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davia389 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
jai ka birthday cake abni hi to hai.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
jai ka birthday cake abni hi to hai.wait for it and read.u all will find out it.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
can't wait to read
bani being jai's cake sounds funny 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i am almost finished the next part. i will post it soon. because i thought of posting two parts.that what i said to wait and read as bani is jai's birthday cake.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
aww just read!
its jai's birthday
i hoep bani wishes him!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
Read all the parts in one go and loved it. 👏 👏

I am also reading your other fanfic as well adn love that too. 👏 👏 😃

Cant wait for the next part, as you say Bani is his Birthday cake?? 😉 Now that sounds quiet interesting.

Love
Krishna
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
Wonderful part.
waiting for the next part.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey here come my next part.keep replying if it is bad or good. if any idea. it is welcomed.

somehow jai gained power ( I really don't know why both became so akward and silent .)and came in . he saw the both the room door was open and heard noise from kitchen. He saw her cooking some food. He slowly went and said bani what r doing here .? . actually the maid have already cooked dinner for us. So we only need to heat it. Bani replied "mein janthi hoon par muje puri kani thi ,isliye. Mein kya karoon ab ki bete ki waje se muje ye sab kuch karma par raha hai.varna mai pagal toddi na hoon ki is waqt ye karrongi it ni tak jane ke bath bhi." Jai then said "what u mean by beta? I want a girl baby just like her mom ." bani feeling happy inside and innocently said "but my husband wands a walia baby not dixits ." both realized how they talked now just like a sweet husband and wife who r in love for many years… .jai then with a smile without knowing what to do and just left the place and went to the room ( first one not the s room) and started to laugh and when he turned to cubbord he got an idea.he open the cubbord and removed all the dresses and packed in his suitcase and kept on the top of the cubbord and thought "ye tum he kya hogaya jai u r behaving as if ur only at 20 's and playing mischief with u r newly wedded bride?" he then laughed . and thought and felt hungry actually no actually yes totally confuse and went towards kitchen. And open his mouth .., bani " kana taiyar hai" he then kept quite and both sat and ate quietly.he wanted to speak but did not know where to start from.(tomorrow was jai 's birthday.actually ekta in ks did not celeb his birthday .not fair but I feel to celeb .rk fans will be happy .i hope so.)
he said bani muje tum se , imean iw want to speak to u about something. Actually bani I ……… bani said " I know aap mujse sorry kehna chae the hai na . I know what u did for to confess the truth. U din't mean to hurt me. I can understand .but still u should have not done to me. I felt soo scad . pls don't talk about it. If u don't mind I don't want to sleep with u in the same room I will sleep in my room and u will sleep in next room .." he just nodded his head as yes .and said it ok and left with a sad face and before going he turned and said "have ur milk and medicine before u sleep and once again I am sorry." And left and went out side and sat in swing and was like really sad and felt bad that he is responsible he wanted to make confess bani soon that why he worked on plan 2 ,if he had not atleast for two day he would have been with bani and wished that they had been happy and bani and forgave him completely and been with him for suhaag raat on his birthday and wish him first.(jai u r lucky ,kya pata tere wish such ho jaye?) a tota tara passed in the sky.and was thinking about the sweet moments they spented together and sweet memories of his and bani's when she asked him to sing and he sang for her and how happy he felt on hearing the news of becoming father. How he felt strange when he woke up and din't find bani. And was thinking from his day of wedding and how he hated her and how slowly she changed his feeling and how he fall in love with her without knowing .. and etc…….. and thought if massi has not come they would have not be together and if pia had not ran away they would have not got married. He thought in whole life his sis did a good thing that is ,convincing him to get married to bani . he thanked god for giving him a wife like bani who loved him to extreem he was lost in thoughts . he thought he should win bani's heart before returning from this trip. Then he saw the watch and felt it was quite late and thought of going to bed and thought he will be alone in his bed and no bani and waste of deco and his suha rt plan no he thought and left inside with a little sad as now bani has said the truth.

davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i also want a few views. if i want to introduce a new couple(example mihir -tulsi,prerna anurag)who shall i introduce. pls give me ur views.so that who r asked to be intro iwill make their entry as .i would like to introduce the people who u all like the most.

davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
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what happen no one has a choice to whom ?????u who choose........
davia

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