Ariya TS:Loving you was my Destiny,pg-5,6. *completed*

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"Humein Riya ka hosla barhane keliye jana hoga,Sir.We are her strength.Rathod sir,please chaliye?" Shree told Rathod.

"You are right,Shree.Hum jayenge wahaan.We all will go there to encourage Riya for her performance.After all,din raat ek karke bohut mehnat ki hai usne iss din keliye.Show kab hai Shree?" Rathod asked.

"Sir,show start hoga do ghante baad.So,hum log yahaan se adhe ghante mein niklenge,coz,yahaan se venue takreeban 1 ghanta 15 minute ki doori pe hai.Tab tak hum pending works khatam karle.Phir nikalte hai.Tickets aagaya hai mere paas.Riya ne bheje hai through one of her friends," Shree said.

Shree hands each ticket to each person.Only one ticket left.

Rathod sees that.

Rathod(letting out a sigh):Riya bhi kis mitti ki bani hai? Jo larki Rawte jaise ghussail insaan se itna be intehaan pyaar karti hai,jo uske aane ki aas lagaye baithi hai,Rawte uski itni insult karta hai,phir bhi,she is waiting for him? How come? Yeh Rawte kabhi nahi baaz ayega apne gusse se.Hum bhi kiske liye wait kar rahe hai?Chalo,finish the pending works quickly and lets go.

He orders everyone to do their pending works and leaves from the conference room.

While he came out,he saw Arjun,standing their with his arms folded.

Rathod went near him and spoke to him in a low,stern tone.

Rathod: Agar tum uski hunar ka kadar karte ho,toh aana zarur.Ek officer aur ek senior ke naate na sahi,par,kam se kam,uske well wisher ke taur pe zarur aana.Tumhari raah dekh rahi hogi woh bechari.

Before leaving for his cabin,he thrusts the ticket of the programme in Arjun's hand and leave.


Location: ABC Theatre.
Time: 5pm

Three girls were helping Riya getting her makeup done.

Riya was looking like an Angel in that creamish white anarkali dress,with diamond studded necklace on her neck,two dangling diamond earrings on her ear,a maangtika on her forehead and lastly,a nosepin,adorning her nose.

She looked like an Angel,that descended from Heaven.

But her face lacked that glow.

She was looking at her own reflection blankly and was lost in her own pool of thoughts.

"Kya Arjun sir aayenge?"

This thought was continuosly coming in her brain.

Her brain and heart started a fight over it.

Heart: Riya,apne pyaar pe bharosa rakkho.Tumhara Arjun zarur aayega.Woh tumhe niraash nahi karega.Woh ayega zarur...

Mind: Nahi,Riya.Tu aaj apni dil ki baat mat sun.Tu Arjun ko janti hai na.He doesnt like this.Usne teri har baar insult ki hai in every way he could.Phir...Arjun jaise aadmi keliye wait mat karo.Concentrate on your performance.

Her heart and mind had a big fight over this issue,whether Arjun will come or not.

She requested the girls to leave her alone,for a while.

Now,she was alone.

She took the same coin,which she kept in his pocket during the Ganapati Idol stealing case.She looked at it intently.A tear drop fell from her eye.She gently caressed it and placed it near her heart,and cried her heart out.

After a while,she wiped her tears and prayed to Ganapati Bappa for her dance performance and requested him to listen to her prayers,for the one last time.
Precap: Will Arjun really come to see her dance performance?
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Anika_PreRish thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ch1 updated.
Now start placing ur lamba comments.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kya baat hain lambe comment ki itni wait hain...


okkk..
this is emotional. .
yr yeh arjun ki problem kya hain...
meri riya ko kyu rolaya...
hope arjun aye...
continue soon. ..
thnx not for pm 😆 😆



isse jayada lamba comment. ..no...
mujhe likhna nhi aata 😭 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb start :) loved it
riya loves arjun so much
and yet she is waiting for him to come
hope arjun comes to see her performance
can't wait to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...amanvirdi...

kya baat hain lambe comment ki itni wait hain...


okkk..
this is emotional. .
yr yeh arjun ki problem kya hain...
meri riya ko kyu rolaya...
hope arjun aye...
continue soon. ..
thnx not for pm 😆 😆



isse jayada lamba comment. ..no...
mujhe likhna nhi aata 😭 😉



hehe...
Thanks for the comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start...continue soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb start yar...!!!
wow riya a performer...!!! cool...
love how shre and sameer were talking about her...
awww she loves arjun so much... but ye arjun bhi na...
hope he comes...
continue soon...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start
ria is participating in dance compettion
ria loves him a lot
i hope arjun comes to the competition
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start dear eagerly waiting for the next update plx continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWWW lovely start!!!!!
kitna pyaar karti hai Riya Arjun ko...aur Arjun ka toh aata pata hi nahi!!!
koi jaake usse bula laye!!!!
i hope he comes and see Riya performances...!!!
hopefully Riya ka wait kaam aaye:)


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