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Important:

Some of you had objected that it was savitri's carelessness to marry geet with maan. That's why I want to remind you guys that savitri had seen suhana as a child when she used to come for stay in delhi with her chichi, that's why she assumed geet to be suhana as according to her suhana doesn't have a sister… (geet and suhana has 6 year difference)

About her not confirming with neighbours???

Savitri knew shalini (geet's chichi) from quiet a time as they had been neighbours and friends too. that's why she trusted shalini blindly instead of enquiring with others.

PART 53

It was 7:30 in the morning and geet wasn't down yet. Dadima saw maan going out early morning and asked him, "maan bte it had been so late and bahu rani isn't down yet, its quiet unusual for her as she always is here by 6:30 to go with Savitri to fill water. Today savitri even didn't call her, is she ok???" asked a worried dadima.

Savitri too came back and had just entered the room when she heard maan say, "dadi she is having high fever and had slept early morning only, that's why I didn't disturb her now" said maan and then his eyes fell on savitri who was standing near the door too. Her face was expressionless yet he could see the compassion for geet in her eyes.

Savitri walked out of the room not wanting to hear more. Even maan excused himself from there and went near savitri and said, "she was crying whole night. Raat bhar wo kehti rhi ki kash wo bhi apne maa-papa ke sath…" his eyes closed not able to complete the sentence. "pata hai not once she complained about that slap, you shouldn't have said that too her, nhi kehna chahiye tha apko use wo sab" he said without looking at savitri.

"maan you better not say anything to me too, you had betrayed me along with her too. thus you are equally liable for punishment", said savitri looking away. "Then why didn't you slap me then, mai to apka beta hu, apka haq tha. Still you just took out all your anger on her, ye jante hue that she is trying her level best to make all of us happy. Sirf aapki khushi ke liye subah uthti hai, sara kaam karti hai aur apki har bata manti hai, am sure no other girl would have adjusted to this village environment so easily as she has, without any complains and arguments"

"how can you take her side when she had broken your heart so brutally" asked savitri confused looking at him and that's when maan saw her eyes red too, as if she hadn't slept whole night too.

"maa she had broken my heart but then she had joined the pieces with such happiness that it loves her more now. Ab how will I explain you that wo kya hai mere lie. Just because of your wish for heir, we didn't talk for 7 months, aur pata hai apko wo har din har ghante ki khabar deti thi mujhe ye jante hue ki bhi ki mai use baat nhi kar rha. Aap puchte ho to btata hu, shayad usse jyada pyar mujhe uske hmare rishte k liye jo shiddat hai, uske liye hai."

"That girl is just showing you dreams maan, do you think she will be with you when their will be millions of boys out there, who will be of her age, smart handsome, will she prefer to spent her life with a man who has nearly ten year difference from her. Will she be able to be proud being walking with you when you will be old and have white hair while she will still be young and beautiful? Maan ye pyar ka junoon tab pheeka pad jata hai jab use society k samne tumhe accept karna hoga, when she will have to commit herself with you, will she do that???

Aur manlo even if she somehow chooses you, will she be able to understand your priorities??? Will she be able to stood by you and help you when you will be in tough phase of your life. Will she give you a heir when she is still young and have whole life in front of her. Pyar karte ho na use, kya wo roz ke jhagde she sakoge jab wo jindagi ke us had padav pe piche chod degi when you will need her most???

I agree I will be like a villain to you now, shayad jis din baap bano to samjoge ki for a parent only their child hold most important place. Mai us waqt tumhe apne akho ke samne tutte nhi dekh paungi."

Savitri was crying herself by the time she explained him her reasons. He stood frozen in his place as he tried to think what to say now. He could see himself in her, the maan who was broken knowing her truth. The same questions had filled his mind which is now troubling her. But as they say time heals all wound, so has happened with him and that's what he hopes for now too.

He took his mother in his embrace and wiped her tears and said, "maa we both don't know ki what is in future, but for that we can't destroy our present na" he said trying to be understanding with her but she just refused to agree with him. "I won't be able to forgive myself if she gives you pain, after all I was the one who trusted shalini, but that woman!!!"

"maa ho gya na jo hona tha, ab kyu phi rap usi baat ko"

"no maan, I can't see my son's life being destroyed in front of my eyes. Geet won't be with you anymore" said shalini wiping her eyes.

Maan was shocked hearing her words. "maa you won't do anything like that" he opposed her words but she just stood determined.

"of course I can maan. I am your mother and won't accept anything wrong for you. And phir aap hi keh rhe the ki I had done wrong with geet, then isn't it wrong on your behalf to bind an underage girl in this relation. If I am wrong then its wrong on your part too. but still you want her with you for your happiness, so I want her away from you for your long term happiness"

Maan looked at his mother frustrated not knowing what to say now. How to explain her, his stand and his trust on this relationship. Sighing he just went away speechless to see whether geet had woken up or not.

When he entered the room he was shocked to see her all ready with all the marriage symbols too. he looked at her eyes which were red from all the crying while she looked tired from the lack of sleep and so much work due to whole day. He moved toward her totally flat on her conviction for this family and in the daze didn't even realized when his leg got entangled with her dubatta making her fall down with him on her.

His hand immediately went around her waist while other secured her head as they both landed on floor with a thud. Her eyes were tightly closed with the fear of fall as her hands were wrapped around his neck for support.

His eyes were just fixed on her face that still had the glow even after being so sick. Truly she has the beauty of an angel, but beauty can fade but the innocence in her acts is what will make him fall for her every second. "are you ok???" he asked her seeing her not opening her eyes.

After a second of his question, she did and her look killed him that very second. her eyes just expressed the pain of her heart. The glow in them which used to express her happiness was surrounded by the blankness, as if expressing the darkness of her soul.

"tum kab uthi" he asked still not moving away from her. "thodi der pehle" she replied, short and crisp answer, not like her usual non-stop express. "you should have taken rest, raat me fever ho gya tha tumhe" he said and then with his palm checked her forehead and neck and realized the temperature is still very high.

He immediately got worried and straightened himself, helping her to stand up too. Then he held her by shoulders and made her sit on bed, "ye aap kya kar rhe ho, I am late. Need to go down"

"geet you have high fever, aj rest karo. I had already told maa" said maan trying to make her lay down but she immediately refused. "mujhe jana hai" she said and walked away not even listening to him. He stood on his place as he saw her going down the stairs and wondered what she intends to do now. She isn't saying anything about last night and is even going downstairs to face maa, akhir chal kya rha hai iske dimaag me, he wondered.

When he went down he saw her trying to do anything which she could, but his mom would immediately refused saying, "we don't make others do work in our home". He couldn't understand why his mom is being so arrogant, she wasn't behaving like the sweet mother she always was. But then geet was no less too, she would just start doing any other work, if his mom stopped her from doing anything.

Finally irritated with her continuous involvement, his mom had to step away and gave her some vegetables to chop and said, "you want to do something na, lo chop them and after doing that you are off to bed. I don't want you to fall ill and my son roaming around you taking care of you" geet nodded without any word and silently did what his mom asked her to do.

He stood behind the door looking at the drama in front of him, enjoying every bit of it. None noticed what he could notice from far. Geet was hell bent on making his mom realize that she is still a perfect bahu (well as per Savitri's criteria of perfect daughter in law) while his mother though was trying to b harsh, he did saw the concern in her eyes seeing geet's pale face and then her warning to go and take rest after giving her the simplest job with the least effort required. He knew she was angry on her now, but the affection she held for geet couldn't be wiped away in a single night. Maybe some times anger empowers you, but that soft corner always stays.

After chopping veggies, savitri ensured that geet was back to her room, but geet wasn't talking to him and the reason he just couldn't understand. Or rather she wasn't talking to anyone, except few talks with dadiji, with others she was just being way too silent and he couldn't understand the reason.

It was night and geet's fever wasn't down much, mostly she wasn't ready to take any medicine, even after his continuous pleading too. If he would try to force, her eyes would just fill with tears making him feel more helpless. He had even told savitri that geet was not taking medicines but she just taunted, "I said few words to her and she isn't even listening to you. Is rishte pe itna aitbaar tha tumhe"

He came in his room to sleep at night when he heard his mom call him. "you aren't sleeping in that room from now on. I had arranged a folding bed in the porch, from now that's your sleeping place" he so much wanted to argue but then he just couldn't as the issue was sensitive and even this would give geet proper space to sleep as she is ill, and thus nodded in affirmation.

he was just turning restlessly on the bed, missing her warmth beside him and her legs and hands which would be on him after she is asleep. He took his pillow and placed it on his chest, trying to replace the vacant feeling of her hand with the pillow but it didn't work. Sighing, he stood up to take a check on her.

When he reached his room, he found her awake wide, just looking outside the window in the sky. Her eyes were filled with tears. His heart felt crushed with force with the pain as he realized that she was missing her parents. With 5 long strides, he was next to her and took her in his embrace. She was more in need and immediately complied. Her fever had increased with the strain she was taking and her continuous trying wasn't doing any help.

"shh, geet. I know your parents would be so proud of you today. Proud to have such a strong daughter that is capable to make even stone melt with her love."

She just remained quiet and remained in his embrace, while he kept rocking her back and forth, trying to make her asleep. She was so stubborn and her fever was just increasing. It was early morning when she again slept, while he just stayed awake another night thinking about the future steps.

Another two days passed, geet fever doesn't go away. Especially at night it would be way too high as she would just keep crying, sleep far away from her eyes. And above all the weather wasn't even good too. Monsoon had hit the village and it rained most of the day giving a chill in the air. Savitri would don't even talk with them normally, except few taunts here and there. Geet was on total silent mode, especially with him and he didn't even understand the reason of her special treatment with him.

Maan just sighed as he looked at the train tickets in his hands. After 4 days they are going back, after all it is going to be a month since they have been here. And he just have 4 days to make his mom talk with geet. He finally knew what he has to do to just give them few moments together.

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Fabulous each one is going thriugh various emotions and worried for the other

lovely update
Geet having fever and crying all night
Maan's mom was also in same condition though she is angry on geet
Geet trying to work and savitri giving her v. Easy work shows her consern but she is angry thinking that geet has destroyed her son's life