MG SS~VEIL LOVE~ Part 10, pg-80@9Feb2014 - Page 34

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i think geet has slapped maan

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amazing update

par thoda sa confusion hai maan ne geeta ko pehcgana kyu nahi aur maan ne bechari geet ki sab ke samne insult kar di

aur atlast geet ne maan ko thapad mara shayad maan ko thodi akal aa gyi hogi

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update soon

sorry for late reply

Y Maan heart didn't ring bell with Geet's name and y he didn't recognised her by her eyes? Here are your most awaiting answers.

Part 6

And next moment

'THUDD!'

1 loud sound echoed entire University.

Even if an explosive happen the people won't be this much silence

That 1 'slap' has done.

A Pin drop of silence.

'I have made a great mistake to talk with u' Geet said resentfully and start leaving that place.

Suddenly she was stopped she turned to look some is grabbing her wrist.

'How dare...' her voice stuck in the throat when she saw the person.

It was none other than

MAAN

1 forceful pull

In a blink of moment she hit his chest. Her one hand is on his torso and other is back which Maan is grabbing tightly. There was not 1 single gap pass air between their bodies.

She saw his jaw clenched tight, and his eyes turn into red just only 1 look can burn anyone into ashes.

'How dare u?' Maan said with gritting his teeth and increasing more pressure on her hand. Geet wriggle to remove her hand from his iron grip but in front of him she is nothing.

'Leave me' she tried to pushed him with one hand which was on the chest.

'Y? Now you was dying to be with me suddenly what happen, huh!' Maan said insulting but voice is harsh with anger. He didn't get any response except wriggling. As she is twisting more grip is getting tighter, she winched in pain

'Ahh! Leave my hand, its paining' Geet said pleading, the tear from in her orbs in any moment it will fall.

1of Maan's friend came tried to free Geet from Maan 'MSK leave her hand' Maan is nowhere to listen anyone still staring at her with rage. 'MSK leave her' he repeated again

Suddenly Maan pushed her freeing from him without caring she might fall. But Geet saved her from falling.

'Hey baby! Chillax' The girl said with extra honeyed placing her hand on his chest 'y u r making ur mood off for this low class people, they just need a rich boy to fall in their bait, when they think they magic is not going to work, so they just blabber all nonsense, just ignore her' she slipped her hand on his elbow pulled him. All of his friend went with him.

All alone

GEET

She is standing there without any reaction.

Never, never, ever anybody has insulted her like this.

'How he can do this?'

She raised her hand where her hand he clutched her hand she saw all finger marks visible in her in the hand

A tear slipped from hazel.

Still she is sitting in her bedroom, holding her teddy.

She made an assumption.

No! No! No!

She didn't make only 1 assumption, thousands of assumption of Maan made by her in subconscious mind.

In university Million of times

Yes!

Million times she planned to meet with Maan but every time she failed.

If she plans for 1 step, she will take 2 steps back.

'IF' has let her never dared to meet with Maan.

'If he doesn't recognise her'

'If he says who r u?'

'If he says I don't know u?'

'If he insults her?'

'If he mock about her in front of everybody'

'If this happen she will die of shame?'

99.99% negative

But only

0.01% positive

'If he doesn't behave like that at all?'

No guarantee!!!

'He is one of richest business tycoon son, why would he remember a mere a village girl, who am I to him'

NOTHING!

JUST NOTHING!

'Village girl' Meera said sarcastically 'Oh please don't me mockery to the closet, see! All the jeans and tops are laughing and telling what we doing in u r closet.' She tried to put some sense

'Di, where did jeans come from?' Geet said

Yes!

She is wearing jeans and tops

So what

Western clothes don't only mean reveal the body part you can also wear it in a decent way. It's just people mind 'if u daughter is wearing this kind of dress, she will corrupt or something' According to her believe 'to the pure is all things are pure' Everything's depends on you, if you are noble than whole world is noble.

Before she never wears this kind of western outfits, but now she is perfectly used to it. With the culture and society and people living style she adjusted it quiet easily.

~~~ Flashback ~~~

Adjusting is not an easy task for everyone. It's easy to say that by adding milk, sugar and rice u will make kheer but when u r going to prepare it u will find out how much difficult is to do 'easier said than done'. Maan is trying his best to mould in their shape but few things don't go with his way. When u don't like something, if everything is right also u will find fault in everything 'a bad workman quarrel with his tools'. Maan situation is also same.

1^st 'The place is inappropriate'

2^nd 'The behaviour of people incomprehensible'

Which Maan couldn't tolerate at all. He is sitting in the hall with the all cousins he is really irritated with them that also 'damn it!! I just hate girls, this family that family' and all their non-stop blabbers. He closed his eyes 'Oh God, plz help me' remembering the almighty now only HE is there so save him out of this.

Out of this his mind is stuck to one person

'Geet'

The name only touched smile on his lips.

From the morning he wants to 1 glance of her, his heart is fluttering like a new bird tried to fly for first time. But she busy in running from to and fro, he didn't like at all when someone is calling she is going and other is calling there 'what's wrong with her'. Everyone introduced themselves but about her no one, that night he didn't ask Anjali about her, but his mind is wavering relentlessly about her.

He wanted to know everything related to her all question. 'Everything means everything'

He is also confused with his mind in city also he never talked with the girl, always keep away from them. May be because of her angelic beauty he had never seen before. He just causally asked Sameera about her 'who is she?' Sameera is one of the far relative friend's daughter.

'Y?'

'Just like that' he replied

'Oh, she just works here' she added

'Par how she can work, woh toh bohot choti hay, shayed 9/10 saal ki hogi' He explained [But how she can work, she so small, may be 9/10 years']

'nahii' Sameera protested 'ohh mujhse bari hay, tumeh thori na pata hai, aur tum nahi janta ho usse ek number ki kaam chor hai, hamesha bahana dunta rahete hai kaam nahi karne ke liye' [she is elder than me, u don't even know her, she is no.1 work thief, she always find out trick to get rid of work]

Maan didn't like the way she talked about her, he understand Sameera is telling lies about her age but 1 think pricked his heart 'y she is working' he wanted to know about it, he decided not to talk this with Sameera again she will say some imprudent .

'Geet' Sameera shouted

Geet came running like she is going miss her last train. Maan chuckled at her behaviour. When Geet came panting she stumble to fall, Maan caught her hand from tripping 'sha-balke' he said with concern [careful].

Geet looked him with that doe shaped eyes, suddenly Maan missed a heartbeat

'See, I told u na she is so clumsy, ever time find a way to not to do the work' Sameera said it angrily to Maan and turned to Geet 'aur tuhje itna der kiu laga kitne der se tujhe bula rahi hu' [and y did u take so much time,how many times i called u]

Maan is looked at Sameera at awe she called Geet 1 time and she is telling she called her many times 'such a big liar I have never seen in life!' he thought with gritting his teeth. He is becoming more angry with Geet y she is not saying something.

'Say something, damn it!'

Sameera ordered her 'aur jake jaldi se humre liye nashta lekar ay, Maan ko buk lage ha' [bring some snacks for us, Maan is very hungry]

'WHAT! NO' Maan almost shouted, Geet got trembled with sudden loud voice of him.

'Clam down! Clam down! Maan slowly u r making her scare' he thought 'u already shouted at her before'

'nahi muhje bilkul buk nahi ha' he said softly to Sameera. [I am not hungry at all]

'tumne saubha tohra se kya ab to buk laga hai na' Sameera talk with him so warmly and she saw Geet is still standing she yelled at her 'kari kari mare muh kya dekhe rahi hai, jaldi ja' without saying anything she just ran out there.[u have little breakfast in the morning now u must be hungry' Sameera talk with him so warmly and she saw Geet is still standing she yelled at her 'y u r staring my face, go fast' without saying anything she just ran out from there.

Maan couldn't make y Sameera is behaving with her like this 'I just hate it, I just hate it' Maan mind is not ready accept the fact. So many questions running in his mind

'Why she is not saying anything?'

'Why she have to listen to them?'

'Why she have to work here?'

'Why?'

'Why?'

'Why damn it? Why?'

After seeing this Maan really don't have any kind of appetite to have something. Geet bought the food.

'pani kaha hai' Sameera snapped out

Aranv saw the jug was five steps far from her, he got up to bring it, Sameera hold his hand 'tum kha ja rahe ho,tum beh-tow' she made him sit and gave angry glare to Geet, she ran to bring the jug [where u r going, sit here]

Sameera start blaming her 'ek kaam dahng se nahi kar sakte' [1 work she can't do properly]

From when he is seeing, she is working nonstop, without reason she is listing silently such accusation, now his anger had reach highest peak of. He shouted at Sameera 'bas, bohut ho gaye, mujhe kuch nahi kana hai, kabse se dekh rah hu...' [Enough is enough; I don't want to eat anything, since when I am seeing...]

Before he could complete Sameera's mother reached there 'kya hua Maan betha, chilla kiu rahe ho' [what happen Maan behta, y r u shouting]

Maan just opened his mouth to say something Sameera interrupted between 'sab kuch Geet ki baje se, ek cheez bhi tik se nahi karte' [all becoz of Geet, 1 thing she can't do properly]

Maan opposed 'Nahi Aunty, ase kuch bhi nahi, oh toh...' [No aunty, it's nothing like that, I was saying...]

Sameera's mother cut him between 'nahi betha, jabse tum iss ghar peh aye ho tabse dekh rahe ho yeh hamesha kuch na kuch na galtiya kar rahi hai' she turned to Geet 'maine tujhse kha hain na agle barr kuch galtiya nahi hona chayiya' Geet nodded her head 'dobara koi bhi galtiya hui toh mujhse bura koi nahi hogi, ab jao yah se'['no betha, from when u came here, from that time noticing she is doing mistakes' she turned to Geet 'didn't I said to u from next time I don't any mistakes' Geet nodded her head 'if again u did any mistakes u will see the worst side of me, now go from her']

Maan noticed Geet there was tinge of hurt in her eyes, he don't y he feel somebody had stab his heart with dagger.

After that incident Maan escorted to Nani's house he saw Anjali busy in doing something she didn't saw him.

'When we are going?' Maan asked

'What?' Anjali frowned at his query.

'When. We. Are. Going?' he again repeated each word separately with loud voice.

'What's wrong with u Maan?' Anjali said little bit angrily with his behaviour.

Maan screamed out 'YOU ARE ASKING ME WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME, HUH! NOTHING IS WRONG WITH ME, EVERYTHING IS WRONG HERE, DO YOU UNDERSTAND EVERYTHING WRONG IS HERE, EVERYTHING MEANS EVERYTHING, PLACE ARE WRONG, PEOPLE ARE WRONG, EVERYTHIN IS WRONG, WE CAN'T STAY HERE, THIS IS NOT OUR PLACE, AND THIS IS NOT FOR US AT ALL' whatever complain, anger, frustration, pain was there in his heart, he all burst out on poor Anjali.

'Please Maan we can't go, try to understand' Anjali said pleading tone.

'WHY? I SHOULD UNDERSTAND EVERYTIME, WHY? WHY DON'T YOU TRY TO UNDERSTAND, I JUST HATE THIS PLACE, DO YOU UNDERSTAND I JUST HATE THIS PLACE, I CAN'T LIVE HERE, FOR 1 SECOND I CAN'T LIVE HERE, DO YOU UNDERSTAND, IF YOU WANT TO STAY HERE, JUST STAY, I DON'T CARE, BUT I AM NOT GOING TO STAY HERE, DO YOU UNDERSTAND I AM NOT' Maan took his baggage just went out of from there banging the door, leaving behind speechless Anjali.

But 1 person witnessed all the scene, who was standing behind the door, even Maan didn't notice her while going outside. Geet came here to call Anjali. Sudden shouting stopped her to enter inside, she didn't get even 1 single word of English what Maan said, from shouting she understand that he is very angry with someone.

*****

Plz ignore the grammatical and Hindi mistake

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*Geet's assuption That is not reality or not a dream. That is subconscious mind just predict future. Like if u r first day in the class, before only u will predict 'if teacher ask something, and I don't know the answer what the teacher will think of me, or what whole class think of me, what will my image infront of the whole class' that is just an assumption made my geet.

Actually I didn't have plan to write it before I got this idea from 1 of my friend she always predict 'if this happen, what if doesn't happen' so I wrote it. I think all of us predict if it doesn't happen in reality also we made assumption any person, place. Hope so I have cleared it.

Disclaimer: This is just a fiction. Any names, characters, occupation and places of residence, incidents are all my imagination. Any resemblance to any profession, any similar scene to any other fiction or actual events is purely spontaneous.

Nice...
Confused with maan's behaviour..
poor geet...
continue soon...

awesome part ...sameera itni buri he phir bhi maan ne usse engagement karli...aur koi nahi mila usko ...humm bas shaadi mat hoe dena ..shadi to geet aur maan ki honi chahiye ...