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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
awsome please count soon 👏 👏

davia you are too good 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
yessss!
she told him everything!
jai's plan worked!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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davia,
g8 part so bani confessed everything to Jw, his plan was successful, hope now both of them together will teach lesson to Jigs and ranveer. and on the top bani confessed his love for her husband jai. so i think next is jw chance to confess his love now. please continue soon.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
next will be ur all fav part. and i will post it soon.
davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
ooooooooo can't wait to read it 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey evewn i ahd a doubt that whether i posted the previous part earlier.but now i will post my next part.the confessions of both the people.if the story is not going on line .just reply me.if anything is not good just say. i will correct it.ideas are welcomed.thanks for ur replys once again.


I did not want to hurt mentally or phically but I only played this game so that u would confess the truth. I am sorry . I had no intention to r… sorryyyyyyyyyyy. And left from there.he felt bad although he done that to confess her phir bhi..he thought . thank god actually he prayed to god before going inside the room (that god pls make her confess soon I don't want to force her and give mental stress that why I am going to work on my plan today itself. Pls make me look as I want to that .but actually not. Because I can't hurt her any way. She loves me a lot .pls help god) he then few min later took some juice and something to eat and went inside the room . she was there standing near the window crying .he placed the tray and went near her and slowly said bani I am really sorry . I know I should not have hurted like that but what I did was only to know the truth . because of ur divorce drama not only we r suffering but our unborn child was also suffering . u may think I am caring about the child a lot but bani u don't know the fact why I am so protective towards the child. I have longed for my own child. Only I know the pain I went through. But when u came into my life everything started changing. .i started to feel that some body was there waithing for me to take care me. Yes I accept the fact that I was not a perfect husband. I have hurted u so much still have always been a medicine to my wounds and healed it up.i have always wanted to be good father ,I did not get my father's love and affection. When I was small he left us for another women. From that day I have to be big in all ways. That why I always wanted to have my kid and give all the love affection which I did not get it. I always waited for a perfect women a person who will care about me. I don't know what made me to feel to think that u was the perfect for me . the days when we spended together was the most beautifuls days in my life. Were I laughed from my heart. The night which we spent to gether and became one was not a mistake which I realize later and if it was a mistake then it was a beautiful mistake. I don't want to see u cry bani. I did not bring u to cry but make u feel better and keep u happy. Pls eat something ,if u r angry pls don't show it to our kid(he said our kid…. He he he/….) . if u r angry show it to me by givng me slaps also I don't mind but pls don't cry. If u don't want me to, not to show my face then I won't .but pls take care urself. Ur health is more important not just because ur pregnant with m child but u r my life bani. I can't live without u. love can happen many times but true love happen only once .my true love is u , the person who I care for a lot. Even he had tears in his cheeks(chubby ones .man karta hai ki ,pull that chubby cheeks but can't as he wil be busy in shooting ) he was about to go. But bani placed her hands on his hands and stopped him both turned to face eachother . no words came ot except they exchance their words through their eyes. Then both at the same time rubbed the water flow in their cheeks with both their hands.( how senti he… he… .i feel like laughing . because ) a slow smile appeared on bani's face saying mr. walia I am sorry. Then jiya dhadk song played on background . and both hugged . cool breeze were blowing. Then a voice came from bani saying muje bhook lagi hai . kya said jai. . they just smiled and came rowards the tray and started to feed eachother.bani said why din't u tell me first? Now what will happen if we don't get divorced (what a sudden realization) jai just simply said don't worry about that all. We will enjoy now and rest is after wards.and finished they lite dinner. He then said lets for a walking for some free air in garden.

They were walking in the garden. Breeze was a gentle one. Both wanted to speak a lot but couldn't don't know why. Then they sat down in the swing .both wanted to open their mouths but felt so akward .then jai phone starts to ring , he excused himself and left .it was from raasi. She said she has founded the file he asked her to hand to tarun.after the call ended he turned back but din't see bani. And thought she must have left in.he thought "what I am going to do know. I wanted to speak to her but how (suddenly what happen arre yaar this is what called pyar.)" his soul appeared in old jai walia style and was sitting in the swing.he called " what happen to u jai walia?" jai was like oh no my soul .he replied nothing.then the soul said "kya hua bani sai bath nahi kar parorahi ho ?kya hua us puranai jai walia ,who logon se nahi balki log uske sath bathe karne darthe hai?" kya ka socha that tumne kit um uske saath , use mankar apni life nahi tarake se shuru karoki,aur who kamra jise tum ne apne suhaag raat keliye decorate kiya. Saare plan out ?"and was laughing jai said " ha ha meine socha tha par bani se bolna chatha hoon ki aaj se hum apni jindagi ki nahi shuruwat kare .aur meine us kamre ko decorate kiya kyunki ki" kyunki kya jai ? question the soul " I want it to happen but not forcing her and if she doesn't want it I will not touch her." Soul " stop lieing to me u want to happen it today u wanted her as ur birthday gift then why don't u talk to her. In front u both r pretending that u both don't want to bbut actually u both want it to happen and that tooo after the truth have come out. But both r not willing to speak first. Jai just go and propose to her saying how much u love her and just say her what u want . after all u both love each other.goo don't waste ur time. When u read the diary u immediately wanted to take her arms and hug her and wanted to say I much u also love her .what happen now . r u afraid ?" ' no, I am not I just wanted her to give some time. What if she doesn't want it. I can't force her ." oh just stop it jai go to her.she need s u now. Goo . said the soul

davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
Lovely part Davia 👏 !I hope he'll listen to his soul ! 😆 Please continue soon ! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
davia,
really g8 part. its g8 that JW also confessed his love for bani and now i am 100% sure that bani will also listen to her soul and will give JW his desired b'day gift.

please continue soon.

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
hey continue soon
this was a nice part
and plz jai listen to ur soul kabhi kabhi apne dil aur aatma ki bhi sunleni chayihe 😆 😆
waiting for nxt prt
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
That was very beautifully written 👏
awwwwwwwwww its jais bday, i hope massi calls her and tells her that 😳 and she can wish him and make him a birthday cake, it takes one hour to make a cake or she can tell someone to get it 😉
jai listen to your heart and soul
please write soon

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