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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jarin04

papa, the pleasure is all mine u don't need to say thnx for ahything to your pari😉. " i really say you make a good detective," but to be honest meine yaha kuch bhi detect ya predict nahi kia🤣. yup papa all my gd ndbadqualities r from u😉

i know pari, you seriously look into the story finding evidences here and there and that makes you a good detective, papa's daughter ought to be like papa na😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a

navi, thanks for such a insightful comment, loved it

and next time tell me when you dont like my track ok, pleaseNow that u gave me permission to complain ... I'll definately fill u in 😳!

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Chapter 27: REMORSE

3 MONTHS AFTER THE INCIDENT

Uday was sitting in his office. He was checking his mail and talking to some business client simultaneously. 3 months passed since that day he was left free from court. He was now a survivor of the harsh politics played by the royals. His business thrived, he was happy. But he missed one person in his life- manyta, his first and last love.

After a week since the incident in the court took place, he started to send roses and candies to manyta, they were all returned back to him." she would be angry, but give her a chance to cool" was his motto.

3 months passes, yet all his gifts were returned to him unacknowledged. He did not mind. Patience was one of his finest virtues.

His thoughts were interrupted when his office phone buzzed. It was his PA

"sir, miss manyta wants to meet you, but she does not have an appointment, should I ask her to take one"

U: what? You mean princess manyta of devgarh.😲

Pa: yes, sir the very same.

U: send her in😃

PA: but sir, what about the appointment.

U: cant you understand what I said, just send her in, ok

PA: yes sir

Uday's PA cut the call and looked at manyta standing in front of her.

PA: you can go and see him. his cabin is ….

M: I know. She said rudely

The PA thought " now what does she wants again, hope uday sir does not make the same mistake with her again"

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Uday was thrilled. W-O-W. Finally manyta is here to meet him. so now did she finally acknowledge her feeling towards him. He felt so excited. He combed his hair and adjusted his suit.

Finally his wait was over. Manyta entered his cabin with grace. But there was no spark in her eyes or a smile on her lips. "oh, so she was here for something else" thought uday, and he smirked. A smile appeared on his face that would have made any girl, die for him.

He got up from his seat and extended his hand towards manyta. She ignored it...

U: take a seat.

Manyta looked at him for a second, and he saw raw hatred in that chocolate coloured eyes, he ignored it. she then sat on a chair far from uday

U: so princess, what brings you here?😃

He said flashing his sweetest smile, and looking at her face. Even today, he loved the girl in front of him, everything about her, both physical and emotional tied him to her. He wanted to stroke her face, hold her in her hands

Manyta cut him from his daydream. Her voice had a tone of steel in it.

M: mister😡…

What happened to" uday" he thought

U:eh…

Manyta chose to ignore him, she continued

M: I just came to tell you that just stop sending me flowers and candies like I am a kindergarten child. I know why are you doing all this, but let me remind you, iam not at all interested in anything ok. Just let me go, isn't it enough for you to spoil my life, now what do you further want?

She said questioningly

Uday moved closer to her and she moved backward, he hovered like a vulture over her chair. She felt disoriented. Ergh!! Why did he have to come so close to her, why does she have butterflies in her stomach? Concentrate manyta, he is your enemy

Uday came even closer to her, her hot breath fell on her face, her cheeks reddened

U: do you really want me out of your life, he purred

Manyta closed her eyes, and her hands were clenched in form of fists. She forced herself to get control. There were more serious matters that needed to be sorted.

Uday's palms were stroking her cheeks

U: I like the colour of your skin, it can be really tempting.

Manyta opened her eyes, the fury in her eyes back to maximum. She pushed uday away from her and stood up. Uday looked at her with a sort of admiration

"my tigress" he thought.😆

He started to move towards her,

"stay where you are, uday. I am damn serious. Just stay away from my life ok, I don't want any of your gifts or anything that has to do anything with you. I HATE YOU. I hate you," she couldn't get herself to repeat it, like she never meant it. But images of being publically humiliated and undergoing punishment for a mistake she did not commit made her firm. Here was a man she had once loved. But no, she hated him, hated him because his hands were stained with the blood of the innocent.

U: why manyta? His tone was suddenly business type

M: don't you know why, mr. shark. The terrible killer, who killed innocents for money, or was it for some sadistic pleasure. You are a sadist, your sick. Yuck.

U: manyta.😡 Uday warned.

M: what did I say that irritated you? Was I not right, you may have reasons to do so? But why rohan, why rajat? Why all those innocent people? What about that uday?

U: rohan deserved what he got, and rajjat it was self preservation, he threatened to expose me, and I was forced to eliminate the risk

M: risk? You are not a human uday, you are a demon.

U: enough manyta, I said enough😡

M: you need some psychiatrist help uday, you really need it

Uday came close to her and twisted her hand, it pained her,"ahhh🤢" she screamed

U: are you saying iam mad? Ehh? You bit**😡

M: leave me uday. Please.

U: no, you ******* don't you dare talk to me like that. His hands flew to her throat and she was suffocating.

The noise in the office brought in the employees in the room, the security separated uday from hurting manyta more. Uday was really mad…

Manyta left the room andas she left she looked at him, anger replaced by some unknown expression

Uday sat at his desk, his hands rested on his head, his anger still boiling, the employees left soon as they did not want to be at the receiving end when he erupted.

2 hours later

Uday had calmed a bit, he called his PA to his office, he did see fear in her eyes , so he softened his expression and asked her

U: veena, tell me what ismy most negative character?

Veena hesitated.

U: tell me, I wont eat you.

V: sir, i… I think its… your anger

U: explain?

V: sir you get angry very soon, and in your anger you do things which you later regret.

" very correct, I regret for being mad at princess"thought uday.

U; thanks veena, he smiled, you can now leave

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It was late night, uday was having his third peg. As alcohol loosened his system, he remembered manythings

"You are a sadist, your sick"

"You are not a human uday, you are a demon"

"you need some psychiatrist help uday, you really need it"

"sir, i… I think its… your anger"

A lot of voices spoke simultaneously in his head. He shoock his head in an attempt to clear it, but it remained.

"was he a monster"

"no he killed only those who deserved it"

" but what about their families"

"why should he care about it"

"was his anger his bad point?"

" everyone had their own good and bad points"

"did he need help?"

"was he mad eh"

His mind was battling between good and bad, and somewhere between he fell asleep.

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He was running behind a familiar figure, he called loudly" ma, stop" the figure continued to walk.

He finally overtook that figure" ma, stop na, it me uday"

" you are no son of mine"

"ma" he said shocked

"my son was not a killer, what about you"

And then her mother took a knife and plunged it into her womb

"I am a sinner as I gave birth to you"

She fell to the ground and in seconds died..

"MAAA"

Uday screamed and woke up. It was 4 in the morning, but the dream was so vivid…

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Finally another chap is completed. Hope you like it,

I know its so stupid

Please like the update, if you feel it was worthy and give your feedback.

It encourages me

Thanks evryone

Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
updated the chap do check it
pms wil be sent tmrw morning sorry😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
YIPPEE... AM FIRST TO COMMENT FEELING VERY HAPPY AND PRIVILEGED...

WELL UR UPDATE WAS NOT AT ALL STUPID IT WAS FANTASTIC FABULOUS LOVELY AND DANGEROUS TOO...

LUVED WEN UDAY SAID THAT MANYATA WAS HIS FIRST AND LAST LOVE...
JUST LUVED IT..

AND YEAH HIS PA WAS RIGHT IT'S HIS ANGER ONLY...

POOR MANYATA GOT HUMILIATED INFRONT OF EVRYONE BUT SHE SHOULD ALSO HAVE NOT PLAYED WITH HIS FEELINGS ANYWAYS... U R THE WRITER U KNOW BETTER..

AND AFTER THE SCARY DREAM OF UDAY I THINK HE WILL REALISE WAT HE DID...

AND UDAY SENDIN MANYATA CHOCOLATES AND FLOWERS WAS SO CUTE...

Now enough of my boring you okay...

BYE

HUGZZZ...
Edited by htgcute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
first of al
thanks for kicking the verdict out
that what makes this chappy awesome
i have read that many of you want him to be punished
but manyata played with his feeling
maybe he won the court case
but actually he lost everything
he had only his manyata
who loved him in this entire world
but he lost her
inspite of doing so much for her
she still thinks is to be demon
so is it fair on his path
it is very nicely written
i do pity him
poor he trying to win back him love
the way he got happy as his pa said manyata came
awnn he was super cute
no matter how much she runs still she will always love him
why is she bothered so much about rohan
after all he was no saint
thank you for updating
ps sorry if my comment offended you

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Andy , Awesome update👏. Uday is still persistant in winning Manyata over , but that's proving to be a fight till death. Manyata being Manyata will stick to her morals and NOT give Uday the chance he so much desires. Well , if she didn't want the candy and flowers ... she could've sent it MY WAY. I won't mind receiving gifts from Mr Shark ! The scene in the office was superb ... clash of the 2 egos. WOW - it was electric😉!!!!!!! Uday's anger - God , can anything be more deadly😳. Even Manyata lost her senses for a moment ... can't blame her😆!!!!!!! But it got quite violent towards the end and I don't like that Uday's staff had to see him like that. (THIS IS BESIDES THE POINT , but I have to mention it ... I LIKE UDAY'S PA😊). Lastly , Uday's conscience has kicked in . Hearing those truths from Manyata and Veena has got him thinking strongly about his doings ... that it even cropped up in his dream . I'm sure that's exactly how his mother does feel ... but it'll be hard for him to accept it and work towards reform. Great work Andy 👍🏼.
Eager to read more ,
do continue soon 😊. I owe u another comment for LTHEO ... I'll do it tonight😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update...loved it...uday send gifts to manyata everday wow...office scene was superb i loved it...uday's dream r u going to make him realizing his mistake...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update andy...loved it loads...awesome chapter...great job...

so manyata is not melted n uday is trying to get back his princess.

mr.shark sending flowers n chocolate.i am impressed lol.


OMG mr.shark in angry mode.made manyata n veena scared.

bad move uday. shud not have done dat in front of others.


loved d last part how u describe battle of udays mind n heart.

how his mother feels about herself being mother of a muderer.

it was so intensly decribed.


i think we will get to see a reformed uday wen d story go ahead.

enjoyed d chappy so much.now luking forward wat twist story takes.

continue soon dear.




Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago

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