Mg OneShot- ~Chori-Chori..Chupke-Chupke~ (season#2 link-pg36) - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bechara Maan mara gya. Pta nhi Geet uske sath kya karegi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh so cute...

they are now dating from last 8 months...

and everyday he has to wait for her and today she was waiting for him...her thinking, her cribbing, her realization that how he must have felt when waiting was so beautiful...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Awesome OS dear
loved it a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
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khayalon me..
khayalon me..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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~Epilogue-2~
Geet gigled hearing him cribing that "waiting was his department". She loved that cute poute on his face. But next, she was fuming..seeing him mimicking her like that. She wanted to punch him right there& then. But then decided other wise, wanting to see what else he thinks about her... After that she would take her revange for sure!
She waited to hear more "praises of her" but nothing came as maans friend disturb his cribing. She wasnt really interested in listening their talks.. But what that boy said before going made her shocked. "girl friend..??" did he really said "girl friend??" .."maan has a girl friend..??" she couldnt belive that it was true. He has a girl friend!!! But he never told her anything..?? And that thought increased her anger all the more now!
And then that shy smile on maan's face at the mention of his girlfriend, added more fuel to already burning fire!!!
As soon as his friend left, she came out of her hiding, she was really furious!

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Maan was surprised seeing her standing behind him & those angery eyes made him confuse. "why she is so angery?" ..he wondered. But then thought to avoid that.. "arre.. geet..tum kab aai?" ..he asked approching her.
Geet, who was fuming inside, retroted, .."main bilkul time pe aai thi.. Auron ki tarah late nahi..!" That taunt made maan gaped at her. "ek din time pe kya aa gai, itne nakhare..!! And what about me, jo hamesha tumhara intezar karta rahta hoon?" ..maan asked.
"whatever.." geet replied coldly.. "waise, acha hi hua, that i came early today. Atleast i got to know..ke kis tarah tum mere peeth-piche meri tarifon ke pul bandhate ho..!" ..saying that geet looked at him meaningfully. And that made maan realised what he had said a while ago. Maan bite his tongue, regrating that moment, and looked here& there.. "wo..main..wo.." he fumbles. "wo geet, mera woh matlab nahi tha.." ..he tried to explain. But geet cut him.. "mujhe kuch nahi sunna. Mujhe der ho rahi..mujhe jana hai, warna mumma dantengi..!" geet said stressing each & every word.
Maan knew that he was in a big trouble now. So he tried, what he knew will work for sure..as it had, always! "gudiya..plz..meri baat toh suno.." maan said hoping that she will cool down now, hearing him call her "gudiya". Whenever maan will call her by her nickname..she would melt instantly.
"dont..dont use that trick of ur's! Its not going to work this time..!" ..geet glared at him angerily. Maan pouted disappointedly..as his attempt failed badly.
Before he could think anything, he saw her leaving.. He panicked & held her hand to stop her.. "geet..plzz.." he started. But geet snapped his hand away.. "dont touch me ! Aur ab mere piche kyun aare ho.. Jao na..apni "Girlfriend" ke pas jao..bechari tumhara wait kar rahi hogi" geet said grriting her teeth.
Maan got really confused hearing that "girlfriend" from her...then realised that she must have heard his talks with yash.. And probably this is the main reason behind her anger. Is she jealous?? Offcorse she is! Otherwise she wouldnt have reacted like that! He smirk at the realisation. And thought to tease her a little more.
"ohh..tumhe kaise pata chala, meri girl friend ke baare me?? ..he asked with shocked expression. Geet fumed even more..hearing him confess that he do have a girlfriend. " usse kya fark padta hai..ke how i got to know. Tum jao uske pas..she must be waiting.." ..geet said in irritation.
"han, u are right! Bechari...Wait toh kar rahi hogi mera, bahut der se..!!" ..he bite his cheeks to stop himself from smiling.
Listening that..geet twisted her lips & tried to move.. But maan held her hand once again, this time in a firm grip.
"mera hath shodo..maan.." ..she tried to free her hand. "nahi.." maan refused tightening his hold.
"hath pakadne ka itna hi shauk hai na..toh jaake apni "grilfriend" ka hath pakdo..!" geet shouted in fruastation.
Maan smiled asking.."tumhe bura nahi lagega..agar main uska hath pakadun toh..?"
"mujhe kyun bura lagega.. I really dont care..if u hold her hand or kiss her.. Do whatever u want.. I dont care!" she herself didnt realise what she was speaking.
Maan was totally enjoying it! "are u sure..?? U wont mind me kissing her..??" ..he asked teasingly.
"huh..why should i mind..?? .. Go ahead..!!" geet said, highly annoyed by his stupid questions.
"why would i mind..wo jo chahe kare??" geet muttered under her breath.
Maan couldnt help smiling at her cute cribing & irritated expression.
Geet was still busy cribing to herself...when maan leaned towards her & KISSED her...making her shut up instantly..!
Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
me first😃
awesome part..👏
loved maaneet so much..so innocent
maan kissed geet😳
hope u'llcontinue😊
Edited by daredevilisback - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice dear😊

geet jealous👏

maan kiss hr⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
superb part...
loved their nok-jhok...
n maan kissed her... omg
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Geet band bajaufying maan 😆 both r too cute n innocent 😊 awesome update. Loved it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
awww super cute upd.loved it so much.

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