MG SS~VEIL LOVE~ Part 10, pg-80@9Feb2014 - Page 35

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Posted: 12 years ago

superb update

even me too wonder y geet is not saying anything???

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Posted: 12 years ago
maan insulted geet infront of all
why he didnot know her
past maan is concerned 4 geet..
but he is totally changed y
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
one side maan insulting geet in college in front of all
other side in past maan was trying to support her
can't bear the pain in her eyes
but no wht's going on ?
I'm confused😕
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Part 7

Maan start walking to unknown destination, he doesn't know where he will go, and he doesn't know even the road properly. This world is big, there r so many places, he find someplace for him. He is alone, he doesn't have care anyone, nor he have listen anyone, or he have to see some nonsense where people doesn't know how to treat human. Now he free, he did what he wanted, he left that place, that people than y he is not happy he should be happy what he done.

But no!

He is not happy at all

Then what he is?

Angry

Yes!

'Yes he is very angry'

With sister

With father

With mother

With everyone

Even with him.

He can't do anything to change the situation, he can't do anything because he is helpless, and he had never been this kind of helpless, because destiny is not his side, it is playing game with him and he can't do anything.

A tear fall from his eyes, he wiped it quickly he don't want to show anyone he is weak, he is helpless, even to himself. He is strong. Million times he say himself 'I'm not weak' but he is breaking down each day. Everyone wants him to understand but no one wants to understand him. He is carving for love. From loved one mother father who will understand him.

*****

Anjali is busy in making bed for sleeping.

Maan called her 'Di'

Without looking at him she answered him 'hmm'

He again called her 'Di'

She sat on the bed and looked at him 'what! u wants to say sorry for the morning behaviour, isn't it? No need to say sorry, actually I am sorry for what I said'Anjali smiled patted her hand next side of bed 'come here' for 1 second she thought she lost him forever, 'what she will say to her mom and dad he left them' she felt like dying, he throw out all his frustration, anger, pain on her, but whom she will tell that how she is feeling, when he came back again her contentment knew no boundary, it is difficult for him with sudden changes but he will make it .

Maan went next to her and laid his head on Anjali's lap and hugged her. She caressed his hair 'u r missing mom and dad, hmm'Maan nodded his head 'u know dad never wants us live us in this place, he will take us back soon, he just need sometime, again we will with mom and dad, just only few days' he again nodded

Anjali added 'do you want anything?' He nodded no

*

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After few minutes of silenceMaan asked 'Y she is working here?'

'Who?'

'That girl' he said

'That girl doesn't have any name' Anjali smiled

'Yep, she has her name is Geet, u know her' he said

'Oh, Geet, yep I know her, she is very beautiful na'

'Hmm'Maan nodded his head unknowingly.

Anjali chuckled 'actually in this village she is the most beautiful girl, many girls are jealous of her beauty, truly speaking she don't show off at all, she is very cute, I love her'

Maan asked 'than y everyone is very rude with her, y she is working here'.

'I know that even I don't like her to work here, but everything is not in our hand, there r many thing we can't change, she doesn't have any parents, she have only bua in her family, but her earning is that much so she have to work'

'We also lost our business and palace but they don't behave with us like this'

'oh god' Anjali thought 'I will make this boy understand, According this place we are most richest person we belong to Thakur/zamidar group, for us have she like one of us but in village there are lot of differences in classes, in cities there is no differences but here peoples mentality is different'

Then she explained him everything. ThoughMaan understand, whatever he doesn't want to work her here or not anywhere.

******

Geet came to Anjali's room and from the door she is sneaking to room. Anyone is there or not.

'tumhe kuch chayiya' Anjali asked from behind [do u want anything]

'Ha...woh...' Geet fumbled 'dadi neh appko yeh dena key liya bolo' she handed the things to Anjali and start going from there. [dadi said to give u this]

'Wait Geet' Anjali stopped her 'tum kaya ja rahe ho' [where r u going]

Geet turned to her 'nahi mujhe ab chalna chiya, bohut der ho gaya hay' [I should go now]

'Kya hum bate kar sakte hai' Anjali asked her [can we talk?]

She nodded her head

'ader chale'[shall we]Anjali indicated to come inside. She is looking here and there 'kuch problem hai'[ do u any problem]

'Ha...woh...nahi' she stammered 'woh hain' [he is there]

'Woh kaun?' [Who]

'Apki bahi' she said [ur brother]

'Oh!Maan, nahi toh woh yeha peh nahi hai, kiu tumhe kuch kam tah'[no he is not here, do u have work with him]

'nahi nahi' she replied quickly 'mujhe unse kuch kam nahi hain' [No no, I don't have any work with him]

'Toh tumne kiu pucha?'[then y did u asked?]

'Woh mujse naraz hai' Geet replied [he is angry with me]

'Nahi toh' Anjali said 'kisne kya tumse woh tumse naraz hai?' [no, he is not, who said to u?]

Geet told her when she came; she saw thatMaan was shouting at her.

'Maan tumare bajese naraz main nahi tha, woh toh kuch aur tha, ho sirf dekne main ase hain, bahar se sakt aur ander se naram' she explained her 'aur joh tumhe jo socha bilkul galat hai, kiu ki...' ['Maan is not angry becaoz of u, he look like this from outside he is hard and inside he is soft' she explained her 'what u have thought its totally wrong, becoz..]

~~~ Flashback End ~~~

'kiu ki[becoz] u can't misjudge a person with a single action or u can't make a prediction when u haven't meet him properly, and u have created baseless assumption about that person, he is like this and like that,he will be rude with u, he will insult u, he might me different form that what u had thought, May be, may be,Maan might be different ' Meera explained Geet

'Ok di!' Geet sighed 'I know that, plz di no more lecture about him, u want me to talk with him, I will talk' Geet give a big cheesy smile showing all the white teeth 'so now u r happy'

Geet expression change to serious 'but if, I am saying if di, he behave like one of nuts than he is going to see my worst side' she said gnashing her teeth.

'Again if, Geet I will seriously murder your if for sure' Meera said furiously.

Whoops! No more Assumption

Geet mind ring bell 'Geet y u r bringing death with your own hand'

Idea!

'Ya ALLAH, di from when mom is calling for breakfast, come fast' Geet said that and run out room quickly.

Saved!

*****

Sipping orange juice 'Do I have to see your face every morning?'Maan said to Arjun

'Y what's wrong with my face, I am also handsome, hai na di' Arjun giving hi-five to Anjali

'I am only interested in girls'Maan said and turned to Anjali 'and di, u r my side or his side'

'both side' Anjali chuckled '1 more thing Arjun u don't about him, before he was allergic to girls, always run away from them, except one hai na Maan'

'Ohhh' Arjun smile

Maan rolled his eyes'I am done, if u done with ur chit-chat session, shall we'Maan got up from the chair.

'Wait wait' Arjun said 'how do u eat so fast'

Maan give kissed to mom cheek while going 'I am going mom, bye'

Arjun did the same 'bye, aunty'

'Excuse me'Maan said raising his eyebrow

'What?' Arjun said

'She is my mom'Maan said with an attitude. 'U can't kiss her'

'She is ur mom but she is my aunty so I have right to kiss'

'It's ok' Ayesha smiled patting both of their cheek 'u both r my son'

When they both came out 'what kind of friend you are, 'u broke engagement with Sameera and u didn't inform me' Arjun faked glowered

'What the hell!!'Maan frowned 'why should I?'

'Oh God! Then! Where is your ring? U lost the ring?'

*****

'Ring, Di, my ring' Geet shouted 'I am not getting my engagement ring, Di do something, see I am not getting my ring'

'See it will be there' Meera said 'who will take ur ring'

'Seriously I am not getting my ring, I kept it here yesterday' she looked up start her cribbing session 'hey Allah, what I will do know, plz plz do something' and her nonstop babbling 'Di, what if I lost it, hey Allah what they will think of me, I can't handle 1 ring properly what kind of girl I am, hey Allah!'

'Before happening something start making prediction what they will think, iss ladki ka kuch nahi ho sakta' Meera muttered under her breath.

'Mom did u saw her ring?' Meera asked Rano

'Oh main toh to batana bul gaya, ki maine kal liye tha, Geet nay kaha ki uski ring bara hai, iss liya unk log kaya ki , jewellery shop tik karne ke liya' Rano said[ oh i forgot to say, khushi said her ring is big so they said to give it jewellery shop for resizing]

'Thank u, thank u' Geet give her tight hug from when she searching, at last she got relieved and Rano give Meera what-happen look.

Meera showed her she-is-crazy.

Geet turned Meera with bright smile 'Di, I thought I lost it'

Meera said 'thank God'

*****

'Thank God' Arjun sighed 'I thought...'

Maan cut him middle 'I thought what by wearing this ring I will announce everyone that I am engaged, Oh hell no! I have told u before the engagement is not official announced, and what makes u think that' He said with evil smirk'And how can I miss my bachelor life, this is the life you can do anything means anything, so enjoy it fullest way' gave a wink to Arjun slid inside the car.

'You are damn terrific dude!' Arjun said and got his own car.

*****

'Car is waiting' Meera said to Geet and she is busy in admiring mirror.

'1 minute' Geet said while curving a line on eye with a blue kohl, coating eyelashes with mascara and lips with pink lip gloss.

Geet turned to Meera and playfully fluttering her eyes lashes 'is it ok'

'Beautiful' Meera said

'Lair' Geet responded in low voice 'I know, I am not'

Meera didn't hear what she said 'Geet, tell me what is the use of lipstick who is gonna see it'

'Oh di, no one will see, but u r buying it not using it, u know na, wasting is devil's brother, so I am utilizing it, see' Geet kissed Meera run out of the room and smiled at her victory.

'Geettt' Meera shouted from behind 'I just hate this' everyday she is doing, Geet gave a flying kiss.

*****

'Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Guys4 late' Geet apologize while sitting backseat of the car

'Geet I many I told no sorry no thank u in the friendship' Annie said

'Yep Geet' khushi agreed

'Seriously guys I gonna kill that person who made such rule, if don't say friend that whom I say, huh! Enemy' Geet made a male voice 'Enemy, thank u very much 4 being my enemy and sorry because if u dig 1 feet hole 4 me than I will dig 5 feet'

'Oh God, 5 feet' everyone laugh out at her statement 'enemy Beware! Of Geet' Annie said

'oh this 🤬signal' Annie said 'I just hate it'

'See, started X-rated word' Geet said and sudden there a big bang on the middle of the road.

Geet and khushi shouted in unison 'ANNIE' looking at her accusing look

'What, I didn't do that; I am sitting in here, I was just checking my make up in the mirror, give a kiss to myself, if that bhudda is looking here and driving than what is my fault' Annie cleared herself 'Guys u should thankful to me, he didn't hit our car'

Everyone burst out laughing; Geet said 'boys, they will never change'

'Never! Ever! they will change' Maan shouted when he saw front car hit the other car he is getting late and now this accident 'I don't understand y they give licence to girls, when they can't drive a single car properly' he said without seeing inside the car. When the man came out of the car.

'What the hell!!'Maan got biggest shock of wrong assumption, he is MSK he never bow down even in front of him so now his accusation changed 'thank God, he didn't hit my car otherwise no one save him from me'

'Guys see that car is damn cool' Annie pointed to black Bugatti Veyron


'Annie sit quietly, and wear ur seat belt' Geet warned here

'If 1 more accident, your fault, Annie' Khushi teased her

*****

In this University people are from different country, culture so there is no restriction on the dress code. Khushi parked the car respective parking and they got down.

Annie's dress


Khushi's dress

*****

and Geet's dress Next update

Precape-Maan and Geet face to face this time reality no assumption.

But Maan is going meet with 'veil girl'.

*****

*Rano adopted Geet later on and village part geet don't know english.

*****

Plz ignore the grammatical and Hindi mistake

Plzz do comment and hit the like button😳


Disclaimer: This is just a fiction. Any names, characters, occupation and places of residence, incidents are all my imagination. Any resemblance to any profession, any similar scene to any other fiction or actual events is purely spontaneous.

Edited by fatima_FM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for their next meeting


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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update

so that was geet assumption

so she is going to meet maan in next update(real me)😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update fatima...
geet n her assumptions!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved it...
like is dead😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi
the up is good
so it was all geet's imagination and thank god otherwise i would have dislike mann to behave like this with a girl
anyways the flashback created and bought new side where it is shown how geet was treated when she was small and there was no one to protest for her
mann who had never seen such kind of girl so quite and calm feels really bad for her
me totally hope that geet should meet mann keeping aside all her negative thinkings
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
waiting for maaneet meeting
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely one...
thnks for the PM...

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