Sitting By The Window...:A poem dedicated to Arjun

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: priyagopana
beautifully written
good job
thanx for the pm

Originally posted by: princess_pari
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awesome.
beautifully written.

Originally posted by: Deepikz
That was beautifully written

Originally posted by: Leki
Beautifully Written!!!!

Originally posted by: alien123
awesome yaar...kya poem hai...brilliant...you should publish your poems...loved it...👏

Originally posted by: Seenavas
beautiful

Originally posted by: live
this is lovely n heart touching😭😭😭

Originally posted by: -SREE93-
its beautiful

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awesome
love it
u r gr8 writer

Originally posted by: pihu_angad
superb..😆

thank you so much all of you for liking it...😳😳🤗🤗🤗🤗

Edited by daydreamer... - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

SITTING BY THE WINDOW...
(with a frozen heart)

The velvety night has descended but I haven't stirred,
Tears are stinging my eyes, my vision's blurred.
The whirlwind of thoughts is agitating me, and so,
Awaiting peace, I'm sitting by the window.

(what awaits us before the night i.e. after the life-span?)

The turmoil has now become a norm,
Like the eerie calm before a storm.
Should I cry and let it all out,
Or let my heart and mind try another bout?

(mind & soul try to guess...)

Should I seek guidance to break free of all lies,
Or should I just surrender to these surreal ties?
I don't know, or perhaps don't want to know,
For I know I reap what I did sow.

( every entity is undefined...)

And yet this restlessness is now too hard to bear,
The dull ache in my being is breaching the mask I wear.
The mask of strength, indifference and self assurance,
Its pain is now beyond my powers of endurance.

(Remembrance gives smiles & tears at a time.)

I do not seek sympathy for my friendless soul,
The bliss of solitude is my only goal.
I want to calm the sea raging within,
I want to feel the silence midst the din.

(sound of silent heart pains a lot...)

I don't want to be perfect or admired,
I just want to rest my soul, so tired.
I don't want to be the person most clever,
I just want to persevere in my endeavor.

(I'm too tired to lead my sinful soul--)

I don't want to be tethered or captured,
I just want to hear the song of peace, enraptured.
I don't want to scale the zenith of achievement,
For me achieving peace will be sufficient.

(How far the unknown transcend beyond my thought??)

The destination is known, but the path obscured,
And I must endure what can't be cured.
This innate desire is an incurable disease,
It'll plague me till my existence does cease.

(Unceasing emotion hiddenly suppressed in my mind...)

And so my heart bleeds and cries,
For sleep has long evaded my eyes.
Life now seems to be an endless maze,
Where the right path always eludes my gaze.

(I,gazing silently,hopelessly,painfully...
For a drop of PEACE.)

You may say I'm selfish and greedy too,
And maybe I'm not at all true.
And though you may find me as alive as it gets,
I'm a dead soul in a body that breathes between sunsets.
aww...superb line dear👏

(A dead soul can be revived by true love that's passionate.)

The golden sun has ascended, but I haven't stirred,
Tears are stinging my eyes, my vision's blurred.
The whirlwind of thoughts is agitating me, and so,
Awaiting peace, I'm still sitting by the window.

(A paining soul,wants to get alive with a little peace...
Too hard to stir with a drop of affection??)

Edited by surprising - 12 years ago

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Prerna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

jaldi unres karna rumpu di...waiting...

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

With A Frozen Heart

What awaits us before the night i.e. after the life-span?
Mind & soul try to guess...
Every entity is undefined...
Remembrance gives smiles & tears at a time.
Sound of silent heart pains a lot...
I'm too tired to lead my sinful soul--
How far the unknown transcend beyond my thought??
Unceasing emotion hiddenly suppressed in my mind...
I,gazing silently,hopelessly,painfully...
For a drop of PEACE.
A dead soul can be revived by true love that's passionate.
A paining soul,wants to get alive with a little peace...
Too hard to stir with a drop of affection??

Prerna:

😎Does it seem like a different poem??😳

btw ur poem is too good...go ahead dear🤗

Edited by surprising - 12 years ago

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Prerna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

thank you so much di...was waiting for your comment...yours is always the most special...🤗🤗

Originally posted by: surprising
With A Frozen Heart

What awaits us before the night i.e. after the life-span?
Mind & soul try to guess...
Every entity is undefined...
Remembrance gives smiles & tears at a time.
Sound of silent heart pains a lot...
I'm too tired to lead my sinful soul--
How far the unknown transcend beyond my thought??
Unceasing emotion hiddenly suppressed in my mind...
I,gazing silently,hopelessly,painfully...
For a drop of PEACE.
A dead soul can be revived by true love that's passionate.
A paining soul,wants to get alive with a little peace...
Too hard to stir with a drop of affection??

Prerna:

😎Does it seem like a different poem??😳

btw ur poem is too good...go ahead dear🤗