KR OS: Destiny - Page 4

Originally posted by: ---Shailu---

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Is this really ur Thread Chocopie ?! 😲😲😲 😆 😛 Yup this is my thread

I mean Wow! Seriously Fab decision to write something based on KR. 👍🏼 Thank you

Will not embarrass you by saying that OMG i didn't knew that u could write . . . but would be glad to appreciate u on ur 1st write up !!❤️ Not first have written one before

According to 1st time write up it was really impressive. Very attractive start by defining the nature ...😊 I guess I seriously have to search my first work ka link

Really amazing introduction to the characters.👏 *hugs*

The unfolding of the memories is nice . 😃 Yeah le 🤗

Kriya living alone in an aptt. She needs to.I didnt mention her mom is no more alive *wink wink*

Kriya . . . Gosh! U portrayed her new life ... habits ... memories ... and every new thing around her seemed realistic and pure just like her. 😛 I have speacial love towards Kriya you know

The way kriya took care of the elderly couple ... this truely is real Kriya,which was really missing frm most of the fan fics today. No comments cause I love many ff.She is diff here

I loved her gesture of helping every creature ... be it her friends or foes. 😛 She is what she is

There was a good twist where swayam visited his grand parents and then got to know abt kriya and her truth. 👏

Loved Kriyam the most and even Sharey too! 😳 I love Sharey too

Then, the truth unleashed and Rey got to know by the was amazingly shown up by correct words and emotions. 😊 I somewhere wanted him to know directly hear

All the memories that she cherished and her myths ... "Dance ki kasam" and all the words used really sent me to the old D3 world . A bit of the charm

Then all the MU's got cleared and everything got sorted with each passing time ... 😃 Time is healing <3

Loved all the deep down quotations ... Life long commitments ... and few promises which shows the way life works !!! 👏 That means a lot.Something I love out

I found one thing really connecting. The quotations that u mentioned were deep down from ur heart ... 😛 ❤️ Even few senery was something I love

Somewhere ur encouragement and motivation to us is shown in ur One shot too and i loved this thing the most. 😳 I love you cause you call me when you need.Makes me feel happy

This shows that u've wrote this by ur heart .. keeping all that in mind that u really use in ur Life. 🤗 Few things I do not all exactly :P

And all these things really suited Kriya's character. 👏 Thank you so much

Overall, Loved the end as well as the title too! That means a lot

Destiny really proves that no meet is impossible if u really want to!😊 Its all that you have in your heart

It's very well said that "All is well then ends well" and the story too ended with a good note ... with all things sorted . 😃 One who is content with end just like me..Can I love you more

Very well written Os. Keep up ur good effort. ⭐️ Shall try to write more

Would love to read more of ur works in future too! 😉 ^

Hope u keep entertaining us like this the whole year and many more to come ... 😛 Hope so

Just one request... Next time u write some Os do give more P.O.V's as that is really helpful for understanding of the whole scenario.😊 I'll try dear..I wanted this from Kriya's POV OS hai cant confuse too much

Else everything was Supah Fabulous and mesmerizing.

Concept was very different. 👏

Thanks for sharing and specially telling me abt this one ! 😃

Sowie for commenting late as i got to noe at it now! 😳

Xoxo ❤️

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Sweets 😳

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Originally posted by: asmaju

Sweets you really made me cry with this comment.

I cant thank you enough..
You no where know what this means to me..
All I can say is you know me than I know myself in few sections...
And Thank you for this..
Will reply to your comment separately soon..
Thank you so much for loving me and trusting me... :)

Originally posted by: sita_rama

awesome super os .

i loved it and thanks for the pm