~Kyun main Jagoon -- AsYa OS-- ~

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heyy all..I am here with another stupid piece of writing..😳
hell bored you see.. 😛🤢😳
the story is almost the same as on-going track just minor changes of end..
Do hit like if you like 😆

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After whole one month Zoya left Asad..both were shattered..

Zoya lived in an orphanage..lived?? just breathed..she had trusted her Mr. Khan blindly..even after Tannu's open challenge she was taking it lightly because she knew..anything could happen but her Jahapanah six packs won't break her trust..

Asad did believe what Tannu said..but inside he was feeling as if something somewhere was wrong..some major clue was missing..his Zoya was missing..everything just seem to come to an end.
He would miss her day and night..he would imagine her and break down..her funny shayaris..cute looks..challenges..her liveliness..chirpiness..her favorite Pizza and Coke..he missed every bit of her..

Mujhe yunhi karke khwaabon se judaa
Jaane kahan chup ke baitha hai khuda
Jaanu na main kab hua khud se gumshuda
Kaise jiyun rooh bhi mujhse hai judaa


Asad sat in the lawn..where he and Zoya dreamed of their beautiful life..

Kyun meri raahein, mujhse pooche ghar kahan hai
Kyun mujhse aake, dastak pooche dar kahan hai
Raahein aisi jinki manzil hi nahin
Dhoondho mujhe ab main rehta hoon wahin
Dil hai kahin aur dhadkan hai kahin
Saansein hai magar kyun zinda main nahin


he started walking to nowhere..just thinking of the golden times he had spent with Zoya..

Rait bani haathon se yun beh gayi
Takdeer meri bikhri har jagah
Kaise likhun phir se nayi daastan
Gham ki siyahi dikhti hai kahan
Aahein jo chuni hain meri thi raza
Rehta hoon kyun phir khud se hi khafa
Aisi bhi hui thi mujhse kya khata
Tune jo mujhe di jeenay ki saza


on the other hand Zoya sat by the window side and stared at moon as if asking why all this had to be in her fate? She remembered the horrific site she had seen on her Nikaah day..she still couldn't believe that her Jahapanah can do such a thing..deep inside somewhere she knows he is not at fault but what she saw was the truth..after a long fight between her mind and heart she decided to talk to him..


Banday tere maathe pe hain jo kheenchi
Bas chand lakeeron jitna hai jahaan
Aansu mere mujhko mita te rahe
Rab ka hukam na mit ta hai yahan
Raahein aisi jinki manzil hi nahin
Dhoondho mujhe ab main rehta hoon wahin
Dil hai kahin aur dhadkan hai kahin
Saansien hai magar kyun zinda main nahin


Asad came back home and went to his room...the empty dark room was enough for him to break down again..

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after a while, he heard some noise near his window..and he thought it's Ayaan..immediately without looking said..Ayaan please..raat bahot ho chuki hai..tum abhi ghar jao..!

Zoya could sense the hurt in his voice..Mr. Khan..
Asad was left awestruck..Zoya?

he just went and crushed her as if promising to never let go..
Asad -- Zoya..Zoya..kahaan chali gayi thi tum? tum thik toh hona? I am sorry Zoya..I am sorry..please meri baat sun lo ek baar Zoya..I love you..

and he broke down into fresh tears again..and so did Zoya..


Zoya -- Sunungi Mr.Khan..isiliye aayi hoon..main apne saare jawaab chaahti hun..kyun Dhokha diya aapne mujhe Mr. Khan..kyyunn?
She yelled..

Hearing a familiar voice..Dilshad and Najma came running to Asad's room..and were beyond happy and thankful..


Asad -- Zoya..wo uss raat main Ghar se nikla Venue ke liye..aur Tannu ne kaha wo bhi mere saath jaayegi kyun ki Dulhe ko akele nahi jaana chahiye..phir raaste main usne yaad dilaya ki hamein Dulhan ko Tohfa dena chahiye..aur jese hi hum aapka gift leke waapis aaye toh kuch gunde unhe kidnap kar ke le ja rahe the..hum unhe bachaane unke peeche gaye..magar woh factory main pahoche toh hum par kisine peeche se vaar kiya aur shayad injection bhi lagaya..uske baad hamein kuch yaad nai..bas itna yaad hai ki aap bhi thi wahaan..aapne kaha ki hamara Nikaah ho chuka hai..aur phir kuch yaad nai hai..

Tears started rolling from eyes of all..

Zoya -- Mr. Khan..aap mujh pe kabhi bharosa nahi karte aur naahi karenge..shaayad isiliye aaj ye sab ho raha hai..

Asad -- main aap par bharosa karta hun..khud se bhi zyada..

Zoya cut him in between and says -- magar Tannu se zyada nai..

Asad -- ye kya keh rahi hai aap Zoya..

Dilshad could not take this anymore..she had understood the whole situation..

Dilshad - Asad ya toh tumhe kuch samajh nai aa raha ya phir tum kuch samajhna hi nahi chaahte..yaad hai tumhe kese Zoya ne hamein Tanveer ke nakli jalne ke nishaan..uski factory ke baare main bataya tha..yeh sab Tanveer ka plan tha kyunki wo tumhe paana chahti thi..

Asad just stood shocked..he remembered how Zoya tried to tell him the truth..but he never believed her..

Asad -- please Zoya mujhe maaf kardo..i should have had believed you..I am sorry Zoya please..

Zoya could not see him pleading him like this..she went and hugged him tight..he held her tighter..

Asad -- I love you Zoya..

Zoya -- I love you too Mr. Khan..

Dilshaan and Tamatar joined them and said -- We love you too

--xx--xx---xxx---The End--xx---xx--


😳 I know it's a waste ..sorry for such a bad one.. 😳
and those who are by chance wondering were was Tannu..she was out..Thankfully 😛 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love you for this😳😆
Edited by Guguminti - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Guguminti

I love you for this😳😆



why??? 😲
anywayz thank you 😆 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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You're totally crazy to say that its boring! 😆

You've no idea how much I loveeed this, Nits darling! <33 It was superb. How I wish this happened in the show!

Keep it up! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey ...
That was fab !!! :)
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i was listening to Piano Tum Hi ho as i read it. ❤️

Haiyee meri jaanii you made my day 🤗
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

i was listening to Piano Tum Hi ho as i read it. ❤️


Haiyee meri jaanii you made my day 🤗



😆 okaay..I am hungry now..that noodles is all I want 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Annie_

You're totally crazy to say that its boring! 😆


You've no idea how much I loveeed this, Nits darling! <33 It was superb. How I wish this happened in the show!

Keep it up! 🤗



😲 😆
so glad you liked it.. 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NITS..INNI SONI STORY HAIOGA JI YES.. I LOVE U FOR THIS ...SERIOUSLY...
AB OR LIKHA KAR...I WOULD LOVE TO READ FROM U...
PS: NITS SHORT ME NIPTANA ISE KEHTE HAI...SEEDHI BAAT NO BAKWAAS😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI

NITS..INNI SONI STORY HAIOGA JI YES.. I LOVE U FOR THIS ...SERIOUSLY...

AB OR LIKHA KAR...I WOULD LOVE TO READ FROM U...
PS: NITS SHORT ME NIPTANA ISE KEHTE HAI...SEEDHI BAAT NO BAKWAAS😆



😆 ohhh god..I am laughing on your comment too 😆 😆
luvvee you too 🤗

Sprite mera favorite hai.. 😛 😆😆 sachhi main 😉

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