||Better Late Than Never||CHAP 8 new on pg 36 *New

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Back with a story guys. Actually, it's too big for an os, n too short for a ff. This is just like Dekha Ek Khwaab. The story starts from the time when Manyata is coroneted. In this story, Uday hasn't killed Akash. Manyata herself told Akash not to meet her at any cost. And after coronation, J realized her mistake, and she now treats Manyata as her elder sister and is happy to have her. In this process, Uday and Manyata hav became best of friends.

Enough of my bak-bak, I'll giv u a prologue. Do tell wether u liked it or no.

It was the time when Manyata got reminded that she had got a vaada from DS that when she will become a yuvraani, she will be married of to Akash. She wants to get married to Akash. It was decided that the marriage will be very low key. No baadi dhum dhaam. Manyata doesn't pay any head to what her heart and head is shouting to do, she just gets carried away with the thing. It's like a prize or rather proof that she has achieved something great in her life. Akash is offered a job. Manyata starts living with him in the chawl. Now no one is against Manyata, not even Brijraj.

The first update starts from the day, after a few months of Manyata and Akash's marriage.

Manyata is sick of living in chawl as no one likes her now. One day she is very much fed up.

The story ends with ManVeer. So basically, it's a journey from MonAsh to ManVeer

Do like and comment

Your replies are very necessary for me. Tomorrow there is practical exam and I am writing this. please please give a reply, or I'll not continue.

Your pranks aka sanju

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Posted: 12 years ago
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sounds really nice😛
please continue soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chamakchallo30

sounds really nice😛

please continue soon👍🏼

thanx for the compliment dear. will comtinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sounds very good..

Do continue soon... and don't forget to send PMs 😈🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one...Cont soon...n pm me okay🤣
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@hml- haan baba
@ria- ok, butu padhing
@sweta- aalsi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

@hml- haan baba
@ria- ok, butu padhing
@sweta- aalsi

oyee..alsi hogi tu haa nahi toh air ye HML kon hai?
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Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

oyee..alsi hogi tu haa nahi toh air ye HML kon hai?

hml matlab hasmukh lal. aur ye sniggles ka naam hain. wo keh rahi thi ke uske gharpar aane wale dhobi ka bhi yahi naam hain
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SOUNDS AWESOME DO CONINUE AND THX FOR PM

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