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As the sun was setting in the horizons the color of the sky getting into a beautiful shade of orange with few slight pink side to it in the vast expanse of the sky. The breezy wind with a sweet smell of the sand laying below was a pleasure to each soul that experiences it. There over a lonely shore just having her feet experience the bliss of cold water stood a girl enjoying the scenetic beauty of the nature that was present. Just as she looked up towards the sky there few a flock of birds in the manner of a V shape with one leading and the rest following it. She admired the view and took a deep breath. Suddenly the memories that were made few years back came to her mind. He having so much fun with her friends, dancing her heart out and being crazy all around. Neither did they care about what other cared. All that mattered to them was DANCE. Dance was the key that connected her to her friends and well has her love. She remembered how they use to just push each other into the sea water getting them soaked up. She blinked her eyes few minutes as the memories just brushed her. Her friends calling her name 'Kriya' heard like it was just yesterday. She remembered how the years have passed so soon and just felt that things have turned out well. She did not regret any decision that she had taken up in the past felt her life content. She did her job and earned her life. She was satisfied the way her life had taken a turn. As the time passed the darkness was filled in the sky and Kriya slowly walked back to her flat.

Kriya lived alone in her flat. She did her work on her own as she loved doing it. The house was maintained well and clean and she loved to dcor it with her own way. She choose each thing that was needed. Beside her flat lived a old lady. Kriya took care of her too and whenever Kriya felt that she needed a family she would go to lady and spend time with her. Swayam had his vacations. He wanted to spend time with his grand parents or to say more clearly his grand mom. He was so much excited that as soon as he was out from work he rushed back home took out his bags and start to reach and have a peaceful time away from the hectic schedule and the stress of the daily life. As soon as he reached he ran to his grandma. His grandma was surprised seeing her grandson. Both the grandson and grandma wear having a great time when his grandma remembered that her medicines were with the neighborhood girl. She was about to go when Swayam said he will get it. His grandma agreed and Swayam went out and rang the bell. Kriya was busy making the dinner when she heard the bell ring and came to open out the door. Shocked would be an understatement that both the besties faced when they saw each other. Kriya could not imagine what to do or precisely to say. Swayam was happy that he had seen his bestie after years. He did not know what to say so just asked for the medicines that his grand mom had asked. Kriya now realized that Swayam was the ladies grandson. She gave the medicines to him and Swayam just moved from there not a word shared more between them.

Kriya came back to her senses after Swayam left and closed the door. She was tensed as to what new turn is life taking now. She had a mere guess that Swayam will not go without asking the truth. She was worried even to face him another time. She was afraid. She had no clue what was happening now in the evening suddenly after months she remembers them and now later at night she sees Swayam. She just went down to her bed thinking how to face it. She knew there was no use running away now .Swayam just went into the house and gave the medicines. He made her grand mom sleep and moved to him room. Sleep was far away. He had seen Kriya after around five years and was happy to see her well. He had heard from his grand mom how much she helped her. He decided to speak with her tomorrow and know what made her take the step. He had to know the truth. Kriya turned around either way but could not sleep. She decided to go with what life had stored for her.

A new day with a different start was what both Kriya and Swayam thought at the rise of the dawn. After doing some work and helping his grand mom out Swayam moved to speak with Kriya. He was determined to speak and rang the bell. As the bell rang the heart beat of Kriya was at its peak and she knew that this must be Swayam as this was not time for anyone to come. She bucked up her courage and went to open the door. She asked Swayam to come in and asked him formally whether he would prefer tea or coffee . Swayam plainly replied coffee as he was shocked with her behavior. He never did expect her to be formal with him ever. Kriya came back with two cups of coffee and sat in the adjacent sofa. Swayam asked him how was she and after few conversations asked her the question which she dreaded. He asked her why did she leave them and move without any information. Kriya tried not to sound nervous and replied him saying her mom came to know about her dance and she had to leave. Kriya knew she did not lie to him nor did she tell the full truth. She did not have the courage to tell the sacrifice that she had done for them and did not want them to feel guilty. Swayam's phone bussed just then and he saw it was from Sharon. By mistake instead of chucking up he replied with answer button. Sharon was surprised when she heard the voice. The conversation between Swayam and Kriya continued .

Rey as usual entered Sharon's house without any notice and was shocked hearing Kriya's name from her mouth. Sharon did not notice Rey and was getting ready to move out when she saw him. Rey asked what is it about Kriya. Sharon said nothing but Rey guessed that something is wrong and followed her. He was sure that he heard Kriya. Sharon knew Swayam was at her grand mom's place and she had a vague idea about the address and hence drew her car there. Rey was following her behind and she had no clue. As she stopped at the start of the apartment she did not know what to do. There were so many flats looking alike and she did not know which was Swayam's flat. Rey came behind and told I know where does Swayam's grand mom live. Sharon asked Rey how are you hear. He asked her not to hide anything from him and she narrated what she heard to Rey. Rey was shocked and then made a plan. He told Sharon that he will show her the flat but she must also let him know about Kriya. Sharon agreed as there was no way out. She knew if not her Rey would by some other way find out about Kriya. Rey showed her the house and stood behind. Sharon rang the bell that was opened by Swayam's grand mom. When she asked about Swayam her grand mom told he was at the adjacent house. Sharon told her she will speak and rang the bell of Kriya's home .Kriya opened and was blown by what she saw. Even Swayam was shocked seeing Sharon hear. Kriya called Sharon, Swayam asked Sharon how are you hear. Sharon told him that she heard Kriya's voice over the phone and Swayam felt like banging his head.

Kriya asked Sharon to come in and they all moved to couch. Sharon started the causal talk with Kriya and all this was heard by Rey who was standing outside. He could not believe that he heard Kriya after so long. Sharon in the mean asked about why did she ditch Rey. Kriya did not know what to say. All she said was she did not ditch him. She loved him truly and a sound came from outside of someone falling. Sharon guessed it must be Rey and ran to the door. Kriya and Swayam followed and were shocked seeing Rey unconscious fallen over the ground. Swayam and Sharon got Rey up and moved inside Kriya's home. Kriya sank in the couch unable to bear it anymore. She did not want to face Rey now. She did not have the courage to face him. She was happy that he had moved but knew seeing her he would question her. Sharon came out of the room and saw the fear in Kriya's eyes. She came and sat beside her and asked her to go and speak with him. She knew it was tough but both Rey and Kriya need to speak and Sharon thought this is the best time. Rey gained his conscious back he saw Kriya entering the room. She asked him how he was. He told he is good. Rey asked Kriya why did she lie. Kriya was shocked she asked what. Rey repeated the question asking why did she lie. Kriya answered saying she did not lie. Rey asked her to face him. She turned around and is asked see in my eyes and tell me Kriya that you did not Love me. Kriya could not saying anything. She was silent. Rey got his answer. Rey told I knew it, that day you did not see me and told you don't love me. Kriya had tears flowing down her eyes. Rey wanted to hug and console her that he is there but he did not want that. Truth has to be known. Rey asked her back can I know why did you lie. Kriya was shocked as Rey's voice was never so cold. She flinched and was quite. Rey shook her and asked her. She did not have any choice but to tell the truth. She told him everything from her mom coming to know about the dance to her condition. She also told she lied to him cause she wanted him to Move ON. Not only Rey but the rest two present in the house wear also shocked as Kriya has done so much for her friends. Rey asked her do you love me still. Kriya told him a No,She further explained that she is satisfied with her life and does not want anything more . Rey understood what she mean. He asked her to promise him one thing. Kriya was hesitant as to what he will ask. Rey asked that if by ever you feel anything for me you will come back to me Dance Ki Kasam. Kriya agreed to the promise. Swayam came and hugged her. He did not have enough words to thank her for what she has done. He was proud. He knew that they will stay in contact as they were best of best friends. Rey just smiled and left. He told Sharon that he will wait outside and moved from there.

The misunderstandings were cleared. There was nothing that would have a grudge against the other. Life had moved on and with time things revolved. The four of them silently prayed that the rest stay happy in their life.


NOTE: This is a OS.Please do not ask a continuation for this as that is not possible.I do not want to tell a NO to you and DO not know if further writing will do justice to what I actually though about.

I do not know how this has turned about.I'm perplexed about it.So criticism of any kind shall be welcomed.

Mish I'm really sorry.I could not write anything about Romance.May be that can't be done sooner.




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Posted: 12 years ago
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i didnt knew ki tu likhti bhi hai... 😆

coming to the OS...

i really liked it...

how life has moved on... how ppl change with time...

and everything...

beautiful re...
Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Asma...🤗

I promised u too comment that night itself...but my hectic schedule didnt let me read it...for a 1st timer it was exceptionally well written...the best part was u kept it practical... realistic...not only Kriyaansh ..you portrayed Kriyam and Krisha so beautifully...Kriyam is undoubtedly one of the most cherished friendship shown in D3...u did justice to it


The way u unfolded the story with nature ...and then her new life..new priorities...it was beautifully portrayed...she poured her love to the elderly couple showed the real Kriya..who cared for everyone..be it her friends or so called enemies


Swayam coming to his grand parents place and getting to know about her truth...Sharon and Rey following them ...and how the truth came out in front of Rey was well written ..

The final promise..and not to forget Dance ki kasam brought back beautiful memories ...

The truth came out and misunderstanding got cleared ...well executed one shot ...loved the way u showed the truth of life...we move on with time...memories stay in our hearts...hidden deep down ...

Loved it 😳...special mention to Kriyam bond(i love them)

Sorry for commenting late dear ...busy schedule

Do write more 😊..thanks for sharing the link & being so sweet to me 😳😊


Luv
Deep

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres

frstly...tune muje solid jhatka diya yeh likhkr/...
i nevr knew ki tu likhti h...
bt anyway... likhtitoh mast h...
suprbbb os...
i loved it...
krishareyam...perfect ...
it's beautiful...
u should strt writing...
Edited by shalini_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I didn't knew you too write
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Amazing os asma
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!1 ur are superb writter i did not knew u write on kr...
that was awesome and beautiful os and min dblowing for make me happy
u receive a 👏👍🏼🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok to all those who have a wrong idea that I'm a writer.NO I"m not one.
This was written as it was a request by many to write owing to different occasions
So this was just for it.I have no clue when I'll write the next..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...
nice one... l
oved it
life changes with time...
krishareyam is just perfect... amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Os...
Loved it..
Beautifully narrated.
Very well written...finally they all know the truth...
D promise was nice...
N u won't continue this na???
Koi ni we'll imagine it ourselves... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os
loved it 😊

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