'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new - Page 97

loved it... so sweet of uday to send flowers and candies to manyata... so manyata came to him that but the way he was hurting her in the office was not right looks like after having the dream uday will realise his mistake but please I hope we get to see some romantic manveer scene please update soon

👏 👏 awesome 👏 👏
This ff is so awesome and soo different
I just started to read it and i fallen love with ff
And u know what i like the most is this ff
Uday's character
And i really don't think he should be punished
Bcoz he need some1 who can help him not
Some1 who can punish him 😭 😭 😭
Plzzz update soon
And plz pm me

so sweet of uday sending flowers and candies to manyata

Originally posted by: htgcute

YIPPEE... AM FIRST TO COMMENT FEELING VERY HAPPY AND PRIVILEGED... thanks harsita😃

WELL UR UPDATE WAS NOT AT ALL STUPID IT WAS FANTASTIC FABULOUS LOVELY AND DANGEROUS TOO... was it dangerous???

LUVED WEN UDAY SAID THAT MANYATA WAS HIS FIRST AND LAST LOVE...ya me tooo

JUST LUVED IT..

AND YEAH HIS PA WAS RIGHT IT'S HIS ANGER ONLY...his anger made him a killer😭

POOR MANYATA GOT HUMILIATED INFRONT OF EVRYONE BUT SHE SHOULD ALSO HAVE NOT PLAYED WITH HIS FEELINGS ANYWAYS... U R THE WRITER U KNOW BETTER.. actually it was uday who got humiliated, to see that your staff saw you manhandelling a girl, eww!!

AND AFTER THE SCARY DREAM OF UDAY I THINK HE WILL REALISE WAT HE DID...even i hope sooo😃

AND UDAY SENDIN MANYATA CHOCOLATES AND FLOWERS WAS SO CUTE...he is romantic deep down

Now enough of my boring you okay...i was never bored, was loving every line of this comment😳

BYE

HUGZZZ...

Originally posted by: annabh

first of al
thanks for kicking the verdict out welcome anni😃
that what makes this chappy awesome
i have read that many of you want him to be punished
but manyata played with his feeling
maybe he won the court case
but actually he lost everything
he had only his manyata
who loved him in this entire world
but he lost her thats so correct anni, he did lose badly when he lost manyta, poor uday😭
inspite of doing so much for her
she still thinks is to be demon he did kill mnay, that is why she does not like him, rather thats why she hates him
so is it fair on his path
it is very nicely written thanks anni😳
i do pity him
poor he trying to win back him love ya but manyta wil make it really difficult
the way he got happy as his pa said manyata came
awnn he was super cute after alll he is uday na
no matter how much she runs still she will always love himwould she???
why is she bothered so much about rohanrohan was her best friend...after all he was no saintagreed but manyta mind works different
thank you for updating
ps sorry if my comment offended youanni why should i be ofended, i just loved this comment, you really observe well

Hey.. It was a really nice update...

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Andy ,hi navi😃 Awesome update👏. thanks navi, you always say so, evn if its not up to the mark, your so sweet😃 Uday is still persistant in winning Manyata over ya😳 , but that's proving to be a fight till death. dont say so, what if they actually die???😆 Manyata being Manyata will stick to her morals and NOT give Uday the chance he so much desires.manyta may not give him a chance, but uday will make sure he gets one😳 Well , if she didn't want the candy and flowers ... she could've sent it MY WAY. I won't mind receiving gifts from Mr Shark !why bothering about gifts, i will send you mr shark itself, happy??😳 anything for you The scene in the office was superb ... clash of the 2 egos. WOW - it was electric😉!!!!!!! how so?😃 Uday's anger - God , can anything be more deadly😳. mr shrk's revenge??/ Even Manyata lost her senses for a moment ... can't blame her😆!!!!!!! its called the SHARK'S EFFECT But it got quite violent towards the end and I don't like that Uday's staff had to see him like that. violence was a part of uday's life, his staff saw him getting angry with manyta, a lady who tried to publically humiliate their boss, they would feel thats she deserved it, so no harm done there😆 (THIS IS BESIDES THE POINT , but I have to mention it ... I LIKE UDAY'S PA😊).ahh!! does thta mean we should try a new combination with uday?😃 Lastly , Uday's conscience has kicked in . finally😳 Hearing those truths from Manyata and Veena has got him thinking strongly about his doings ... that it even cropped up in his dream . actually i wanted to get uday feel bad for his past deeds witout overdoing things, so i added that dream😃 I'm sure that's exactly how his mother does feel ... but it'll be hard for him to accept it and work towards reform.once he accept, then there is no turning back for him😃 Great work Andy 👍🏼.

thanks navi😳

Eager to read more ,

do continue soon 😊. after ltheo😳 .

thanks navi for this lovely comment, loved it as usual.. and dont forget to tell me when you dont like how the story progresses

fantastic update...loved it.thanks dear😃..uday send gifts to manyata everday wow...office scene was superb i loved it. thanks again😃..uday's dream r u going to make him realizing his mistake.in a way, yes its time he got reformed😃..[/QUOTE] thanks so much for the lovely commment 😃