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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry title nhi hai
bas jo mann mein aaya likh diya
so be ready to throw ur foot wears on me


When I see in your eyes

I could see the flying hopes

Can it be in my dreams

But it really true sounds

When I was in a trauma

I felt delighted with your aroma

But when I looked around

There were no one around

You were always there for me

But you never asked anything to me

I may be the one gifted

With your presence that blossomed

Both my heart and soul

And now your presence become my soul

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing gunnu
very beautifully written...loved every line
u r truly a gifted one..!!!
superb.
keep writing more n more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: samiya.059

Amazing gunnu
very beautifully written...loved every line
u r truly a gifted one..!!!
superb.
keep writing more n more


kya di??
aap bhi humesha mujhe sharminda krti ho
its nothing like that
bs missing all saheli didis
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohh wow..
Simply awesome..
Lovd it..
Very-well written 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aroojarain

ohh wow..
Simply awesome..
Lovd it..
Very-well written 👍🏼


thanx
pehle wa;i keliye bhi
aur abhi keliye bhi😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb yar...
👏👏
beautiful very well written...
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: devildiva21

superb yar...
👏👏
beautiful very well written...
loved it...


thanx 4 ur compliment😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey gwen dear...what yaar...

Where were this creation yaar...

Where did u hide it...tell tell...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Gunnu
sharminda hone ki kya baat hai...
its really awesome
abh write more
would love to read more..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: samiya.059

@Gunnu
sharminda hone ki kya baat hai...
its really awesome
abh write more
would love to read more..!!!




KYA...

Gwen tu sharma rahi hai...kya joke hai yaar...

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