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WOW!! I LOVED this!! And I HATE Tanveer! but then again.. who doesn't.. LOL..
I actually love the way you described every emotion of theirs.. I mean even though there was not much action in the OS as a whole.. the scene left me breathless. Your writing actually enabled me to picture every intricate detail in the scene.. especially Asad Zoya closeness.. him walking in on her.. her being confused..! It just left me wishing one thing..
'If ONLY he would have said it that tad second sooner!' Idiot..!! But then again.. he's always been one..lolzz!!
You got me hooked onto your writing ma'am..!! So please do keep writing loadz and loadz!!! :D
I actually love the way you described every emotion of theirs.. I mean even though there was not much action in the OS as a whole.. the scene left me breathless. Your writing actually enabled me to picture every intricate detail in the scene.. especially Asad Zoya closeness.. him walking in on her.. her being confused..! It just left me wishing one thing..
'If ONLY he would have said it that tad second sooner!' Idiot..!! But then again.. he's always been one..lolzz!!
You got me hooked onto your writing ma'am..!! So please do keep writing loadz and loadz!!! :D
