BHEGI bhegi ke yadein-SHana os

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Experiencing the beautiful rains,,, my heart just went down a memory

lane..the memory I always remember when I feel the first rains'.may be u

also have one'.


suddenly an idea struck to write a memory of rains'on shanaa' aur koi ho

sakta hai bhala'remembering those days brought a smile on my

face'hope this os of mine also makes u smile'..


The smallest gift I can share with u'

Bhegi bhegi yaadein'.


LOACTION:;Mumbai'.

A girl is sitting by her window, enjoying cool showers of rain ,,, sipping her

fav beverage coffee'humming sme beautiful songs'.she was writing sme

in her personal diary'she always used to 'then she saw out of the window

seeing sme children playing in the gardenn'.making paper boats,, junping

in cuddles nearby'.


Wat innocent days,, the best period of life., such tension free days ' bt they

go of so soon' leaving behind memories to cherish forever . she ws turning

pages when a page appeared in front of her eyes.. and saw date 15th june,

2012'..



And he heart wandered back to that day..

Yes on 15 th june,2012' she was shooting near a beach location' her first

episode of arjun'.

(hope u get who the girl is'. All r pretty intelligent people)

FLASHBACK:

Shoot was going on and all were getting worried abt the weather.. it was becoming cloudy and rainy'.director wanted to wrap up soonn'..so he was being little quick and the actors didn't get much break also'they were freaking tired in the moisty weather and extreme heat from the lights around'.

Sana: I hope aaj bohot zyada barish hoo'

Sid: kyon aaj monsoon mein se pochkar aai hai tu?

Bez: ha yaar garmi toh bohot hai,. Aur isse dekh garme mein cutting chai nahi chot rahi hai..

Shaleen: aur meri cutting chai se kyon dushmani nikal raha hai tujhe garmi lag rahi hai.. kahe toh shower leke khada ho jaya hoon..

Sana: ha agar aaj barish nahi hue na toh shaa tu meri sar pe na shower leke khade ho jana..

(She knew he would never deny any of her demands.. he would grumble at first bt they agree to her')

Sid: ha bilkul shaa ko waise bhi kam kya hai?

Shaleen: aoii wella nahi hoon .. boht kam pade hai..

Sana: thik hai tum shower leke khade hona badme mein tumhare saare kam kar dungi I promise'

Shaleen: ha thik hai'..chalo yaar yeh dialogues prepare karo nahi toh saare plans pe gorky ka barish nahi par samundar ka khara pane ferenge'

Again back to work for almost 30 minutes' bt suddenly it started to rain actually it did'

All were runnning here and there . some to save the assets of production house., wrapping up the cameras and other important stuff..

Gorky: guys get into ur vanities. And others in the shelter'.

Bt there was smeone who follows the orders a little late'hamare sana..

Shaleen was holding her hand so she doesn't slip in mudd and rain'bt she left his hold' and started to play in rain'she opened her arms to welcome the rain and collect all the rain in her tiny hands'..she was jumping , dancing and singing'..taking full advantage of the rain '.

He saw her 'smiled at her antics' she always surprised him with her behaviour'it was almost 20 minutes she had been playing.. he was standing at the vanity door'watching her'he shouted from there'

Shaleen: baby andar chalo'

Sana: nahi shaa please.. mujhe aur khelna hai'. And tum aona yahan.. itni achchi baarish ho rahi hai aur tum ho ki'cme na jaldi se'

Shaleen: such a kid she is '..bt a sweet and cute on'.(his trance was broken by her shout)

Sana: shaa come no dnt be a spoil spot'

Shaleen: na baby u come back or u vl catch cold'

Sana: just 2 minutes'.bas

Shaleen: no 2 minutes'it has already being 20 minutes nw.. cme on baby..

Sana: no shaa just 2 minutes'

He became angry and she was playing with her health ..(yes he knew her health problems bt didn't disclose it much to others)' in her playing she is forgetting that such cold weather can lead to increase in her problems'

Shaleen: enough is enough chalo andar'

He shouted on her' took an umbrella.. went to her grabbed her hand and pulled her towards the vanity'(he was also wet)

This was the first time he ever raised his voice while speaking to her'she already started to cry'she was sobbing.. he turned and saw her'

Shaleen: shit I made her cry'. This can also affect her health'I m sorry .. I just lost my mind'

Sana: I m angry nt talking to u'

Shaleen held her ears' and said: mujhse galati hogai baby please mujhe maaf kardo.. please mujhse galati hogai..i promise mein tumpe kabhi nahi chillaunga..

Sana: u r so bad.. ek toh tum mere saath barish mein bhi nahi bhege.. aur upar se mujhe daandt diya'.itna chillaya '. Mein abhi aunty ko phone karke batati hoon phir achchi daandt padegi tumhe'

(whenever they used to fight ((just faking)) fight she used to call his mom and his mom used to give him a treat course of scolding and she would hear it.. even danced in happiness that she got him a scolding'.)

Shaleen: aree I shouted because I was worried' tum bimar pad jati toh'

Sana: ha thik hai.. dhere se bolte sana baby andar chalo bimar ho jaogi' par nahi tum delhi walo ke dil bhi pathar ke hogai hai kya?(no offences just a dialogue sooting)(please any1 dnt feel bad)

Shaleen: ab tak kya hibroo mein bol raha tha'..aur haan dekhiwale dildar hote hai apno ki care karte hai jaise mein tumhare samjhe tum'.

He went to his bag brought a towel'rubbed her wet hair to dry them''wrapped the towel around her..

She sneezed'.aachiooo'he glare her glare'.(look I told u u vl catch cold..)

Sana: abb aur sunaai ga mujhe' kaha tha maine sardi lag jayegi par sunna kisi hai..

Meanwhile the rain has slowed down'. He took the umbrella'to go out..

Sana: kahan jaa rahe ho'?

Shaleen: mein tumhare liye coffee leke ata hoon.. tab tak u change'I vl just be back'

Sana: mein bhi ese hi naraz hoti hoon.. he is such a sweetheart' barish bhi mere liye coffee lene gaya..

Suddenly her cells buzzed and she cme into the present'..

She wished to could go out in rain' enjoying it all over again' and sme1 to hold her hand and bring her back'rubb her wet hair get her a cup of coffeee'.bt these moments just became memories forever''''..

Here she was sitting alone in her roomm just watching the rain.. no excitement no enthusisam'

She got up and looked at her cell' and message beeped in''

It was a cup of hot coffee with two hearts on it'

http://www.sapphiresanctuary.com/CoffeeTalk/wp-content/uploads/2010/10/coffee-heart.jpg

(do see the link ... if u cant see the image)




and a towel tooo...(lol)


Message was:

I knw I m nt there to hold ur hand today' bt dnt go out much in rain..u will catch cold' and unfortunately aaj mein tumhara sar pochne ke liye bhi nahi hoo...coffeee pene ka mann kar raha hoga'. Dnt wnt abhi thodi dair mein ek delivery boy ayega tumhare fav coffee lekar'aur bhegne ke baad apna sar achche poochna'

Aaj bhale tumhare saath tumhara haath pakadke khada nahi hoon par yaad rakhna jab bhi mujhe yaad karoge mein tumhare saath hoga,,, jab bhi tumhe meri zarorat hogi I vl be there for u/.always' and forever'.

And haa shoot khatam hote hi I vl call u we go for a drive '.

Enjoy the rains'.. take care'.. dnt miss me too much'.yours shaaa'.

A tear escaped her eyes.. he was remembering the same moments she was'

" NO MATTER HW FAR U R U R'bt HEARTS ALWAYS REMAINS CONNECTED"

The only response she could make:

Miss u shaa waitng for u'..ur baby'

hope u all like it.. enjoy the rains...create new memories too cherish...and remember the old ones

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Arieltabi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
That was lovely os.
Aww Shaa is so cute 😳 .
Lag raha hai aaj Shana os ki barish ho rahi hai 😆 .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fantastic os dr.

Loved Shana. thy r so.. cute...

Loved Shaaa care n concern for Sana.

Message part was awesome.

Lovely ending.

Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWWW man in love with all ur stories now!!!
me big fan of u😃😃
thanks once again for a such a beutiful story!!!
it was awesome cute nd lovely!!!!!
loved the FB
aww the next moment when his message came it was awesome!!!
for u👏👏
Anika_PreRish thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Aww...
It was truly a lovely story.
Flashback was really very nice.
Ending part,especially,the message part was nice and beautiful.
Aww...
Shaa really cares for Sana.
Loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing
MSG u write touch my hrt
Superb,outstanding dr
Hatts of to u
Keep writing shana
Love u
Thanx 4 pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Awesome os.
I am speechless yrr.
Its amazing.
Thanx for pm.
bgargate thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was damn Cute...👏👏👏👏
Its raining here in Pune... and I could really feel it 😊😊😊😊
Beautiful... 😛
A_Derry_Girl thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Awww this was so cuteee!!!
The flashback, the message..it was just so adorable <3
loved it!!!!


856040 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#10
OMG it was sooo lovely,
me too love rain a lot

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