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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...anju...

SANJU R WE FORTUNATE ENOUGH TO

GET D DOUBLE UPDATE U PROMISED

TODAY

yup u r. i am writting.might be will post in 1 n half hr or 2 :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys! Finally with the 6th and 7th chaps of better late than never.

Before I start let me tell u these chaps are solely dedicated to two members of this forum n they are NAVINA & MY ALL-IN-ONE.

NAVINA because she knows why…

ALL-IN-ONE because all my chaps are dedicated to her.

N yeah, not to forget, BILLU yeh aapki bakshisi hain. Hum umeed rakhte hain ke aapko yaad dilaneki jarurat na ho ke yeh bakshisi kisliye thi…

Thanx everyone for ur support! I love u all!

So now as I hav rolled up the dedication program, let's turn towards the chap….

"JIJI" came the loudest ever squeal from J n Manyata was damn sure within a few minutes of talk with J, Manyata will have to put on a hearing aid. " how r u jiji? Kitne dino baad phone kia, I just don't even remember aapne pichli baar kab phone kia. Aap humko bhool toh nahi gayee?? And don't forget aap sabse pehle ek yuvraani hain, devgarh ko bhi aapki jarurat hoti hain much more than that useless bas***d Akash and that gutter chawl" J said within a breath and soon incurred the wrath of each n every person sitting before her. Wide-button eyed, all stared at her and J became helpless within no time. "Sorry" she muttered after a few seconds. Exception to the wrath was Vijay who was sitting back and trying to suppress his laughter. "meri pyari behana, how r u? how can I forget u all? Waise tumhe ek khabar sunane keliye phone kia tha" Manyata said. "WHAT??!!??" J screamed at top of her voice.her face as white as a ghost. Unbelievable was happening!! Her evil mind had to put to be work again. "Yeh shaadi tudwani padegi. Jiji crossed her limits" all these thots had raced in J's mind within the fraction of second. (hope u understood what J was thinking. If no do PM me ASAP. She thought that the khabar is THE GOOD NEWS)"kya hua J, chilla kyun rahi hain? Tu theek to hain na?" asked Manyata in a very caring voice. Even all the royals sitting before her were a bit confused. "nahi, aap batyo, kya khabar batane wali ho aap?"J asked her. "wo hum devgarh arahe hain rehne" Manyata said. "JIJI… sacchi love u love u love u so much" it was a squeal lower in volume than the first. That was enough for Menaka. "J beta aap rajwaade hain thoda rajwaadon jaise bardaav karenge toh jyada accha hoga, will be preferred" she said in a much plain tone, and J apologized. Immediately she told everyone Manyata's message and all were happy. Komal really wanted to squeal n shout out that her daughter is coming, but seeing what happened with J, she sat quietly and just showed sheer happiness on her face. Vijay snatched the phone from J as soon as he heard Manyata's message. "areh Vijay bhai this is not fair. Hum baat kar rahe hain na jijise, u cant snatch away the phone" J argued trying to get the phone from Vijay. "no J bhai, u talked with her for a long time. Now it's my turn" Vijay said and J sighed and sat back. "manyata bhai, jo J bhai keh rahi hain wo sach hain? Seriously u r coming?" Vijay asked innocently. "haan Vijay bhai, hum sach much arahe hain" Manyata said happily. "I am so happy" Vijay said excitedly. He looked at Komal and could simply deduce how much she wanted to talk with her daughter. "ek minute, Aunty komal se baat karo Manyata bhai" h esaid as he handed over the phone to Komal. Komal blessed him thousand times in her mind. Manyata chatted with each n every person and was so happy to know all their reactions. She just wasn't able to wait for the next day to rise, how much she longed to be with her family- her people who really cared for her. The phone ended and the discussion changed from whatever topic is was to, to Manyata.

"I am so excited! Finally jiji arahi hain! Hmm... kuch awesome stuff plan karna chahiye, hain na Vijay bhai??" J said building dreamy castles of fun in her mind. "yeah sure" Vijay agreed. "chalo lets go" she said holding Vijay's hand. "Kaha?" Brijraj asked her. "bahot sari planning karni hain n we just don't have time to waste!" J said and started to pull Vijay. All smiled and Vijay helplessly got up and went away with J like her tail.

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Manyata ended her call and satisfaction spread all over her face in the form of a pleasant smile. She was collecting her clothes and packing her bag. "kya kaha ghar waalon ne?" asked Akash. he was home today becuz he had a holiday due to some reason. "kuch khaas nahi. Sab bahot khush hain aur besabri se mera intezaar kar rahe hain" Manyata said as she pressed some clothes inside. She wasn't actually planning to take anything because she already had everything at there. She planned to take some dishes which she had prepared. "kitne dino tak ja rahi ho?" Akash asked sitting on the bed beside her small bag. "pata nahi. Abhi tak decide nahi kiya kuch" she zipped the bag and turned around to go. "meri yaad ayegi?" Akash asked. God knows shy, but he did. Manyata with bewilderment stared at him for a couple of seconds n then turned away to go. He sighed and rested his hands on the bed. His mind all blank. Manyata returned with a small Tiffin. She kept it in her bag. "tumhe drop karne keliye ayu?" he asked her without looking at her. She looked at him thru the corner of her eye. After a while she answered "nahi koyi jarurat nahi hain. Kal car bhijwa rahe hain, I'll go" she said. "ok" Akash said and left. Manyata felt weird.

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"Uday…" J squelled. God knows why but right from the morning she was behaving like a typical teen girl, getting excited in every little thing. Uday nearly dropped the phone from his hands. "kya hua J! don't shout. Why r u so excited? Umm… let me guess. Koi nayi machli jaal me fasi? I mean any new guy? Or is it related to K n L??" Uday replied smirking. J made the worst irritated face ever. "ughh shut up. U know what…" J continued after a pause " jiji is coming." Uday was stunned. "Really? Devgadh arahi hain! That's great!" Uday excitedly replied. "wait, abhi pura batake nahi hua. she is going to come for lunch so u n Unnati come over for lunch" J said settling down on her bed. "well umm… that's great. I'll check whether I hav a work or meeting. If no I'll come or otherwise I'll send Unnati" said Uday. "Uday," J sighed "make it for the lunch. I am not going to hear a NO from u. did u just get that?" J said bossing over him though she hated that. "ok J, I'll come for the lunch with Unnati" Uday replied. "ok then see u tomorrow. Bye" J chirped. "The Singhs…tick" she said. "Vijay bhai… Uday n Unnati in" she called out to Vijay who was just outside the room doing something. "Great" Vijay said. "now that's going to be fun" J said to herself

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Come night. All had just finished their dinner. J ran in DS's study. "areh beta, aap agayi? Vijay kaha hain? Dikhayi nahi de rahe" DS said to J. "he must be coming. Might be talking with bua sa or washing his hands" J said as she sat on one of the two chairs before DS. Vijay came in running. "am I late? I am sorry" he said as he made is place on the remaining chair. " Nah its ok u r on time" DS said as she closed the file in her hands . "the same, which was a few months ago…" J n said Vijay said in unison. DS sighed and looked at them.

~FLASHBACK (A FEW MONTHS AGO. The night before the day of Manyata's marriage to Akash)~

"DS, jo kuch horaha hain wo sahi nahi hain" J barged inside her office without knocking. DS was standing behind her chair resting her one hand on the chair while other held the phone. Seeing her talk on the phone, J apologized and went out of the study. Vijay came at the gateway of DS's office. "kya hua? tum andar nahi gayee?" asked Vijay. "DS phone pr baat kr rahi hain" J replied. Soon both were called inside by DS. "kya huaJ aap aisi bina permission liye andar kyun aayi? Kya sahi nahi horaha?" DS asked asked as she sat down on her chair. J n Vijay looked at each other and said together. "Manyata jiji aur Akash ki shaadi." And that led to an hour long conversation between the grandmother and her grandchildren. And finally the conclusion was that Manyata should be given sometime. She would realize, living in chawl, that the palaces are the place for her and she is born for being and working as a royal and not for being housewife. The grandchildren loved the discussion with their grandma. And soon it was decided that every night, both will come in the office after the supper. After Manyata now they both were to be responsible for all the Riyasat work. Every night both will come, sit n discuss with Ds the happenings in the whole day, their views on that, her views on those things, and the Riyasat work.

~END OF FLASHBACK~

"aap ne toh kaha tha that she would realize n she wud return" J said. "haan. And now toh she is really getting adjusted back in chawl" Vijay added with a frightened expression. DS relaxed back in her chair. "kuch karo DS or otherwise it will be too late" said a worried J. "let's see ab wo aayi hain to kuch karenge. I'll go and talk to her" DS said. "DS ab I think its high time that we use our bramhastra" Vijay said seriously. Ds looked stunned. "kya kehna kya chahte hain aap Vijay?" DS asked. "DS aapne bhi toh kisise vadaa kia hain ke Uday aur Manyata ki shaadi hogi. Aur aap ki jubaan ka maan rakhna ye Manyata bhai ka pehla kartawya (duty) hain. The contract with Giri uncle" said Vijay. DS looked at me realizing how bright her grandson had become. "Vijay, hume bhi ye baat yaad hain. Hum bhi ye contract ke naam pr use rok sakte the, but then, Manyata khush nahi rehti. Hume pata nahi wo kaise react karti. Aapne dekha hi, hum sab jab use rokne ki koshish kar rahe the tb wo kaise react kr rahi thi?" DS said. "jab tak use realize hoga, bahot der hogayee hogi shayd" J said sadly. DS looked at her and flashed a bright smile. "Better late than never. Jyada door nahi hain wo din. I know" DS assured both of them. The other discussions started as usual of Riyasat work and the day's happenings.

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Edited by iluvmanveer - 12 years ago
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"J bas karo. Tum puri ki puri shake ho rahi ho! Aur hume bhi hil arahi ho!" Uday remarked. J was was shaking her legs comtinuosly n by each passing second, they were getting more feirceful. J didn't even take the efforts of saying him sorry. She just rolled her eyes and propped up her chin on her hands which rested on her moving knees. "J bhai seriously stop moving. Hum dono hil rahe hain" Vijay said. though there was ample space and none was there on any other seat except Unnati on one couch, J was sitting between the two guys moving like a retard. She was getting by each passing moment becuz her jiji wasn't comeing and it was getting to the lunch time. Komal and Menaka were in kitchen instruction the chefs about the recipies. DS and Brijraj were in the study and all the four "children" were in the living room. "jiji ne had kardi. Kitni der!!" J said and this time all three rolled their eyes cuz J had said this sentence umpteen number of times.

"Jainandini!" aah, no one had called out her name more sweetly. "Jiji" J said and sat up straight, relieving Vijay and Uday. All looked towards the door and there she was at the door. Without uttering a word, J ran towards her and hugged her with her full force nearly making her fall. "woah, dheere" Manyata said and hugged J back. Next was Vijay and he hugged more lightly than J but that was a strong hug. By now all had come out enjoying the reunion. Unnati came next and Manyata was really happy to see both of them there. She hugged Unnati and after Unnati came Uday. "How r u princess?" he asked in the sweetest voice he could and that was very much refreshing for Manyata. "Awesome, just like u seem to be" they both chuckled and Manyata hugged Uday. "aah , that's so warm and refreshing. U r never going to leave her" his mind said to him. He was craving for her since long. And before he could strengthen the hug more, he left her. He feared he would go ahead. Komal came and hugged her daughter. That was a very long hug. She took blessings of all elders, and hugged all Brijraj, Menaka and DS. It pricked everyone seeing Manyata in a typical chawl-ish sari with some "Jiji chalo hume bahot bhook lagi hain!" J said and pulled her towards the dining table. All followed the two sisters.

*********************************************************************************************all were eating the lunch happily. "Uday, Unnati" DS said. Both looked at her. "Manyata yaha saat din reh rahi hain. Hain na Manyata beta?" Manyata nodded in yes. "toh why don't u both stay here too?" she kept her proposal. Well that was an interesting one. "hume koi problem nahi hain" Unnati said and Uday nodded in yes. "Awesome!" Manyata said.

Soon the meal was over and the four youngsters were down in the living room while Manyata was in her room taking a bath and changing into her usual anarkali. Aah.. how much she loved it. She hated to ware saree. She came down the stairs nearly running. She came at sat beside J. Very intelligently and smartly, Uday had selected his place. He was sitting besides J, leaving one place between him n J for Manyata to accommodate.

"so jiji, tell us aap din bhar chawl me karti kya hain?" J asked excitedly. Well that was surprising for Manyata. "ab aise kaise bata sakte hain?" she said. "umm… ab subah uth kar I get ready first of all. I cook. Then make breakfast for us, fir lunch banati hu for Akash and pack his tiffin. Then after he goes, I wash clothes I mean washing machine me laga deti hu kabhi kabhi, and fir bartan saaf karti hu" Manyata said recollecting, though she was doing all this for many months. " u wash the utensils? U cook?" came questions from Vijay and J. "yeah" Manyata looked at both of them. "don't miss over the details princess" Uday added. All looked at Uday bewildered. "how in the world does he know?" they thought. Uday realized his mistake and said " I mean jo humne suan hain, uske hisabse keh rahe hain. The TAP FIGHTS. Hain na princess?" he said tossing his eyebrows. Manyata chuckled and said, "yeah, hote hain." "matlab kya hota hain?" asked Unnati. Manyata looked at Uday in confusion and went on explaining. Somehow she tried her best to tell them, and all of them were so amused to know that the sophisticated princess would be screaming and fighting at top of her voice.

*********************************************************************************************"let's do something interesting" Manyata said. "I have a game" J said. all looked at J. "its called STD- Stare Dare Truth" she said as if naming some great. All burst out laughing hearing the game's name. "yeh kyta baccho jaise games khelne keliye keh rahi ho J!" Uday remarked. "u just don't know how much fum it is. Hum aur K jab L ke ghar gaye the tab uske younger cousins ke saath khel rahe the and that's really fun!" she said. "lets give it a try" Manyata said. "oh please princess. Tum bhi J ki side le rahi ho! Its childish. Bachpan me bhi humne aise gahtiya khel nahi khele" Uday said. "don't call it ghatiya its AWESOME" J remarked. Uday stuck his tongue out n said "I bet it's the worst game ever invented." "u r simply hopeless Uday. Jab kheloge tab pata chalega how much fun it is!!" J said. "bas karo aap dono. Lets giv it a try" Unnati said. "Chotti?" Uday remarked. "yeah lets do it. Bachpan me nahi khele toh ab khelte hain" Unnati said. "that's it! Majority wins. All three girls say yes so u too guys hav e to listen. Let's go in terrace in play" J said. Vijay and Uday looked hopelessly at each other.

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J had told one of the servants to get one empty bottle to the terrace. Now the 5 of them were sitting in a circle. Manyata was now in between Vijay and J, opposite Unnati and Uday. "ok so lets start. Hope I don't need to explaine the rules. U might hav understood it from the name, but still I'll tell u all" J said and explained the rules. (Hope I don't need to explain those to u guys. Hope u must be knowing it.If not, PM me. 🤣 ) "ok now lets start" she said and made the bottle spin. All concentrated on the bottle. Slowly its speed reduced and lo! It stopped. And the mouth of the bottle pointed towards J. "oh" J sighed and all giggled. "ok I'll choose dare" J said trying to be very daring and adventurous. "ok J ko dare hum denge" Vijay said. he thought n thought n thought. N then his face was as bright as the sun. he signaled Uday to bring his ear near to Vijay. Vijay whispered something in Uday's ear and both burst out laughing, rolling on the floor. J gulped and helplessly looked at the girls. "ok here it goes" Vijay said. "u have to wear saree for the whole day tomorrow and u have to be without make up for the whole day. U can't even apply simple talcum powder on ur face. No nail polish, no mascara, no lipstick, lip gloss. We really wanna see how u actually look J bhai" Vijay winked. J started wide eyed at Vijay. Manyata and Unnati suppressd there laughter. "jiji" J was going to burst out crying anytime. "its ok. I and Unnati will help u" Manyata said and Unnati nodded in yes. "saree jaruri hain? Anarkali chalega?" J asked. "no. wo to tumne Manyata bhai ke shaadi ke waqt pehna tha. Saree." Vijay said and Uday laughed even harder. Manyata narrowed her eyes and looked at Uday. Immediately, Uday stopped laughing. "ok now I think its high time that we resume the game" Uday said and all agreed. Once again J turned the bottle and it spinned. Slowly the bottle stopped and the mouth pointed towards Uday. He smacked his forehead and all laughed. Now Uday thought, "stare is cheap, not for me. Dare , OMG horrifying dares are given. Though I can take up dare, I'll not or otherwise it will looked as I am following J. and even Dare is already taken. LETS TAKE UP TRUTH" his mind finalized. "ok I'll take truth" Uday announced. J's mind got to work. "I'll give the question" Unnati said. AHA! The perfect question hit J's mind. She signaled Unnati to come near. Reluctantly she came. J whispered the question and Unnati was in shock. "NO" Unnati said whispered. "YES" J said. Unnati was scared n that was clearly written on her face. "we need to talk" J said. she held Unnati by her arm and pulled her aside. "hey that's not fair. Vijay banna ne aisa nahi kiya tha" Uday said. J stuck her tongue out and took Unnati aside. After a couple of seconds, they came n sat. "Unnati ask" J nudged her an d Unnati was nearly taken aback. "ME?" she said. "YES" J ordered. "OK" was all Unnati had to say. "Dada," she closed her eyes and said "tell us the name of the women whom u love with ur whole heart." And that was a BOMB. Uday looked at his sister in disbelief n then at J. and J gave him mischievous smile. "Unnati" Uday replied. "ughh… thats but natural Uday. U know what Unnati meant" J protested. "on top of that it's the truth game now and u cant cheat. Cross ur hearts. Royals never lie" J said. ughh… that was the weak point. Uday took in a deap breath closed his eyes and said "MANYATA
GUYS DONT COME TO CONCLUSIONS. PICTURE ABHI BAAKI HAIN
WELL FOR UR DISAPPOINTMENT, NO PROMO!!
I REQUEST ALL TO ATLEAST PLEASE HIT A LIKE.
IT REALLY COUNTS
IT TOOK ME A LOT OF TIME TO WRITE THIS AND I EXPECT A GOOD RESPONSE. DONT DISAPPOINT ME!
yours:
PRANKS AKA SANJU
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Posted: 12 years ago
GUYS PLZ IGNORE GRAMATICAL MISTAKES! POST KARNESE PEHLE PADHA NAHI 😛 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago


Yippe me first to comment

Awesome !!!

Loved the double update ...

I agree with DS better late than never ...
Hope Manveer happens gradually


Stare , Dare , truth ??
I hav only played truth or dare
What does a person have to do if they choose stare ??😃

thanks for the PM
Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb updates Sanju 👏.

I can't believe I'm saying this but ... I LOVED JAI HERE🤣 . She's so spirited , I wish that version we could've seen in the show! DS /Vijay/ Jai 's part in the study was very interesting.
Ds planned for Uday & Unnati to stay for the week also ... AWESOME!
The game was fun ...
loved the dare that Vijay gave Jai (very innovative Sanju👍🏼).
Uday 's "truth" ... what do I say🤔 ...
I think that Uday is in the process of asking Manyata something , not actually taking her name!
Also ... the fact that u(sanju) didn't use closed inverted coma's after Manyata's name ... makes me say the above!
So ... AM I RIGHT😉? (PM me ... 🤣)
Loved the chapters Sanju ,
thanks for the dedication😳 (I'm touched!)
Thanx for updating on the day itself😉.
Please continue A.S.A.P
Thank u for the PM😊.
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am sorry for the late reply
it was awesome
loved it
awn jai was super cute
thank you for double update
loved both the chappy
the story is very intresting
the game i just loved it
awnn poor jai
wonder how she will manage
wat did uday tell her name or not?
you kept me hanging?
thankd for the pm
Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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thanks for the double update,bt kya point pe khatam kiya yaar,ab w8 kaise karu!!!!!😳😳 ds is veryy intelligent,she knws her grnddauhter too well😊😊 j and manyata bnding iss lovely!!!!!
woow std!! i know only truth or dare (kya stare choose karne se oppste bethe insan ko stare karna hota hai?? i am trying to put my ideas😆 do tel me stare mein kya hota hai then i can also play dis game😉) waise game superb thi!! bechari j sarre,without makeup😆 o my god,last qstn was sacchhhi a bomb!! and uday's answer dhamaka!!!!😉 cant wait for ur nxt update😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
SANJU DEAR, MIND BLOWING UPDATES.LOVED IT LOADS.WELL DONE SANJU.👏👏👏

THANK GOD SANJU U HAVENT MADE J A TYPICAL VAMP.I AM FED WID DAT TYPE J.DIS J IS SO CUTE CHILDISH N MOST IMP SHE LOVES MANYATA.HAAWW SANJU 😲 U MADE J TO THINK DAT MANYATA IS EXPECTING AKASHS CHILD 🤣

I LUV DS.KYA PLANNING KIYA HAI.DS MADE UV N UNNATI TO STAY IN DEVGARH PALACE.VERY INTELLIGENT.🤣 KAASH SAB KO AISA DAADI MILA HOTA.VB J DS.NICE TEAM WORK.

DS SAID CORRECT.BETTER LATE DAN NEVER.HOPE UDAY N MANYATA END UP TOGEHTER SOON BEFORE IT BCOMES TOO LATE.

DEN STARE DARE TRUTH PART.SANJU WAT IF ANYONE CHOOSES STARE.DEY HAVE TO STARE AT OTHER HUUH🤣TUM NE BHI KYA GAME DOOND KAR LAYA HAI.😆 .IT WAS SO NICE DEAR.

AT LAST IT CAME OUT OF UDAYS MOUTH IN FRONT OF MANYATA.MAY B INDIRECTLY.HOPE MANYATA UNDERSTANDS ITS MEANING.OR U HAVE PLANNED SOMETHING ELSE😲 DAT QUOTES IS NOT CLOSED.

LOVED D TWO UPDATES SO MUCH SANJU.EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT CHAPPY. CONTINUE SOON. DANXS FOR PM N DOUBLE UPDATE.
Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey... ur double update made my day...
It was so touching...
Atlast J is an idol sis..
I luv J for planning that game...
Even we play it in school...
And it really confeses and reveals a lot...
J's dare was so funny...
I hope uday really said Manyata...
But I know that wud just be hope...
Thanks for the pm...
Update soon...

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