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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome Banner 👍🏼 ... excellent !!!!
beautiful update
excellent 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
aman-aisha convo was nice
thanks
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
so the mystery girl is sakshi!!!!

y arjun is enclosing himself???

wat happened to him??!!!

superbbb dear..

update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Firstly the banner is superb kunchu.coming to the update,sam-aman conversation showed not only aisha but Rathod too misses arjun.So the mystery girl is Miss Saakshi Anand.Well gud to see she voices her doubts about him recommending her name for ETF&the way he clears her doubts about not recommending but suggesting.Superbly penned down the Mentor-protegee relationship.Now waiting to see Saakshi's entry at ETF&how will she succeed in uniting the two.Thanks for the PM dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely amazing update
Sakshi is cumin 2 reunite arakshi
Y cant arjun go wid sakshi
Is sumfin wrong wid arjun ????
Update sooonnn
2 2 2 many questions but no answers
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Posted: 12 years ago
Di sorry for late comment.
There was a problem.

In the last part loved sam and aman's talk. Thank god sare confusion clear ho gaye.
And the mystery girl was joining etf. And she is angry at arjun.
Thats interesting.

Now this part,
aman and sam talks were cool and nice.
The mystery girl is sakshi.
Mujhe pehele hi pata tha.
And mysteries abhi tak clear nahi hue. Kya hai aakhir mission arjun ka ?? And wo kyun wo ye sab kar raha hai??
Sak- arjun ki batein and baba -sak ki batein accha tha.
And then amans apology to aisha. And her shocked expression wen he told her abt taj mahotsav.

Ab kya hoga??
Ab aur interesting hai story.

Thanks for pm .
And srry fo very late comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello everyone...
This part may look like a filler...but its very much needed for the coming chapters..
so here it goes..

CHAPTER 24:

Aisha walked to the home. There was a hollow feeling again. Everything was almost falling back to pieces. They why did this turn happen? Why did the reminder of her Allahabad life had to come up now?

He saw me there. Then why didn't he say about it before? Was he seeing me as Nadiya then? Have that misunderstanding cleared off well?

No questions can be answered without looking for the answers. And the answers to the questions were Aman himself. They need to speak, soon enough now.

***

After dinner Sakshi went to Arjun's room. He was going through the TV as usual. "may I come in?"

Arj: (not looking up from the set) agar na kaho tho bhi ayegi na?

Sa: exactly. (walking in) you know me so well Aryan.

Arj: at last you did it. thank you.

Sa: tumne hi tho kaha tha ke naam me kya hai? Aryan ho ya Arjun, mujhe bas bath karni hai. (looking at the tv) ab agar mien yaha hu tho iske kya zaroorath hai?

She off the tv. He gives his usual glare.

Sa: god… kafi din hue hai kisine mujhe aise ankhen dikhake. I was terribly missing it.

Arj: koi bath nahi. Rathod is also good at it.

Sa: ha unse yaad aya… tell me some tips. Ke waha sab kaise hai? kaise tikna hai…

Arj: ek hi bath pe dhyan do. Give your 100%. Waha masti mazak ke jagah nahi hai.

Sa: ok… aur Rathod sir aur baki team?

Arj: Rathod strict hai. Protocol follow karna koi usse seekhe. Gussa naak pe hai. ek 'dammit' means he is pissed. Second one means 'you are dead'.

Sa: interesting.

Arj: Sree… IT expert. Kuch bhi IT related ho, he is the guy. You met him at ultima, right?

Sa: ha, he is good at his work.

Arj: next Chotu. Commando hai. and don't try to hug him.

Sa: kyu??

Arj: wo tumhe waha jaake patha chalega. Next Liza. Forensic expert hai. Aman ko tum mil hi chuke ho.

Sa: yeah. He's good… handsome hai. smart hai..aur…

Ar: aur tumhare second in command bhi hai. don't forget that.

She gives her cheeky sarcastic grin. "Arjun… sabke bare me boldiya…ek ko chod ke…"

Arjun looks away from her. She waits, but silence prevails. She felt he was not going to open up. She thought of going away but then she heard his voice.

"Aisha. Team ke aisa hissa jo kuch bhi karne ko thaiyar hai. Kabhi bhi undercover jasakthi hai. aur apne kaam me best bhi hai. Kabhi Nadiya, kabhi Aisha, aur kabhi Aisha Arjun Rawte…"

She could not see his eyes. But she knew it was speaking volumes by itself. "You miss her a lot… Arjun"

He turns to her. The face was blank.

Sa: you really miss her. Kash tum usse yaha ane dethe…tho …

Ar: jao…jaake sojao Sakshi.

Sa: bath ko hamesha man tano Arjun. Is bar tho bilkul bhi nahi. You need to hear this. Akhir kab thak aise chalega? I have seen her Arjun and trust me she is strong enough to handle you. Do saal thak wo kaha thi ye na tumhe teekh se patha hai, aur na mujhe. Wo kis zindagi jeerahi thi, ye bhi nahi patha. Thank God she is back in Mumbai. Ab usse aise andhere me math rakho.

He was silent all the way.

Sa: look I didn't mean to hurt you. Still just think about it. Aur ha…tum chinta math karo. Ab usse akele hone ke problem nahi hogi. Mien hu na…

She said pulling her collars up.

Ar: issi bath ka dar hai. Dekho sambhalke. For the time being they should no nothing. Call ya sms sirf Aryan naam pe. Sakshi I'm still not ready to come in front of all. So please try to help me.

Sa: I know and I will. Par tumhe sochna hoga iske bare mien. Promise?

Ar: ok promise.

She gets up to go. Then turns at the door. "Arjun… kya baba sab kuch janthe hai?"

He gives a sigh and nods no. "nahi Sakshi, not yet… uskeliye abhi bhi waqt hai."

She understands the matter and goes to her room.

After a while Mr. Varma comes in with a tray of food.

Ar: baba kithne baar kaha hai, ye sab math kiya karo.

Va: aur kithne baar meine bhi kaha hai Aryan, ke mujhe ye sab karne me koi problem nahi hai.

Ar: aap nahi samjhoge. Aap khana khaya?

Va: nahi. Socha ke aaj hum saath me khalenge.

Ar: good idea. Chaliye.

They have the food. Baba was so silent today. Aryan held onto the silence till they had the food.

Ar: baba, kya hua? Aap aaj bohot chup ho.

Va: kuch nahi Aryan. Bas aise hi.

Ar: mujhe patha hai.aap aaj sabere ke baath pe soch raha hai na?

Va: tumhe kaise …. Oh ha... mien Aryan se nahi Arjun Rawte se bath kar rahi hu na…

Ar: apke man padne keliye Arjun banna zaroori nahi hai baba.

The words were so pure coming from heart. Varma could feel it.

Va: par bath usne sahi hi tho kaha tha na… meine tumhe Aryan ka naam diya. Tho indirectly meine hi tumhare andar ke Arjun ko mar dala… she is right. Naam rakha tha meine…par ye hamesha tumhare saath hoga, ye nahi socha tha.

Ar: isme aapke koi galathi nahi hai baba. Ha maana, ke naam apne rakha tha. Lekin isse lekar chalne ka decision mere hi tha. Aur uskeliye aap zimedaar nahi hai.

Va: par uss din jo hua…wo bhi bhulaana asaan nahi hai Arjun.

Ar: apke awaz me Aryan sunna ache lagthe hai.tho please aise hi rahne dijiye. Aur rahi wo saare baath, aap uske fikar math kijiye.

Va: meine galathi ki hai Aryan. Aur tum mujhe kithna bhi samjhane ke koshish karu, tho bhi wo galathi hi rahthe hai.

Arjun sat for a while to give some time for baba.

Ar: baba… kisike jaan lena aur kisike jaan bachana…dono alag alag bath hai… aur please aap ye bath mane ko thaiyar hojayiye.

Baba gives a sigh. "ok...rath bohot hochuke hai. so jao. kal hum dusra course shuru karne wale hai. First couse ka kaafi asar hai Aryan."

Ar: ya…I can see that. (sarcastically)

Va: aise nahi kehthe Aryan. Dawa aur dua se bhi bade kuch hai, wo hai hosla. Usse kayam rakho. Apne liye… apne Aisha ke liye.

Arjun looks at him. baba had a strange smile. "ye aap…"

Va: dekha tha meine usse Sakshi ke phone pe. Bohot achi hai.

Arjun gives a smile. Baba wishes him good night and goes out closing the door.

"aise hi muskurathe raho Arjun… zindagi abhi bhi baki hai tumhare…"

***

Aman was not sure what to expect. As the usual routine he reached his office in time. The usual masti gang didn't disappoint him. They were right there, chatting over a cup of coffee. But she was not there.

Rathod came behind him and saw him standing at the corridor watching the gang.

Sa: kya hua? Aise kya dekh rahe ho un logonko.

Am: kuch nahi Rathod. Ye dekh raha hu ke kithne milthe julthe hai ye sab. I mean case aya tho pure professional. Nahi tho full on masti.

Sa: ha wo tho hai. par ab ye sab kyu keh rahe ho? any trouble?

Am: nahi aise kuch nahi. Ek time tha ke mujhe laga tha ke zindagi ke best part hothe hai khulke jeena. Khulke sochna aur khulke bath karna. Lekin ab lagtha hai har kadam kafi zyada soch samajhke lena hai. kisiko kab hurt hoga ye tho nahi keh sakthe.

Sa: I still don't get what's troubling you.

Am: forget it Rathod. Ek cup coffe loge?

Sa: no thanks. I just had one. Ok see you later. Have some calls to make.

He nods and goes to it. Sree notices Aman and holds a cup high asking for a cup of coffee. Aman says no and goes to his cabin.

***

Aisha had made a mind to speak to him. But what to say, that was stll a trouble. She walked towards Aman's cabin. Earlier going to that cabin had a different feeling. And today it was again different. The place felt like alien to her. She knocked at the door. With permission she walks in.

Aman raises his eyes from the file and saw her. She too had a hesitating face. She held a file for him to get the signature. He took it and indicated to sit down.

All through the time that he was going through the file, an unbearable silence prevailed. He saw her looking around the room at times.

After giving the file back to her, it still remained.

Ai: kuch puchna chahthi thi.

Am: pucho. Par usse pehle ek bath, kal jo meien kaha… I didn't mean to hurt you. I saw you at Allahabad. Par uss waqt tum mere liye Nadiya thi. Aur mujhe laga ke tum wo purane zindagi chod diya. I was happyfor you. Yha aane ke baad ithne sare revalations… I mean it was confusing.

Ai: I get it sir. Even its confusing for me. Par I hope aap wo bathein fir samne nahi layenge. Wo 2 saal mere liye bohot tough thi. Aur ab mien us life se bahar aane ke koshish me hu. Tho please…

Am: sure, that matter would never come in front. I promise.

Ai: thanks sir. Mien chalu?

Am: ek minute. Tum apne friends ke beech me bhi kafi khoyi dikhthi ho. try to mingle more Aisha. They are really caring for you.

She was taken a back a bit. "I know sir. But trust me I'm trying…. Thodi time lagega hi…"

Am: sure. Take your time. is team ka strength hi issi friendship hai. being there fo each other. Tough to see outside.Aur mein bhi dheere is team ke ek hissa banne ke koshish me hu.

Ai: of course sir.

Am: have a nice day Aisha. Ab tumhe un saare bathonke bare me sochne ke zaroorath nahi hai.

Ai: thanks again sir.

She leaves shortly. He was feeling relieved. So was she.

***

Sakshi reaches Mumbai with a new air of confidence. After meeting with her boss and also Comm. sir she went to meet Raghu sir.

Sa: Good evening sir. I'm sorry I came in such an off time.

Ra: it's ok Sakshi. So have you decided?

Sa: yes sir.I have decided. mein gayi thi usse milne.

Ra(happy): really? Good. How is he?

Sa: much better. Sir aap unse milne kyu nahi jaathe? mein usse samjhane ke pure koshish kar rahi hu. Par wo meri bath maanthe hi nahi.

Ra: Arjun aise hi hai Sakshi. Usse wo hi samjha sakthe hai. Ya tho fir Aisha. Maybe I'm being a bit selfish, still I would say this. I'm really happy that you are joining ETF. Because you can be a great help for Aisha.

Sa: sach bolu Sir... actually I'm looking forward to meet her. Par dar bhi lagthi hai.I have seen her pain in her eyes Sir. Wo jisse wait kar rahi hai ya mis kar rahi hai... wo bhi bilkul aise hi hai. Bath sirf duri ke hai. Dil se wo bohot kareeb hai.I hope I'll be able to hold myself.

Ra: I'm sure Sakshi. You can do it.All the best for your new begining.

Sa: and for the new mission too.

***

Next day:

She reached in front of the office. Had a silent prayer. And then walked in.

A young man with curly hair came forward. "Good morning. May I help you?"

Sa: I'm here to meet ACP Rathod.

Sr: please follow me.

She was taken to the conference hall.Aman sat at the other end facing the door. Another person was sitting opposite to him.

Sr: sir (the man turns) you have a visitor.

Sam: (standing up) ACP Sameer Rathod. Kahiye.

She gives her hand forward. "Hi I'm Sakshi Anand. Apke team ke naye member."

Sam: oh yes. So that's you. Welcome to ETF. Sree sabko bulao.

Sree goes out. Aman also comes towards them. "he looks good... as always..." she smiled at him.

All came in with Aisha.

Sam: team, meet Sakshi Anand. The investigation journalist and now our team member. Sakshi this is ACP Aman Ali. Second in command.

she shakes hand with him. "hi Aman. Can I call you so?"

He smiled. "smart..."

Am: Sure you may. Welcome onboard.

Sam: Sree, the tech expert, Liza the forensic expert and Chotu the commando.

She shook hands with everyone and looked at Chotu. "now I see why I shouldn't hug him. He'll crush me. Thanks for the tip Arjun"

Her smile broght smile in others too.

Sam: and this is Aisha.

Sakshi moved infront of Aisha. How long have she been waiting for this meet. She was so happy.

Aisha was a bit surprised on seeing Sakshi's expression. She wondered if she saw a glitter in her eyes, easily masked by a smile. "Nice to meet you Sakshi"

But Sakshi came in for a light hug leaving others shocked.

"Pleasure is all mine Aisha."

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update Kunchu di...

Sakshi... I really like the fun-loving and high spirited girl U have shown...
Her irritating Arjun... It was funny...😆

Then her asking about the Members... It was really cute... Specially the way Arjun described Chotu.. "Dont Hug Him"😆😆

And then Aisha... I was like Aww!! Everytime he speaks something of Aisha... there is so much pain that I feel like saying.. "Stupid fellow... Just go back..."😡

It was good that Sakshi confronted Arjun... Hope he gets some sense in his head...😔

But Arjun and Mr Varma's conversation... It a bit confused me... It was in a way incomplete... By incomplete.. I mean that there seems to be many many things hidden inside... And not to mention very painful...

But what course??? what happened to Arjun?? That he requires to take some course???🤔
I just hope he gets alright...😊

Aman and Aisha conversation was really good... I mean all things cleared and settled... Nice..😊

And yeah,... Now Sakshi in ETF... WOW!!!😃
I hope her mission is successful...
Edited by ...Mithuz... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeah!!!

Stalker back in action...

But need to catch up with the other updates... Will unress as soon as i finish them...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update


loved the convo between Aryan and Sakshi...then between Arjun/Aryan and baba

but the best part was Sakshi's entry into ETF and that hug...emotional moment totally!

cont soon!
Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago

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