AsYa: Burning fire(part 3 updated: pg 3)

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Hey guys,I'm a newbie here! Hi my name's aakriti ( aaku). I really really really love AsYa. So here's my first ever OS.
And ya,get ready with your sabjiis as you're gonna hate , I guess!😃 😉



The moon was glowing as bright as it could with its full glory.Why not ,cuz today was the day Asad was going to confess to the love of his life,Zoya. No matter how would she react, he would take control and confess the hell out of himself and that to a day before their nikhaa. Yes his nikhaa was going to take place tomorrow,and that to in an old palace in Ajmer. His mother always wanted her son's marriage to happen in a Typical Rajasthani style with lots of merriment,unlike hers.

'I hope Ms.faroo...mere matlab , Zoya is awake...I really have to give this to her" said a nervous Asad holding a letter in his hand. There were a lot of small quarters like cottages in the garden outside the palace in which one of them was Zoya's. As he motioned towards his bride to be's cottage, there was an eerie figure that looked out for Asad's attention. Yes, the stone eyed witch,Tanveer ,had left no stoned unturned to kill Zoya. But alas! Nothing in the world would separate them." Aaj to Zoya ko Sabak sikhana hi parega. Asad to mere hi he"

As asad was about to knock the door , he realized that her door was half open. He quietly opened the door to find Zoya inside. The sight he saw in front of him made him smile the Chotu wala smile that he smiled at the rarest times. He saw his love , looking at the red suit she was going to wear tomorrow at the nikhaa. She looked at the dress and dreamt about the perfect nikhaa that would happen tomorrow. She was finally going to marry the man of her dreams- Asad, the guy who made her go weak on the knees and flew butterflies in her stomach. Little did she knew that she was blushing in hundreds of shades of red.

Seeing this made Asad want her even more...and that would be done today. He quietly placed the letter at the table near the door and left the cottage smiling at the daydreams Zoya was dreamin. He remembered their first encouter wondering how he fell in love with someone just the opposite of what he wanted.

At the other hand Zoya was twirling with the dress when her eyes fell on the letter Asad has left. Curious to know what it was she quickly read it aloud

" I know aap ko ye ajeeb lagega...par muje aapko kuch kehena he...in my cottage...right after dinner..."

Zoya was excited to know what Asad was planning to say." Mr. Khan bhi naa...sidhe sidhe Kyu nahi kehete...hamesha ek letter me hi likhte he ...hmph!"
As zoya came out of her cottage,she met her Aapi who called her to take some jewelry ." Aapi, kya aapko pata he Mr. Khan ka cottage kidher hai?" " oho,to aap unhe abhi se miss Karne lagi he!" Zoya's cheek turned pink as her Aapi remarked." Nahi Aapi ESA kuch nahi ha,wo to sirf..um...actually..." " To meri tomboy Zoya ko bhi sharmana ata he,,,,,,Asad ka cottage hamare cottage right wale lane ke corner ka wala he."

After dinner everyone went to their respective cottages. Zoya insisted her Aapi to let her go meet Asad alone.Aapi nodded a yes. As Aapi and Zoya shared the same cottage, she reminded Zoya that she has a lot of work left and not to forget to wear the face pack she had prepared for her. Zoya told that she wouldn't forget and went off to Asad. As she left, Tanveer who couldn't control her jealousy,tore the letter and flew in the air . " ms.Zoya farooqui, ham sab aapko bohot miss karege,aap mar Jo gai Aaj !Oh no,ab Jammy ka nikhaa kisse hoga,let me guess,MUJ SE!!!!!!!" She let out her evil laugh


Precap:
"Ok Tannu,if its that important,me aata hu. Wait mene Zoya ko bulaya he so please intezaar karo...it's really very important." * Turns the door handle* what! Door jam hogaya!


Ok,ready for your rotten sabjiis!!!!!!???!😆
Heyyy, this was my first ever os. thanks for reading this crap!!!!!!!
Do you want me to continue?, drop a comment and don't forget to like it!
~Aaku~

Part 2= pg 2
^_^

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its nice... now go on and continue
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Now its too gud n pl continue
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its too gud..u shd cntinue and pm me plz
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Love you guys for the encouraging comments. Thanks for the good response , so here's chapter 2 ^_^
Chapter 2

Asad on the other hand was practicing saying those three magical words. "Relax Asad it's not like you can't do it. First look at her in the eyes and speak your heart out! Yes, as simple as that!"

As Billo rani had feared, Asad was waiting inside for Zoya. She had to take him outside otherwise her plans would fail miserably.



" Hello, Jammy, aap kya ab busy he...mera matlab...wo...ky..a...hena...ji.."
" Tannu, tum thik to hona!?!"
" ha Jammy. Bas hamko aap se kuch baat Karni he"
"Ok Tannu,if its that important,me aata hu. Wait mene Zoya ko bulaya he so please intezaar karo...it's really very important." *

* Turns the door handle* what! Door jam hogaya! Zoya to kisi bhi waqt aa sakti hai."

" Saab! Saab! Dilshaad bi ne aapko ye pin diya he...app table se lijiega...hum chalte he" said mukta,a helper at the gala event.

As Mukta went out of Asad's cottage, Tanveer mistook Mukta for Asad. She, wasting no time put her plan into action.

Zoya on the other hand had problems finding out Asads cottage being confused on the right and left direction.

Tanveer dropped the last drop of liquid from the jerkin and admired herself for being so wickedly intelligent. " Humara nam bhi Tanveer he, hum kisi ko bhi apna saman nahi chalane dete...aur Zoya to Cheeti he,Cheeti!" She laughed out her evil laugh.

Zoya finally found Asads cottage and knocked the door. With Asad not responding she went inside, not knowing Billo rani's intentions. Tanveers happiness knew know boundaries seeing Zoya enter inside.


" zoya ye lo tumara tofa, Humara zindagi barbaad Karne k liye. Ab tum marogi to sab thik hoga"


She took out a matchstick and lit the jerkin of kerosene she had poured earlier. She went to the other side of the cottage, not knowing that her actions were being closely observed...observed carefully with bloodshot red eyes depicting hatred and fright towards Tanveer ...


As Asad was trying to get out through the balcony, HE had seen his dearest childhood friend, Tannu darling setting fire to his cottage.What he saw was something he could not bear.

But he heard of Zoyas voice calling him to open the door, unaware of the burning fire that Tanveer had set...

Part 3- pg 3


Okay guys Don't kill me!!!!!!!!!!!😉
Take a look at the precap:
"NOOO! GET AWAY, DON'T DO THIS...JUST GO AWAY"
Thanks for reading this crap Once again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Aaku~

Edited by Quboolian - 12 years ago
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Awesome...plz post the next part soon..can't wait...
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gr8...asad get to knw abt billi..u knw wht i have heard asad is going to write a letter..love letter for zoya...hope cv's do this in serial too

pari
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that was awesumm👏...plz plz plz cnt. soon
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" mr.khan! Aap kya Ander hai? Mr. Kha..."
" Zoya, ha me Ander hu...par door jam hoga he so PLEASE PLEASE bahar jao...JALDI!" Asad got into a turmoil whether to tell Zoya about the fire or not...he knew that without him, Zoya would just collapse. He wanted Zoya to get out as soon as possible because he would never forgive himself if something ever happened to Zoya.
Then an idea struck to Asad. He knew that this idea was ridiculous but nothing was greater that his love's life.
*whisper loud enough for Zoya to hear* " Tannu...tum bahar jao...Zoya aagai he...agar Hume zoya ne dekh liya to..."

Zoya was heart broken to hear that, so she stormed off outside. While on the other hand Billo rani, was scared as hell to find her Jammy inside.

She admitted" Humse is baar bhi galti hogaya hai...humne apne ...apne hi shauher ko Mar diya..."

Asad, having no way to escape, realized that he must die...Asad smiled " people always do crazy thing when they are in love" a lonely tear escaped from his eyes. The tear of guilt of not believing her , her innocent eyes about the stone eyed woman. Now that half of the cottage was on fire, he saw flashbacks coming of the most beautiful moments of his life...not with Ammi, not with Najma...not with Ayaan...only of Zoya. Each and every moment that he had spent with her, seen her smile and laugh...right from the day he saw her at the darga till he saw her blushing a few minutes ago.He knew only now how strong love was. But he had to save her and therefore he had...

Then Something struck Asad, a noise coming from the corridor outside his room. Before he could think of what it was, something broke the glass of his door...

xxx minutes before xxx

Zoya ran outside with eyes full of tears when she saw Tanveer coming towards her. " hi Tannu, I hope Maine tumara aur Mr. Khan k bich me aakar disturb nahi kiya hoga..."
" Zoya, aap kya keherahe he muje samaj nahi aaraha he. Me to Khala ke pass se hokar aayi hu..."
Zoya to herself: kya! To mr. Khan ne ESA Kyu kaha mujse. Wo itnee si baat par jhoot kyo bolege. Kuch to wrong hai. Ma ek baar phir udhar jaakar mr. Khan ko Bol dugi ki Maine Tanveer ko bahar dhekha hai...
As Zoya approached the cottage, she instantly felt uncomfortable. As she didnt want Asad to know that she was there, she quietly went at the backside of the cottage. And later she saw mr. Khan staring outside a window...helpless but still with a smile. She saw pain in his eyes that spoke volumes of what he was facing at the moment.
Millions of thoughts struck Zoya. Was mr. Khan not happy with this relationship? Am I misfit? Am I the reason mr. Khan is not happy? Doesn't he lov...
Zoya shed out a tear thinking that. No Zoya, you will stay strong and not cry to sleep...instead you will talk about it with mr. Khan tomorrow at the first hour before the nikhaa.
As she went at the front side of the house, she instantly closed her eyes as she felt herself falling towards the ground...as if someone pushed her from mt. Everest...she was so scared that she grew numb...she saw it. She saw her mother in there. Crying for help. She couldn't do anything. But wait, she had seen Asad inside...that made her die inside,the pain was excruciating her,a trillion times more of when her mother was burnt...Asad was there...
"No.n---o, no-----o,MR. KHA--------AN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
She screamed hysterically...she didn't know what to do and what not to do...then she cursed herself for being a bad omen. Allah didn't make her to love anyone, anyone whom she loved would get trapped in a fire and would burn to death. She loved her Ammi, she died...and now she lov...
She realized this moment that she couldn't lie to herself...she got her answer...she knew what to do...
xxx minutes later xxx

"Allah" said Asad. He thanked God for bringing Zoya into his life. Just then another sound distracted his prayers, the translucent glass door had a complete glass removed at its top. " probably the fire. Zoya I'm sorry kii Maine tumko kuch bhi nahi keh paya." This made Asad cry even more. Just then a scream made Asad have a heartattack...it was hers. The person he loved the most...Zoya...
Zoya had gathered up all her shattered courage and bound it strong. "No, not this time, I won't let you go Mr. Khan, not so easily...my love for you will always bind us, even when the stakes are high...I will save you...My love will save you Mr. Khan...!"
She took support of a crowbar that lay on a shed and stood up, wobbly, against her biggest fear,Burning FIRE.
She pushed the door and entered into a different world; a world of fear and fright. Almost half of the furniture was already on fire...
She remembered HIS words, HIS room. She realized why had he lied about Tanveer to her, to save her. She realized his concerns for her...he made her believe what she meant for him...she understood it all... She made her way through the fire, sometimes trying to fall and sometimes closing her eyes. Whoever spectated this scene would have described Zoya ans being terrified.
She made her way through the burning curtains and pushed the door with the crowbar. It didn't budge...then she hit the glass door hard...VERY HARD that it broke.
But then something heavy fell on the way,luckily didn't hurt her. She was so petrified that she screamed out loud...so loud that Asad heard her.
Asad ran towards the door. He saw her on the floor. panic-stricken he called out " ZOYA- ZOYA Tu---um idhar...IS WAqt kya...NO ZOYA...TUME MERE WAJE SE IDHAR aayi ho...NO! TUME JAANA hi hoga...NOOO! GET AWAY, DON'T DO THIS...JUST GO AWAY Zoya"
Zoya knew the value of Asad in her life. She was so happy to know that nothing had happened to her love. But her happiness didn't last forever...a large burning wood fell beside her . So she held onto herself tight and closed her eyes...
Asad witnessed the scene and couldn't control his emotions.





OK. Precap time;
"ZOYAAA- Mai aa raha hu...TUME KUCH NAHi HOGA...KUCH NAHI..."
Asad couldn't bear anything happening to Zoya. He LOVED her. And mind that love makes life live...he had to save Zoya cuz she was his life...



I know that it's very late but had some important exams! I really love the movie Aashiqui 2 and the last line was Fromm there ;D. Thank you guys for reading this ( ps. I'll not call this a crap as I had tightened all my loose screws just to write this XD 🤣) and ya, I'm very sorry for the mistakes here...but I'm sure my readers are excellent and are VERY patient!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆
Plz buddy me for more updates!

Thanks!
~Aaku






Edited by Quboolian - 12 years ago

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