Raesha FF: Pehla Pehla pyar hai. Pg143 - Page 59

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update di..
aisha's request was just awesome.
a noble soul like her would ask that from sam...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
di it's amazing

sorry for not comment on five part before because i am busy in my practical exam and some

technical problem in my internet so pls sorry for that but i comment now on five parts

in part 14

i love the way ayesha handle the schivation after that awkwardness
and i love the romantic talks of sammer
and after that at home their nights are sleepless wow di what a seen

and then at ETF office vala seen mind blowing di what a seen
and arjun ne purposefully pen giraya ye janne ke liye ki ho kya raha hai do no ke beach and

then he found out that sameer hold ayesha's right hand under the table di i imagine that

seen in front of me and then arjun winking and also happy for his friend and di i am

ruffling badly after read this seen wow head's of to you di

and then party in ETF for completed 1 year and shree and liza was handal all this and thay

are fighting always and ayesha handle that sechivation i love it di bichri party ki kya

halte ki hoti agar ayesha na hoti to


in part 15

i like that shree was serious to know that where is liza wow shree

same ayesha waithing for sameer and she talk mindlessy in front of shree hahaha di what a seen that is

and then ayesh teash shree that shree liza ke aagepiche gumta hai hahahaha

and the both the friend are lost in thoughts and also miss each other at sides also

and then party start and liza danced and shree ki kya halat hui di he is looking at liza

and then trying to avoid her and see that every man in the party is looking at her even
arjun also then he is tensed and chotu was amazing

sameer sang a song for ayesha di wow what a sequence di

his praposal was too goood di
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Posted: 12 years ago
in part 16

i like that arjun is happy for sameer and he knew that what sameer want is always he did well and he also like his praposal

but after listening proposal ayesha sprinted out from the party hall is shocked me

but after that shree handle tha sechivation and well shakshi know that what arjun want and she start singing the song wow

song selection is too good di as always you did

in part 17

i am totally speechless after reading this part di the way ayesha told sameer that about her experience of her mom and ded relation and all the past things and with tear also and then sameer console her with his mom and ded's married life and he handle the sechivation very well di head's of to him

and yes head's of to you to di you are amazing writer that's why i like your all work ya i did not follow your some work just because of my besy seduale but i follow that also after some day and read full story in one go it's a amazing experience i ever did so love u di

you write all seen with heartedly that why when we read it we are feel that seen also like in front of us so tnx for your beautiful writings di
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Posted: 12 years ago
now in part of 18

ayesha's other wise is mind blowing that sameer and arjun solve their friends problem and together also with special and uniq friendship love her more for this wish

and then she ligthen the sechivation after seeing sameer in lost in thoughts and confused

and i always love their romantic talks di

and she like that song also which is sameer sing in the party for her

and then sameer ask for game but ayesha told that he is always win wow di

now pls update soon di pls aab wait nahi hota na etne din na padne ke baad aaj he 5 update ek sath pade hai i miss it too much during the problem of my internet

pls update soon and tnx for pm di

this is for u di from my heart
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello Arjunians...back with a new part...long hai...so excuse that as well

Pls read and comment...plss and excuse errors if any!

thanks for all the prev likes and comments...u make my day guys!...

Part 19:

Pulling her hands to himself, he naughtily voiced to lighten the situation, he pecked her knuckles, "ek aur catch me if you can game ho jaaye"

Aisha smiled and looked away shyly, "ab usski koyi zaroorat nahi hai….kyun ki…I know aap hi jeethenge aur main haar jaavungi……."

Sameer: bina khele hi haar maan li tumne, huh?

Aisha: [looking into his eyes intently and as if in a trance] haan kyun ki aapse haarna mujhe manzoor hai Sameer…..

Both looked at each other and the eyes met turning the night into a magical one almost instantly!

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Sameer was lost in her when she pulled his hands and kissed it "thanks Sameer…..mujhe samajhne keliye…mere haalaat ko samajhne keliye…"

Sameer snapped out and smiled assuring her that he will always be by her side…..

As if suddenly remembering something, he speaks up, "Inn sab baaton mein toh main ek cheez bhool hi gaya…"

Aisha enquires, "kya?"

He frees her hand and pulls out a box from his pocket….."yeh ring….socha tha ke jab tum haan kahogi tab pehenaa dhoonga…..par ab…"

She didn't let him complete that….she held out her fingers to his side and voices out, "pehena dijiye….."

When he looks at her doubtfully as if to reconfirm, "maine kahaa tha na…..shaadi jab bhi hogi woh sirf aapse hogi Sameer……."

Sameer smiles and happily takes out the ring and slips it into her finger and kisses it……

She pulls back her hands and looks at the ring and kisses it too while he voices gently, "ring pasand aaya"

She nods, "haan…its beautiful Sameer….aaj mere liye bohat khaas din hai……a day which I will cherish forever……."

A long moment of silence when both try to relish it fully…..

Hum Jo Aise Mil Gaye Hain, Ab Iraade Hi Naye Hain
Tum Hi Kaho, Kaise Na Ho, Dil Mein Mere Yeh Hulchul
Hum Toh Jaise Hain Deewane, Dil Ki Saari Baatein Maane
Tum Ho Jahaan Main Hoon Wahaan, Dono Hue Hain Paagal
Kum Na Ho Deewangi Apni, Guzre Yunhi Zindagi Apni
Dil Jo Bataayenge, Hum Kehte Jaayenge Haan

Khwabon Khwabon Jaage Soye
Khoye Khoye Hum Hai Jaise Yahaan
Raahon Raahon Dhundhle Dhundhle
Halke Halke Hosh Ke Hain Nishaan

Sameer decides to end the silence chuckling and voices naughtily, "agar itna khaas din hai toh mujhe bhi kuch gift milne chahiye na?"

Aisha looked at him and enquires innocently, "ab main kya gift deh sakthi hoom??…..I never knew that you are going to propose…agar patha hota toh pakka kuch na kuch gift le aathi…"

Sameer: mujhe jo chahiye woh tum ab bhi deh sakthi ho Aisha…..

Aisha:[realizing what he was asking as a gift] aaj aap kuch bhi maang sakthe ho…zaroor milega…..

Sameer: hmmm….ok…..filhaal ek good night kiss hi deh dho…..usi se kaam chalaa loonga….

Aisha: bas itna sa gift?? Ok…..

Sameer: [before she leans, he adds] nahi yeh mera gift nahi….this is something I can rightfully get from you anytime Aisha…..gift toh baaki hai…..main jab chaahoom tumse le saktha hoom….I will keep it pending for now!

[Saying that he points his cheeks to her….Aisha rolls her eyes and then mutters a "Ok"]

She leans to his side and pecks his cheeks voicing "good night Sameer"

Sameer grins and replies "good night Aisha…"

Pyaar Ke Jo Raaste Hain, Apne Hi Toh Vaaste Hain
Tum Bhi Chalo, Main Bhi Chalun
Chalte Rahein Hum Pal Pal
Palkon Palkon Khwaab Leke, Iktile Betaab Leke
Hum Jo Chale Chaane Lagey, Geeton Ke Yeh Baadal
Goongje Hain Jo Geet Sureelay
Bann Jo Inki Madheera Pee Le
Hum Mehke Jaayenge, Hum Kehte Jaayenge Haan

Khwabon Khwabon Jaage Soye
Khoye Khoye Hum Hai Jaise Yahaan
Raahon Raahon Dhundhle Dhundhle
Halke Halke Hosh Ke Hain Nishaan

They part on that note for the day after a few more seconds of not wanting to go away from each other…..

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A few days pass by…..Aisha could see minor and subtle changes in the cold attitude of Sameer towards Arjun but even then, it appeared a long long way to go……..And the major hurdle being the hot cop himself on the other side…..

Arjun had built a huge strong wall, a barrier around himself……breaking it was tough……and when it came to the egos and stubbornness, both of them weren't any less either…..

Aisha knew that she had to step in at some point and try to break the barrier or atleast soften it a bit…..else the task was impossible because she knew well that there was a limit beyond which she couldn't force Sameer as well……

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One early morning…..a case from a remote village outside the city limits of Pune comes to ETF……its about a boy missing and the villagers claim it to be the work of a ghost which haunts an old and abandoned mansion…..

Several teams had been there before when few other people went missing after going into the mansion but none of the teams were able to crack the mystery so far…

All had returned back fearing the unknown and had concluded it as the work of a girl's spirit….the spirit of a girl who had died an unnatural death….

So ETF is commissioned to unravel the mystery…..

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As if destiny had planned something already and as if to grand Aisha's wish, Arjun and Aisha end up travelling together as the rest of the team had already left by the first flight…….

Aisha was waiting for such an opportunity to talk to him…..

Arjun, on the otherhand was indeed wanting to talk to her and find out about his friend but his ego and attitude stopped him……..He couldn't talk to Sameer directly neither could he talk to Aisha about it……

Aisha made things easy by making the first move…….she could sense what Arjun had in his mind and just tried to get him to speak, "Arjun sir, kya aap mujhse kuch poochna chahthe hai?"

Arjun turned to her and raised his eyebrows and replied, "case ke baare mein?"

Aisha chuckled at his pretence, "nahi….case ke baare mein aapko sab patha hoga….phir mujhse kya poochenge??

Arjun: toh phir kis baare mein?

Aisha didn't reply for a long moment……she waited for him to come out with it but Arjun being Arjun, he never spoke up…..He brushed it aside like he always did and continued driving…..

When Aisha realized that the task she has taken up was the toughest and she needed extreme patience and a bit of letting go of her own ego, she spoke up on her own not waiting for him to ask, "kya hum thodi dher keliye dhost bann sakthe hai?"

Arjun turned to her side a little stunned by her question, but he didn't reply, she continued, "woh kya hai na, baat karne mein aasaani hogi! Dhoston ke beech formality nahi hoti, right?"

She could see sarcasm spilling in the hot cop's ever blank face……but his silence never ceased……she wasn't surprised by that because that was exactly what she expected from him…….Plain silence and the fact that he didn't say anything against her suggestion to become friends was more than an encouragement for her to go on……She was happy…..she smiled to herself for the success in the first step towards Mission Arjun-Sam Reunion!!

She added,"maine waqt maanga hai Sameer se"

That undid his determination and broke his silence as well…..

He chided her "Waqt?? Rathod ko judge karne keliye…..[she was silent while he added]chaahe jahaan bhi dhoondlo par usse accha life partner milega nahi….."

She smiled at that……"Friends and that too to an extent that despite being away from each other, they never give up the other"…These friends are made of a different metal altogether and she had rightly judged it also……Now it seemed a less farfetched task to unite them!

She replied with a grin, "maine waqt unne judge karne nahi maanga hai…..I want to gift him something very unique when I say yes to him…..usi gift keliye waqt maanga hai…."

He didn't reply…..perhaps he felt that it was more a personal matter of the couple and didn't want to comment on it……but she continued speaking, "maine mehsoos kiya hai ke Sameer ko ek life partner se zyaadha…I mean life partner ke pehle ek friend ki zaroorat hai…..

[Arjun turns to her side at that with a big question on his face as if he didn't know where she was heading to….Aisha answers his unvoiced question] unnke khoye hua friendship lautaana chahthi hoom! Unnke best friend unne gift karna chahthi hoom…..That's the best gift I can ever give him"

A faint smile or rather a sarcastic grin seemed to creep up his lips but he controlled it to the maximum, when she asked her final question, "kya iss mein aap meri help karenge?"

A long silence prevails as if a signal to a upcoming storm or was it something else….well Aisha wasn't sure of it but she waited for his reply anxiously……

Arjun: [finally replying from his heart, something which she was hoping for too] Aisha, dhosti ya pyar, dono hi khaanch ke tarah hai……ek baar toot gayi toh kitna bhi jodhne ki khoshish karoge, pehle jaisa kabhi nahi banega……. daraaar toh rahega hi, usske saath saath khaanch ka tukde se jodhne waale ka haat bhi khatt jaayega……[pauses for a while and shakes his head as if disapproving Aisha's wishes to reunite them] jo kaam impossible hai, usse karne ki khoshish matth karo……tumaare hi nuksaan hoga…..[a long moment of silence later, he adds in his trademark style] Samjhi ya Samjhaavum?

Aisha didn't reply to that….she knew it already that it wasn't easy to cajole him…..……and replying to this wasn't easy either…….

Aisha's mind voice: agar aap dono ziddhi hai toh main bhi kuch kam nahi hoom……aap se mooh se Rathod ke jagah Sam aur Aisha ke jagah bhabhi nahi bhulwaaya toh mere naam bhi Aisha Kapoor nahi…..usske baadh hi Mrs Aisha Sameer Dhaamsingh Rathod banungi! That's a promise!

She grinned as she made that vow to herself……he wondered why she fell silent suddenly and he also noticed her grin…..but he ignored that conveniently……Some things were better off when left unclarified and silence was the best treatment as well!

Rest of the journey was silent and calm but there was a storm of sorts triggered off in both minds…..

[To be continued]

so how was it??? pls do reply...and lets lend our support to Aisha in making her wish come true! 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wat a chapter didi

loved it

haila ...i was grinning throughout thinking how much akdu both are

n yes despite staying away ...dey can still defend each other

dosti ho to aisi

i just loved d chapter

loved Arjun n Aisha;s conversation

Aisha trying to persuade him

n d "glass waala wxample" ...haila dis was expected from Arjun ji

n i loved Aisha 's self resolve ...jab tak sam aur bhabhi na bula lun ...WOW ...
waitng for more

Continue soon

BTW me first !!!!
Edited by _TaNi_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unres
awesum di
lov it
kash show me aisa ho jae :p
bhaiya ka sys :d
ayesha bhabi
najar na lag jae apko
bhabhi ho to aisi haye
lov it di
grt
fab sng
ps. knk!!
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just loved the vow she took !!!
awesome !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ahaan !!
Aisha ka mission to get friends back together starts now...
Ab mazza aayega di ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...vidya
u did it once again

ur updates r like mgical spells vich for surre brings a smile on my face...

i ws jst smiling pleasantly the whole time..nd my frnd coulnt help asking me...

"agar sirf smile hi karna tha to cofee pe kyu bulaya..??"

ha ha ha sarcasm in his tone ws evident...

u drive me crazy gal vid ur awsm stories...

aww aisha is sho shweet

i hope even in the show this happens nd aisha gets suuccessful in bringing together these long lost frndz

continue soon

nd thnx fr th pm

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