JaNu os:Birthday Gift

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Posted: 12 years ago
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First time trying to write an os ,so the plot runs around jagya's birthday .
JAgya-manNU=JaNu
~JaNu os~
Jagya woke up early and splashed some water onto his face to get out of sleepy mood.He was about to step out of his room just then ganga knocked the door and said in a hurried tone,"doctersaab please come to dadisa's room as soon as possible"
He was scare and was asking ganga "anything happened to dadisa?".He was about to cry, ganga replied,"i can't say anything to you now doctersaa,come down and see for yourself".
He opened the door and singhs wished him" Happy birthday to you!!!"
He was surprised but was lil bit angry with reason they called him down.He took blessings of DS and his elders.
Ganga wished him , she gave him the poem which she has writtenBadi Haveli ladies said they will cook his favorite food items and all of them dispersed.Lal singh wished him,"so take rest today, i lookafter the hospital today"jagya nodded approvingly beacause after some years he is celebrating his birthday along with his family.He became emotional for a moment just then Nandu came and presented him collection of kites and a note writtten "to the best brother ever".Mannu was about to wish him but just then sanchi called him.
Sanchi said,"happy birthday jagdish, wish i would have been there but exams stopped me"jagdish repleid"thank you sanchi but studies are always important when compared to all this. "
sanchi thought to herself "not for me jagdish if my father wouldn't have stopped i would have been there dont know what that ganga is upto know"
just then daddu took mobile from her hand and wished him and passed on to everyone.Anandi and Shiv greeted him and gave the mobile back to sanchi
Mannu wanted to wish his friend but his friend is not paying any attention to him,he was angry now,he was sitting beside jagya on sofa.
sanchi was about to talk but mannu snatched jagya's mobile and threw it aginst the wall and started to cry loudly.Sanchi thought jagya has disconnected the call and was disappointed.Jagya was shocked to see angry mannu,ganga took him into her arms,after observing the broken mobile she understood what happened and scolded Mannu.She took him to her room and in anger tone she said,"Don't come outside untill i return " and asked Nandu to lookafter him.Nandu quietly said,"ok didi."
Jagya felt sorry for Mannu, he wanted to meet his best friend badly.Nandu was trying to calm Mannu but all his attempts were failure.He then gave him pen and paper and it kept mannu a bit busy ,he scribbled on the paper and was clapping.
Jagya entered the room ,he said;"Nandu go and play,i will lookafter him".Nandu happily stepped out of the room.
Jagya pulled mannu's cheeks and asked,"Why is my friend so angry with me?",he continued asking,"why din't you wish me mr.mannu?look how disappointed i am"
Mannu was busy trying to close the pen with its cap.
Jagya knew Mannu was fond of music and rhymes, so he started "happy birthday to me.. happy birthday to me.."Mannu gave his billion dollars smile and joined him singing,"Appy birday .. appy birday.."
Jagya felt happy finally his friend smiled ,so just as friend demands for birthday gift, he asked" ok where is my birthday gift?"
Mannu closed the pen with its cap and neared jagya, he doesn't know what is meant by gift so handed over the pen in his hand.. in his sweeteset voice he said"Bapu.. bapusa"
Tears of joy rolled down from jagya's eyes.He recieved the most wonderful gift ever. He hugged Mannu and kissed him on his forehead. Ganga enter the room she was puzzled to see jagya crying she thought mannu would have done something and was about to shout.she was stopped by jagya, he took Mannu into his arms and said " i will take care of mannu"
Note: please don't throw chappals and rotten tomatoes if you din't like.
Edited by sushiani - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice.
Its always a treat to watch JaNu.
Loved the way he said Bapu. Hope serial mein bhi yeh ho jaye😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first of all... loved how mannu threw jagya's phone on the wall.. and started crying.. 🤣 🤣

toh jo... ganga, anandi, DSand just about all the characters of BV couldnt do... ( kick S outof the pic) mannu singlehandedly did so.. 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: PariD

Very nice.

Its always a treat to watch JaNu.
Loved the way he said Bapu. Hope serial mein bhi yeh ho jaye😊

glad that you like it pari😊
i was missing them badly😭
especially mannu..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: flutterby

first of all... loved how mannu threw jagya's phone on the wall.. and started crying.. 🤣 🤣

toh jo... ganga, anandi, DSand just about all the characters of BV couldnt do... ( kick S outof the pic) mannu singlehandedly did so.. 😆

well whenever he talks to sanchi ,i feel doing that 😆 in my os i made mannu to do it
Edited by sushiani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sush,sooo cute.Janu,we love you.Awesome sush,lovely,yaar.Write more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shankythebest

sush,sooo cute.Janu,we love you.Awesome sush,lovely,yaar.Write more.

thank you shanky,glad that you ppl liked it.😃
phew you don't how nervous i am.. first time na
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww sush lovely OS🤗my JaNu❤️mannu say bapusa OMG⭐️i wish this happen in BV😃one req add our JaGan light moments in between😳😳cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaiya

awww sush lovely OS🤗my JaNu❤️mannu say bapusa OMG⭐️i wish this happen in BV😃one req add our JaGan light moments in between😳😳cont soon dear

glad you like it chaaru🤗
i wrote it as oneshot
for jagan i will try to write another one
Edited by sushiani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww its so so cute Sushi 🥱 baby Mannu ko gussa aya poor baby Sanchi ne wish nhi karne diya. I was imagining Mannu and Jagya bonding. Very cute.

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