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CutiepieHarshad

@CutiepieHarshad

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#491

awesome part

plz plz cont soon

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hi_its_me

@hi_its_me

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#492

luvd it...

continue soo and tnx for d pm..

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deedeez

@deedeez

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#493

Wonderful update.. Jealous Asad is so so hot!!.. Loved to see this side of him.. Thank you for the PM 😊.. I wish Zoya keeps giving him some more agony. He deserves it..

Edited by deedeez - 12 years ago

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#494

AMAZING AS USUAL! I think Mr Khan never expected Zoya to be like this! having needing his permission for anything and Mr Khan cannot handle that! he always get what he wants and its not going so with zoya! He have feelings for her and he don't want to admit it! Mr Khan desires are very strong for Zoya! he cannot handle her being with someone other than him! Keep it coming anxiously awaiting next part hurry plz! great job! tks

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#495

It started with Asad being
Possessive and then he was
Obsessed...Allah Miyan..whats
wrong with him?..
Anywy ur writng is xlnt..i realy felt i am der watchng al dis..bt i feel pity 4 hamzaah..poor guy..thnks 4 pm.

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Nai

@zoas91

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#496

this as a hot and cold update...hot because of what asad was doing to zoya and cold because it was a blow on her face...asad needs to control him emotions or rather what comes out of his mouth... let his action speak for itself than the words...loved the update!!! plz update soon!!! and thank you for the om ! looking forward for the next!

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#497

Omg

That was harsh

Zoya didn't do anything

And Asad blamed here

Zoya was so hurt

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teddyyy

@teddyyy

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#498

Before I start ranting- beautiful job!

ALLAH MIYA WHAT'S WRONG WITH MR KHAN?! First I felt bad for the poor guy because he was going crazy with all those thoughts ( made me chuckle a little tho LOL ). And then I felt bad for Hamzah because the guy was soo sweet! But Zoya did the right thing by not leading him on! Asad being all possessive was cute- obession on the other hand is NOT. He was doing all that and it soon began to disgust me because in a sense he was taking advantage of her. She couldn't resist him but his anger and desires overpowered her. AND THEN HE LEFT HER HANGING UGH.

Thanks for the pm!