Mg OneShot- ~Chori-Chori..Chupke-Chupke~ (season#2 link-pg36) - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Lovely and cute os.
Loved it

Aur issi comment ke sath iss os par comment ki century complete😊

Edited by AKSashadow - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
superb part
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
aww they r so cute ...s der any epilogue dear i wanted to now what happen next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
sooo cute...soo lovely...!!! perfect ending !!! but would love to read an epilogue too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
oh no khatam ho gaya...nehiii...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d epilogue...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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LOVELY STORY AND SO WELL WRITTEN
LOVED THEIR EYE LOCKS
WILL THERE BE AN EPI
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Really very cute update loved it ...😳
but story ended so soon ...😔
pls write season 2 of this story ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update..emotional! Beautifully written! She sed yes! pls post epilogue! Thanks!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
u r an expert in portraying these new found teenage feelings ...it ws simple beautiful cute n innocent bt sad part is ye innocence aaj kal k teenagers mein bohot mushkil se milta hai
thankyou so much fr such a luvly OS Shona 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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~Epilogue~
part1


She reached at their regular meeting point. And for a change, today she was the first one to arrive, usually he will be there before her, waiting for her. She thought to roam around the park till he comes & got busy in admiring the natural beauty & started collecting her fav flowers. But every now & then her searching eyes would move towards the entrance..waiting for him impetiently.
She smiled at her hearts eagarness to get a glimps of him. It has been like that only, from the very begining. And now also, even after 8 months of them meeting almost everyday, this feeling of desperation to see him, is still the same, infact it has increased with time & each of their meetings!
Waiting for him, made her realise that how difficult task it is! Now she can understand very well that why he always cribed about her being late. Whenever she will come late, even if its just 5 minutes, he would start his cribing that how he has been waiting for her for so long & that she doesnt care about him! She smiled as the images of a pouting maan with a cute frown on his face, came to her mind! She bit her lips, smiling, thinking about his cute expressions & then moved towards the gates, with the thought of waiting for him there!
She was standing by a tree, looking around, when noticed him coming in her direction with hurried steps. He was looking at his watch so didnt saw her. Suddenly, a naughty smile appeared on her lips, as she thought of doing a little shararat with him. She immediatly hided behind that tree. She gigled thinking about his reaction..that cute pouting baby face, he would make on not finding her there. It will be real fun! "mujhe wait karaya na..ab bhugtoh..." ..she smirk naughtly. And waited to see his reaction!


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He reached at the park 5 minutes late today. He rushed inside, expecting her to be there, waiting for him. But was highly disappointed when he didnt find her anywhere. Instantlly a frown setteled on his handsome face & as expected, he started cribing... Angery at her carelessness.
" I should have known, wo.. Aur mera intezar karegi..?? Huhh..kabhi nahi..!!!" he smiled mockingly.. "intezar karna toh mera department hai! Hamari Madamji..pehle toh late aayegi, fir kahegi ki mujhe jaldi jana hai..nahi toh mumma daantengi! Tum chahte ho ki main unki daant khaun??"..he mimmiked her style, without any idea that soon he will be regrating his actions!
Frustreted, he came back at the entrance gate & stood there, waiting for her impetiently. He was continuesly looking at his watch & then at the road.
"hey maan" he looked up at the voice that called him & saw his close friend yash, coming towards him. He cursed his timing..
"great!! Issi ki kami thi! Jiska intezar hai woh toh aane ka naam nahi le rahi..aur.." he muttered under his breath, and smiled forcefully at his friend who felt more like a enemy at that particular moment. "hey, how are u buddy" ..he talked with yash for sometime..wanting to shoo him away from there as soon as possible.
To his hearts little relief, yash decided to leave as he was getting late. While going yash asked suddenly.. "btw, hows ur girl friend?" ..yash & his other friend who are close to him, knew about his liking towards geet. They hadnt met geet but used to tease maan about her..refering her as his girlfriend.

maan blushed at his question. But then tried to hide it with his fake anger. "ab der nahi ho rahi tujhe??" he asked raising his eyebrows, glaring at him. Getting his cue, yash left..but not before winking at him naughtily.
Maan smiled shyly, running a hand through his thick hair. He turn around to go inside, before some else could catch him standing there...Only to see an angery geet looking at him with her big angery eyes!
Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago

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