FF - Torn by Hidden Desires(Link to thread#2)

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autumn_spring

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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

just read all in one go... i must say, you are blessed with amazing writing skills...

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#462

FANTASTIC! AMAZING!OMG that was brilliant , loved the intensity of MrKhan towards zoya just loved it! Now I really need to read more and more so hurry with next update plZ! Tks

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Zara

@Zara_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#463

ThankYou sooo very much guys !! I'm going to Farmhouse today wid cousins so can't update today 😔
But Pakka will update tomorrow 😃

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#464

I read it all in one go & honestly it was just Awesome creation 👏

I like Asad that u portrayed, all the time he fight with his desires & his ego(for zoya) or his fear for strangers, always he satisfied himself with reasons bt he knows very well that r not true & some new feelings r developing, u just narrated his state so beautifully

Zoya - she is really confused with Asad's behaviour & same with her own feelings

jealousy part was so nice, elevetor scene just breathtaking

looking forward for the next update

continue soon & plz pm me when u updated 😊