MG SS~VEIL LOVE~ Part 10, pg-80@9Feb2014

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Hi🤗 All my dear friend back with new SS. Form 2 month this concept is roaming in my head not letting me to sleep peacefully. So I thought to pen down it.

Thanks to Charu di, Sona, Dona, Heena and Puja because i made them crazy with the title suggestion 😆.Everyone suggested good one😳. But I am going with Veil Love.

I have given the concept let me know what do u thinks about the concept whether I should start or not😳.

Let me clear in this SS there is no difference between religion.

~~Veil love~~



His Life is fair & Her Life is unfair

Everything is perfect & Nothing is perfect

He gets whatever he desires & She can't desire whatever she wants

Love is blessed for him & Love is cursed for her

'Veil Love' is Darkness & beauty. Impossible!! In darkness there is nothing called beauty, it is only pitch black. Darkness makes you fear of not seeing the beauty. And Love is light of beauty. Darkness and light can't be stay together. Either the darkness or the beauty can stay.

*** Geet Handa***

'Veil love' is Unseen Feeling. Have you ever touch, hear or seen air? No, you have only felt it. And this Unseen feeling doesn't need see through eyes, doesn't need to touch by hands and doesn't need to hear with ear.Only need heart to feel it.

***Maan Singh Khurana***

Veil is something black piece of fabric which Muslim girls wear it. Or other word Veil means hidden, conceal whatever you say.

How a boy can fall in love with the veil girl whom he hasn't seen?

Most essential thing is he will be able to love that girl when the Veil will Unveil.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for the new story...
nice concept...
andekha anjana sa...
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so finaly u did start it di
i am already exited for the first chpter
r u going to give cs
u never made us crazy
and i am sure other dis also loved to help u
wating for next
lots of love
puja
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Character Sketch


**Geet Handa**




**Maan Singh Khurana**




(More character will be introduced with the plot)


Edited by fiano - 12 years ago
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Hi friends 🤗I am back

what about the note i have given "Past is Past" i don't want to remind it

At present I'm in good mood😉.

So here is update😳.


Part 1


Yet the yellow blazing ball is still beneath the dark veil of cloud. In a few moments it will unveil

Night to Day,

Dream to reality,

&

Veil love.

The girl is still sleeping underneath the star, underneath the star!! Silvery glittering stars which is hanging on the top of the bed as if full sky is enfolding on the bed. A 20 year girl came to room wearing white churidar. She pulls the quilt from her which is embracing her body.

'Geet wake up' Meera said hitting her bum.


Geet open her doe shaped eyes and sits in the bed and stretch her arm spreading overhead, and start humming.


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dH7sVKD4uYk[/YOUTUBE]

Hmm' hmm'

Hum To Bhai Jaise Hain Vaise Raheinge[I am the way I am and I will always be] (3x)

And starting jumping on the bed, take the scarf from Meera and covered her and playfully pulled up like bride. Meera hit her head ignoring her naught deeds and striding out from there. Suddenly Geet pulled her make her twirl.

Ab Koi Khush Ho Ya Ho Khafa[Whether someone is happy Or even if they are unhappy]

Hum Nahin Badleinge Apni Ada[I will never change my style]

Samjhe Na Samjhe Koi Hum Yahi Kaheinge[Whether they understand Or they don't I will keep saying]

Hum To Bhai Jaise Hain Vaise Raheinge [I am the way I am and I will always be] (2x)

Geet start swinging her to and fro. Then Meera forcefully lead her to the washroom.

Geet came down running from the stairs and hugged Rano from behind who is busy in doing preparation.

Hmm... Hmm...

Haan' Ham Dil Ki Shehzaadi Hai, Marzi Ki Mallika [I am the princess of my feelings And the queen of my mind](2x)

Sar Pe Aanchal Kyun Rakhe, Dhhalka Toh Dhhalka [Why should I wear a veil, If the scarf drops, so let it]

Ab Koyi Khush Ho Ya Koyi Roothhe,[Whether they smile or they pout]

Is Baat Par Chaahe Har Baat Toote [It does not bother me if what I say causes a rift]

Hum To Bhai Jaise Hain Vaise Raheinge [I am the way I am and I will always be](2x)

Meera pulled her but Geet loosen from her clutch and start jumping on the sofa and running entire room.

Both Geet and Meera came to Rano hug her and rest chin on her shoulder and Rano put hands on their cheeks and they make her swinging with them.

Hamein Shauq Mehendi Ka [I have no desire to adorn my palms with henna]

Na Shehnaai Ka Hai [Or to hear the wedding flute play](2x)

Hamaare Liye Toh Apna Ghar Hi Bhala Hai [I am quite happy in my own home, thank you]

Sunta Agar Ho Toh Sun Le Kaazi, [If you can hear me O priest, let me clarify]

Lagta Nahin Kabhi Ham Honge [I don't know that I will ever agree to marriage]

Hum To Bhai Jaise Hain Vaise Raheinge [I am the way I am and I will always be] (2x)

At that moment rain start before anyone could stop Geet. She rushes outside and start dancing and drowning her in rain.

Ab Koi Khush Ho Ya Ho Khafa[Whether someone is happy Or even if they are unhappy]

Hum Nahin Badleinge Apni Ada [I will never change my style]

Samjhe Na Samjhe Koi Hum Yahi Kaheinge[Whether they understand Or they don't I will keep saying]

Hum To Bhai Jaise Hain Vaise Raheinge [I am the way I am and I will always be] (2x)

Aa aa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha, oh ho ho ho ho ho...

Geet start sneezing where Rano and Meera both became concerned. Geet is stubborn like a child when it comes to medicine. Meera start running behind her to give her medicine.

'Maine kitne bar kaha barish meh mat beghna, par Nahi, tu tho mera bat khabhi nahi sunta' Rano said angrily placing the clothes in the closet. [How times I said to you don't go to rain, but No, you never listen to me]

'Ma why you getting tensed I will become ok see I have taken the medicine' Geet gulped the medicine in front of her to satisfy her. 'I have to be fine, tomorrow my best sis engagement' Geet hugged Meera give kiss on her cheek.

'Umm Geet' Meera wined 'not mine only, yours also dear'

'Engagement ka kitna sare tayari baki hai aur tu bemar ho gayi hai'Rano said [how many arrangements left to do, and u became sick]

Both pulled Rano make her sit between them on the bed'Ma we are there no then why you are taking tensed'

'Aj tho tum don ho jab kal tum nahi rahogi tab' Rano got emotional and eyes filled with tear

'Ma don't start crying like your daily soap drama' Geet whined out

'Main drama karti hu' Rano said in angrily.

'no you don't drama but when you cry it look serial bahu' Geet wiped her tear 'u know Maaa I hate your tear, I know during our leaving time you are going to flood this town with your tear, so we both sister planned something you will not cry and also can save this town from flood' Geet give wink to Meera. Meera giving her confusing what!!When!! look 'After our marriage our husband is going to stay as Ghar Jhami' Geet nudged Meera with elbow 'kiu Di'

'Exactly' Meera also agreed with Geet.

'Pagli' Rano smile slightly hit her head fondly 'what people will think?'

'I don't care what the people will think, I am going to stay with all of you, I am not going anywhere, if they agree with this condition he will marry me otherwise tell them to find some other girl' Geet put her head on Rano lap 'I have already lose my parents and I don't want to lose again' from Geet eyes tear is falling making wet Rano lap.

'dekha Meera abhi kitna bari bari bat kar raha tha, ab kisne daily soap drama start kar dia hai' Rano start caressing her hair lightly.[see Meera' now who was giving big big lecture, and see now who started daily soap drama]

Geet wiped her tears swiftly with her palm got up from lap 'main koi drama nahi kar raha hu' she pouted [I am not doing any drama]

'Drama nahi toh aur kya , Drama queen' Meera irritated her saying that she know how much she hate that word.

'Main drama queen nahi hu' Geet wailed out [I am not drama queen]

'Drama queen, Drama queen, Drama queen' Meera repeated the word and showed her tongue.

'Ma dekona' Geet complained to Rano

'tum dono kya yeh drama khabhi khatam nahi hone wali' Rano got up from bed ' aur waise bhi mujhe bohot sare kam baki hain' Rano said and left the room smiling.

'chu, chu, chu, no use of complain' Meera showed thumbs down 'drama queen'

'Agian,Wait' Geet pouted and get down from bed to teach lesson to Meera before Geet could catch her Meera run out of her life. Both start running full house.

*****

Both Rano and Mohinder in their room discussing about the engagement.

'kya hua tum khush nai ho' Mohinder asked, looking the dejected face of his wife.[aren't you happy]

'Nahi, asi koi baat nahi hai, bas main Geet kay liye paresan ho' Rano kept her head on his shoulder 'kya yeh ladka Geet ke liye tik hai, kya hum jo kar raha hai kya who tik hai, aur aap tho jante hai jinta Meera hamari beti hai utna hi Geet, humne khabhi donno main koi farak nahi dekha' Geet is not biological daughter of Rano and Mohinder. They adopted her and bought up as their own child.

[No, there is nothing like that, I am worried for Geet, is the boy is perfect for Geet?, what we are doing is right, you know as much as Meera is our daughter Geet is also same, we never discriminate between them]

'tumare pareshan hona bilku jayez hai, humne bhi tho kitna kosis kiya hai, dono key liye accha ghar main shaadi karo, lakin kahi na kahi hum pita ka farz nibana me nah kahmiab rah gaya' He paused'phele hi dobar Geet mana kar dia tha jab unlogo nah dahej ki mang kia tha, Geet ne mujhe kasme diya hai hum uski aatet bare main ladko se kuch chupa nahi sakta or dahej tho bikul nahi, aur sirf yeh ek ladka jo Geet ko apnana ke liye tyar hua hai woh bi sab kuck jante hue' he said calmly ['Your fears for her are absolutely right, but how much I tried, to get them married in respectable house, but somewhere as a father I have failed to fulfil father's duty' He paused 'first two times Geet had said no to the marriage because the boy's family asked for dowry, and later on she made me promised that I shouldn't hide anything about her past and dowry absolutely not, and only this guy had agreed to proposal even knowing everything about Geet's past.]


'mujhe sirf Geet chinta me kye ja reh hai, kya who sab kuch apna sakte hai' Rano said in concern. [I am really worried for Geet, will she able to accept everything?]

Mohinder understand what she wanted to say for girl its certainly difficult to accept such relation 'agar Geet iss ristey se kush nahi hai, toh main abih unlogoko na kard dunga, first my daughter happiness than everything' Mohinder said proudly 'kya Geet tumse khuch kya' [If Geet is not happy with this proposal then tell me I will say no to them, first my daughter happiness than everything' Mohinder said proudly 'did Geet said to you anything?']

'Maine Geet se dubara puccha tha lekin usne kha use iss risthey se koi atraaz nahi hai' Rano said 'par main jante hu woh khabhi apni duk ke bare main kuch nahi bolti, khabhi apni duk kay liye sikayat tak nahi karte hai, uff tak nahi karti, apni duk ko hasi keh piche chupake rakti hai, jaise kuch bhi nahi hua' she wept slowly 'kiu?Geet hi kiu, kiu usse inta chote se unmar me inta bare saza bugat rahi hai jo usne khabhi khi hi nahi, kiu?, kiu?' ['I asked her again she don't have problem with this proposal' Rano said 'I know that she never say anything about her pain, she never complained about it, always hide her pain behind the smile, but why only Geet, why she have to suffer at this young age, why she is suffering such punishment which she never did, why? Why?']

Mohinder just looked his weeping wife silently.


*****

Precape- Maan's entry + Engagement

Opps sorry🤔Plz ignore grammatical and Hindi mistake

Shall i continue or not 😕

Please comment Good or bad😳

I won't eat you if u write something bad😆 and hit the like button also.


Disclaimer: This is just a fiction. Any names, characters, occupation and places of residence, incidents are all my imagination. Any resemblance to any profession, any similar scene to any other fiction or actual events is purely spontaneous.

Edited by fatima_FM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: goldenmoon

congrats for the new story...

nice concept...
andekha anjana sa...
loved it...

Thanx a million 🤗dona 😳
yep unseen love

Edited by fiano - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anvashakhurana

so finaly u did start it di

i am already exited for the first chpter
r u going to give cs
u never made us crazy
and i am sure other dis also loved to help u
wating for next
lots of love
puja

Yep puja i started
hope u like the story
sure i will give CS
thanx a millions🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i have introduced CS😳
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Originally posted by: anvashakhurana

wating for next part☺️


wait wait inta jaldi kya hai😆

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