ARIYA OS: TELEPHONE LOVE

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Charecter Sketch.
ARJUN RAWTE

CHESS CHAMPION GRANDMASTER
RIYA MUKHERJI

MISTERY GIRL
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SHREEKANTH SEN

JOURNALIST AND BEST FRIEND OF ARJUN
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LIZA D'CRUZ

College time gf of shree
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VISHNU MUKHERJI

RIYA'S DAD
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NOTE:THIS IS THE STORY OF 90S SO NO MOBILE AND ADVANCED TECHNOLOGY
ARJUN RAWTE a young chess player become grandmaster after beating Russian world champion Polonski.
Shree: Yar arjun tu tho rato rat mashoor ban gaya
Arjun: kya khak famous hu, mera koi bi fan nahi hai, society me b koi nahi pehchanta aur tho aur media bhi mujhe cover nahi karte.
Tabhi phone bajta hai.
Arjun: hello
Ladki: hello arjun grandmaster banne par bahut bahut badhai. Aur mai apki bahut badi fan hu.
Arjun to uska voice sunke hi impress ho chuka tha upar se itne tarif sunke bahut kush ho gaya.
Arjun: apka naam?
Girl: aap itne bade chess champion hai khud pata karlijiye na. Apka clue hai mere naam [R] se shuru hota hai, apke paas aadhe ghante ka samay hai and cut the call.
Arjun and Shree start to write names that start with R.
After half an hour
Girl: kuch pata chala mere champion.
Arjun: Rima
Girl: nahi
Arjun: Rita
Girl: Nahi
Arjun: Rakhi
Girl: nahi.
Fir arjun wo sara naam(riya ko chodkar) bata deta hai jo shree ne likha hai aur jawab nahi.
Arjun: (gusse se) to tumhara naam kya hai ramba, urvashi, ya menka ya chudail.
Ladki gusse se phone kat deti hai.
Arjun ko bhi lagta hai use aise baat nahi karna chahiye tha.
Do din baad
Girl on phone: kaise ho mere champion.
Arjun: mujhe tho laga tum mujhse naraz ho, khair us din k liye mai tum se maafi maangta hu. Plz maaf kardo mujhe.
Girl:chaliye maaf kardiya.
Arjun: mai apse milna chahta hu.
Girl: agar aap mere number ko 2 min me dhoond le to fir milungi. Aur arjun ko ek puzzle solve karne ko kehti hai jisme uska number chipa hota hai.
Arjun puzzel solve to kar leta hai par wo ek phone bhoot ki hoti hai.
Arjun in sub se bahot frustrate ho jata hai aur shree se kehta hai: kya yaar is ladki ne to mera dimag kharab karke rakha hai, naam to pehle hi nahi pata aur ab uper se ph. No bhi dhundo.
Shree: chill dudude, tu itna tension kyun le raha hai dund lenge na use.
Aur tu bata tu us ladki ke peeche itna paagal kyun ho gaye ho kahi kuch choot to nahi raha hai.
Arjun: kuch nahi sab kuch choot raha hai, pehli baar jab uski aawaz suni to mujhe ek apnapan mehsus hua, isse mai kya naa du mujhe kuch nahi pata shree.
Aur us ladki se letters aur flowers arjun ke liye aate rehte hai par arjun ko uske bare me kuch nahi pata.
Shree: kyun na hum telephone exchange ki madad le number dundne me?
Arjun: Thik hai tum jaake pata karo.
Par shree number dund nahi pata par waha use uske college time gf liza milti hai jo waha ke telephone operator hai.
Isi number dundne k chakkar me arjun ek jaga ja pahonta hai jaha pe ladke aur ladkiya drugs leke maze kar rahe hote hai. Tabhi waha police aati hai aur sab go arrest kar lete hai, hamare arjun saab ko bhi jail ki hawa khani padti hai baad mai shree aake arjun ko chudakar le jata hai.
Us ladki ko ye sab pata hota hai aur isi bat pe arjun ko chidana shuru karti hai.
Girl: to jail ki hawa kaisi thi arjun saab.
Arjun: ye sab tumhari wajah se huwa aur mai tumhe dhond kar hi rahonga samjhi ya samjhaun.
Girl: to apke paas ek maheene ka waqt hai. Bye best of luck and cut the call.
Arjun us ladkhi ki beji hui har letter ko padta hai aur ek letter mai us ladkhi ne akhir me galti se likh diya tha tumhari RIYA.
The girl calls Arjun.
Girl: Hello arjun kaise ho
Arjun: mai thik hu tum kaisi ho riya?
Riya(shocked): apko mera naam kaise pata chala.
Arjun: tumhari over confidence se.
Riya: matlab?
Arjun: tumne ek letter me galti se tumhara naam likh diya tha ab samjhe yaa samjhaun?
Riya: isme konsi badi baat hai abhi mera phone nu aur address dundna baaki hai chalo rakti hu bye.
Arjun ke liye naya championship match hai Polonski k khilaf. Uske liye Polonski India aa raha hai. Isse pehle Arjun ko local khiladi Pathan laala ko harana hota hai.
Jab arjun match ke liye taiyyar ho raha hota hai uska jaani dushman Sikandar aake use best of luck kehke jaata hai. Ye baat arjun ko hazam nahi hui.
Arjun match jeetne hi wala tha ki Pathan lala complaint karta hai use hepnotise kiya gaya hai, aur arjun ke pant ki jeb se ek nimbu milta hai aur arjun ko tournament se disqualified kar diya jata hai. Arjun ko pata chal jata hai ye Sab Sikandar ka kaam hai.
Uske baad Riya ki call athi hai
Arjun: hello
Riya: kya hua itni jaldi haar maan gaye?
Arjun: tho phir mai kya karu?
Riya: Tum Pathan Lala Aur baki 6 logo ko challenge karo ke tum un sab ko ek sath haraoge wo bhi ankho par patti band kar.
Arjun: Pagal ho gayi ho Riya? Ek sath 7 logon ko wo bhi ankhon pe patti band kar, mujhe nahi lagta mai ye kar paunga.
Riya: Tum try karke tho dekho mujhe poora vishwas hai ki tum hi jeetogi.
Arjun decides to try out her suggestion and challenges Pathan and six others and beats them successfully blindfolded and regains his championship.
Shree: wah yaar kya baat hai ek sath 7 logon ko haraya kya baat hai?
Arjun: ye sab riya ke sujhav ke kaaran huwa hai.
Shree: arjun mujhe kuch kehna hai.
Arjun: bolo shree
Shree: mai na shadi kar raha hu.
Arjun: kis se?
Shree: Liza meri college ki time ki gf. Jab mai telephone exchange gaya tab isse fir mila. Baat itni bad gayi ki ab to shadi karni hi padegi.
Arjun: tum bhi shree phone number ke badle apni setting karli, koi baat nahi mai tumhare liye bahot kush hu bol kab bhabi se mila raha hai?
Shree: bahut jald
Arjun: acha mai bhi tumhe ek baat batata hu mujhe lagta hai mujhe Riya se pyar ho gaya hai, pehle to mai is emotions ka naam dund nahi paa raha tha, phir jab usne mujhe challenge ke liy encourage kiya aur mujhe support kiya uske baad mai clear hu. I AM MADLY IN LOVE WITH HER Shree. Tumhe to pata hai uski ek phone k liye kitna wait karta hu aur kitna pareshan ho jaata hu, ab bas us se milna chahta hu
The songs playing the minds of both ARJUN and Riya at the same time
HOTON PE BAS TERA NAAM HOhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_hTioZjByXA
JANE KAISE KAB KAHA HAME PYAR HO GAYA
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xbTpJ3jNX90
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Phone rings
Arjun: hello
Riya: hello arjun
Arjun: tumhe pata hai riya hamara shree shadi kar raha hai.
Riya: wohi na jo hamesha tumhare sath rehta hai aur mujhe dhoondne me tumhara madad bhi kar raha hai.
Arjun: Tumhe kaise pata?
Riya: Mujhe sab kuch pata ha sirf tum akele hi champion nahi ho hum bhi hai
Arjun: thik hai mai tumse milna chahta hu
Riya: isliye tumhe mera phone number aur address decode karna hoga aur ha sirf 4 din bache hai and cut the call.
Ab sirf 2 din bache hai arjun apne failure par frustrate ho jata hai. Aur Polonski ki match ke din hi riya ki deadline aati hai.
Arjun has to go delhi
Riya calls him and tells him that he can meet her right away as she is giving party to her friends at hotel Ashoka
If he can arrive in 5 minutes he can meet her.
Arjun hotel pahunchata hai aur kamre ke andar darwaze ke piche Riya ka hath dektha hai aur use pakdne ki koshish karta hai. Par Riya waha se nikal jati hai.
Arjun shree ko call karke kehta hai apne 5 friends ko lekar hotel aajao aur fir unhe Riya ke friends ke piche bej deta hai lekin riya k dost un ladko ko apne piche dekh darakar bhaga dete hai.
Arjun delhi k liye niklta hai
Polonski k khilaf Chess kelte waqt disturbed rehta hai kyun ki ab bas chand ghante hi bache hai.
Chess k chal chalte waqt wo riya ka puzzel solve karleta hai aur pata chalta hai uski ghar JP Nagar B'lore mai hai (ARJUN KO KAISE PATA CHALA? ANSWER: KYUN KI ARJUN TO ARJUN HAI)
Polonski wins Arjun exclaims Aap is match me jeet gaye par MAI APNE LIFE KA MATCH JEET GAYA.
Arjun calls Shree and tell him to search for houses In JP Nagar with name RIYA
Arjun also Calls Liza and ask her to find the phone number of anyone whose name or company name is RIya located in JP Nagar.
There are only one Riya In that area so he easiely traces her phone number and address.
Arjun runs out of B'lore airport aur waha Riya ke dad khade hote hai aur apna introduction dete hai. Ye sunte hi Arjun kehta hai me challenge jeet gaya kyu ki deadline k liye abhi kuch waqt baki hai aur uske andar hi Usne Riya ka phone no. Aur adress dhoond liya hai.
Riya's father ask him to come home.
Raste me car me jate waqt Riya ke papa Riya ki likhi hui letter arjun ko dete hai.
RIYAS WORDS IN THE LETTER.
MERE PAPA TUMHE YE LETTER DE RAHE HE IRKA MATLAB YAHI HAI KI AB MAI IS DUNIYA MAI NAHI HU.
MUJHE EK RARE DECEASE THI AUR SIX MONTH KA WAQT THA. AUR MAI DOST BANANA CHAHTI THI AUR UNHE MERE BIMARI KE BARE ME PATA NAHI HONA CHAHIYE THA. AUR FIR MAINE TUMSE BAAT KARNA SHURU KIYA.
AUR TUMSE HAR DIN BAAT KARNE LAGI.
AUR BAAT KARTE KARTE SHAYAD MUJHE MERA PEHALA PYAR HO GAYA.
HA MAI TUMSE PYAR KARNE LAGI THI. PATA NAHI KYUN FIR BHI HO GAYA.
AUR MUJHE PATA TH MERA PYAR ADHOORA REHNE WALA HAI KYUN KI MAI THO MARNE WALI THI.
MARNE SE PEHLE MAINE APNE DIL K BAAT LETTER PE LIKHKAR DAD KO DE DI.
AUR MUJHE YE BHI PATA HAI KI TUM MERA PATA ZAROOR DHOND LOGE.
LOVE YOU ARJUN.
DONT FORGET ME.
GOOD BYE FOREVER.
Car stops infront of riyas house.
Riya ki body ko ghar ke samane rakha gaya hai. Aur riya ke dad arjun ko andar bulte hai, tabhi shree bhi waha pahunch jata hai.
Par arjun wapas mud jata hai aur Riya ko bina dekhe hi wapis jane lagta hai.
Shree: Arjun Ye kya kar raha hai Riya ko ek bar tho dekh lo.
Arjun: Nahi shree Riya mere Kwabo me khayalo me aur Sapno me Zinda hai aur mai use apne Kwabo, Khayalo Aur Sapno me Zinda dekhna chahta hu. AUR WAHA SE NIKAL JATA HAI


Mujhko Ye zindagi lagti hai ajnabi , chao bhi dhoop bhi har naye pal hai naye.
Mujhko ye zindagi lagti hai ajnabi chaon bhi dhoop bhi har naye pal hai naye
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The story is of a Kannada film. KARNATAKA people can guess.
Edited by iloveraj - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os
riya died but she is lucky to get her first love that too with arjun
arjun's last dialoges are nice
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wow..
Simply awesome OS ..
Lovd it to bits..
Frst i was indulge in it k arjun kesey riya ko fnd karey ga nd finallie he does .. Nd i was k nw he goin to meet bt in end da riya died.. :( nd riya's lettr was so emotional... Nd arjun dialogue in da end was jus amazing..
Very-well written
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wow loved it.. The story was superb dear.. Keep writing..
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Hrt touching os
Hatts off to u
One tear drop4m my eyes when I read last line
Awesome,superb,outstanding ,brilliant dr
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Posted: 12 years ago
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totally awesome story...!!!
damn gud work...!!!
Loved each part each word and sentence of it...
Thank you for amazing os...
TRUE love rocks ariya rocks...!!
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Awesum os
lovely
very wel writen
nyc title
amazing sng..!
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awesome. ..
omg so emotional. ...
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i am crying now
Hrt touching dear

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