Ansh OS: Queen of my heart

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rev4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: preethis
awesome awesome... totally loved it.. you are writing it wonderfully revu...

Thanks Preethi...😊

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Shivandi
This is old and past but I just wanted to comment to say how much I love your writing. You have a great grip on these characters and a lovely writing style and I wish you would write more. 😊

Thank you so much for your lovely comments. Will try to write if I can in future😊

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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Revathy !! OMG this is so beautiful...I am glad that I actually went through this...Starting from the point where Shiv's feelings have been described.It was realistic and so was the reaction of the family members..WHO KNEW IT!! I like the repeated use of the word KNEW IT!!It specifies and amplifies the core strength of the feelings which Shiv has for her...It is said when you are in love not only you yourself but even the ones who are around you notice the changes in you..What followed next was PURE BLISS...I always knew you had a knack of capturing and reading emotions,but never knew you would write something so simple yet so profound like this.The Talks about the compromise and then the counter arguments,unspoken feelings of both Collector Sahab and Sarpanch ji..were givena beautiful vocal culmination through the use of subtle ,,simple yet deep meaningful words..Its just as beautiful as they are-the purity and simplicity of the relationship is so beautifully captured!!WHAT A GREAT READING EXPERIENCE!!Thanks for the links..Totally loved it!! 👏👏👏

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seetha74

@seetha74

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Beautiful way of expressing the real feelings of two sanskari persons. Yes...this is the real bonding of our ever lovable Shiv and Anandi.And ofcourse through your nerration we saw the beautiful and adorable faces of SIDUSHA. LIKE IT verymuch.👏

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