her he would have something not cleared so raasi also helped him.next was adi who helped him to keep jig and others out of this.and make everyone believe that he still hates bani . and made everyone believe that he is going to Bangalore with pia.(and made puskar to go) .after drinking bani just placed the glass over the table . bani just said "mein fresh hokar aati hoon" and left to room.she went inside the bathroom ,on opening on door itself she started to vomit(on the vomiting area not on the floor) on hearing the noise on entering the room jai streatly went and holded her.she din't push him if she does she knows what will happen( u know something in agreement this was also written that if she is not feeling well jai will help her.) she was angry towards jai as he made her to eat a lot .that why she is vomiting. Some fell on dress also.after finishing she came out and went to pick up her dress ,but before she could,jai went and picked up pink sarree and asked her to wear.he said he wanted her to wear saree not chudi and he remainted her. That he want a walia baby not dixit's and gave a devil smile and asked her to change.bani saw him again ,jai "what change" ani finally said "first u need to go out." He said " as if I have not seen anything" "then also u want to ok no problem.but don't expect from me all time" and left closing the door.bani spoke to herself "kaise insaan hai ye , can't understand him" and changed her dress. When she came out jai questioned her "dress change karne keliye itni time ,I made coffee and even finished it." She gave him a angry look and left to kitchen .he followed her.she went to make chai for her and started searching for the spoon and cup. He came from back and took it and gave it to her and said "if she wants to find anything then call me don't try to be smart and give my child pressure by putting lots of pressure in ur head" and left. She was really angry with him and was getting more and more irritated and started to murmur about him and was scolding for his behaviour.and interfering in her eah and every time in her work. She sudeenly hurted herself and left the chai cup and her hand was burning .tears started to flow from her eyes .jai came there on hearing noise and scolded her saying u have no concentration on what ur doing that's why all this happen .and what if she has hurted her baby (without realizing) and then said I mean my baby.and started to show her hand in the water and said he said if anything happen to my baby or if u try to harm it and be careless about ur pregnancy I won't give u divorce .she just pulled her hands and went away from there crying.jai felt sorry for her and thought he should not scolded her like that.and cleaned everything and made fresh chai and took it to her . she was in the garden in swing crying folded her legs near her chest and heads downs .jai came and sat opposite to her in swing and want to take her in arms and make her feel comfortable.and say sorry to her but did not because of his plan. Instead of being kind he said "stop crying and have ur chai. I don't want my baby to be called as crying baby by others since when mothers cry when their pregnant it will affect the child and its health.so stop crying. If u don't thenโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ.." she looked up to him and just in anger took the hot chai cup (he thought she is going to thro w it on his face ) and drank it very fast and gave him a shooter look and left from there and closed her door .she thought so he took me here to only torcher me like this. And what he thinks that I don't know to how to take care of me and my baby then he is wrong. I can.as much as I love him I love my baby also.on other jai was feeling sorry.but he have to continue to make her confess the truth.
Few min later jai enters the room .he sees bani sitting in the sofa,left hand on stomach and right on head lookin sad and lost in thoughts.jai come and sits near here.as her eyes was closed,see did not see him.he entered tip-toed and sat.he slowly said bani with a concern voice she came out from thought and saw jai close to her.she just (due to mood swing) saw him a nd started to shout at him. Saying what u want me to eat now juice or milk?fruits or vegetable?he just stared at her and with a gentle smile sa
Edited by davia389 - 18 years ago
amiee thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
oh wow cant believe jai could do something like this and get a confession out of her well bani do u see how much jai loves you
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
Great part ! plz do continue soon ! ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
no replys only two? ...
davia.not bad atleast two.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
davia,
g8 part
i think bani is gonna tell jw that she is doing all this for him and he only cares for his child very soon.

please continue soon.

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
๐Ÿ‘
bani is going to burst any second ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
i hope they have their so call suhaag raat ๐Ÿ˜ณ
can't wait for the imli part
please write soon ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
here is the in teresting confession part .first bani's then next part will be jai's .thanks for all the replys.



he said no I want to feel my baby so pls and removed her hands and placed his hand inside the saree.and started saying see ur mommy always talk about eating.and thing nothing else.bani was looking at him angrily.she doesn't care about u but I do.(bani was fuming inside and felt like pulling his collar and ready to shout.)and jai on other hands was just continuing the talk "baby mein janta hoon ki u will be a girl not like ur mom dixit but like me a walia (ha ha laktha hai jai ko apni tara hatta katta bachha chahiya) in order to escape bani said she want to go to use bathroom and just left(to avoid it). Jai though "I know u bani u wanted to avoid this that why u made and excuse.and left par kab tak." In bathroom she was feeling that one day is like this how she is going to spend rest of the days? Few min later she came out.no sign of jai in the room.

She came out and was little bit scad as he was not in kit and hall then she remembered j coming out of another room .so she went inside that room. She was shocked on getting inside that room as it was decorated as a suhaag raat room she was totally confused and slowly went near the bed .she heard some one closing the door .it was none othe than jai walia.he shirt sleeve was folded 3/4th and his upper buttons were mostly open. He was coming close to her and she was moving back.( remember it was already 6:55) she questioned nothing like this was written in that agreement.he said he knows. She was almost to fall he caught her.he said he wants to do that with her " bani actually we din't celebrate our suhaag raat properly so why don't we do that.i know it was my fault that I send u out .but yet I need some benefit from this marriage.after our divorce nor me nor u should not feel that we din't do it in our sense.so I thought why don't weโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ u know what I mean. After we r still husband and wife.and when we r going to divorce why don't we ?" and start to get closer.she pushes him saying I wont allow u touch me. In order to take revenge u want me to ur bed that's why u brought me here , u r bad person ,I have never seen anyone like this. U wanted to take advantage of the situation and rape me?how cheap u r . jai "ok any way u can think .but I want u to have now that's all.i don't care if u agree or not. I thought I wil touch u with ur permission but if u don't give, I really don't mind, I come to โ€ฆ."before he would continue she pushed him and ran away to the door to open but it was locked. She was trying to open .jai came back and said u can't open it since I have the keys.she was scad now and really hitted the door by her back.jai's two hands were each side of her.bocking her way to go. He said "how much toucher and insult u have given me infront of all that to remember recently in that party.u won't to show me down. U have hurted me bani a lot. I kept quite because u r having my child ,but today I will take revenge.and just picked her up and carried her to bed and dropped in the bed tears were flowing in bani eyes. And she was totally scad by now on seeing j's reaction. He came top of her he holded her hands and started saying u was the person whom I trusted more than me and broked my trust. When I showed hatred to u after our marriage still u kept quite and took it silently and made my anger get less and and my anger was gone because of u and made me smile again , I felt bad for what I have done but today u gave me back my anger and developed a hatred to which forced me to do this .. why did u do that bani? If wanted me to be like old jai walia why did u search a soft person inside me and woke it up and again woke up the angry animal inside me why? U don't love me then why did u heal my wounds of my heart why? Why/ why? Bani couldn't take it any more and said because u r my husband and I love u. I did everything for u and only for u .i wanted the divorce to save ur property( she was in such a state that she haded to confess the truth without any choice to save her self.)and she realized what she said now.jai slowly left her hands and got up and said . this what I wanted to hear from u bani. Although my mind said u were wrong my hearts did not accept it.that why I did this .


Preview : jai hiding bani's clothes .

Promo : two new persons enterance because of imliโ€ฆ..

.if u all feel that story is not moving on its way just inform me.as i am myself is little bit confused.so sorry.

davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
davia for some reason i thought that you updated this part yesterday where she confessed everything and i thing you edit that part ๐Ÿ˜•
but i hope jai and bani have their suhaag raat ๐Ÿ˜‰
i wonder why jai hided bani's close ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†
please write soon ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
I hope that they have their suhaag raat 2!!! It was great how she said everythin!!! Ur FF is goin at a prefect pace!!!

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