Fruit of Love 'Ibadat' (Reader vs writer)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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on more challenge by madhu in reader vs writer
hope u will love it

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Roop...Tera...Mastana...
Pyaar...Mera...Deewana...
Bhool...Koi..Humse...Na ...Ho ..Jaaye


"Wohoaaa" Cheered the audience
The whole place was ecohed with loud cheers and comments like "What a chemistry" "Awesome Performance" and all
"Once More" was the sound."Come on Rey and Kriya, Once more" their friends were shouting .
Hearing all these comments from thier friends Kriya's face was red like a Tomato
And here Reyansh was grinning like a mad person, he turned his attention towards and noticed her blushing and her face red like a tomato, both got down the stage from different direction. Rey was about to go near Kriya,when a random girl caught him in the middle, this did not go unnoticed by Kriya.
"Hie Rey " waved the girl
"Hie" replied Rey with a smile not wanting to sound uninterested in the conversation
"Hey Kriya ke Universe Ji, mujhe apni se Baatcutter se baat karni hai, yaar sab meri love story pe full stop lagane pe kyu tule hai." cursed Rey in his mind .
"Yeh Rey ko dekho kaise has has ke baat kar rahe hai, uss chipkali se, huh, dance mere saath kiya aur ek baar wish karne tak nai aaye, huh mujhe kya, srsly inka naam toh Mr.Flirt hona chahiye Reyansh nahi " cursed a furious Kriya
Rey was somehow trying to the end the conversation, when he noticed the jealous Kriya looking at them with eyes shooting daggers
.
He at first got scared, but then an idea popped up in his and he smirkeda nd positioned himself such that he could see Kriya's face and even talk to the girl.
You look gorgeous in this dress Niya" Rey complimented the girl
"Really Rey? Thank You so much" Replied the excited girl Niya
"Yes, you are the most beautiful girl here, I can see here " said Rey eyeing Kriya.
"Really, But I thought tumhe tumhari Partner Kriya zyada achi lagegi, all boys are literally drooling over her" said a disappointed Niya
.
"all boys are literally drooling over her" were the words roaming in his mind, He suddenly felt protective for Kriya, but maintained himself and said "Let them drool, woh toh andhe jo tumhari beauty ko nahi dekhte"

Kriya was left open mouthed,all she could do stare at him in shock, She could not belive this, before performance, Rey complimented her saying she was looking out of the world and there was no comparison and now he was complimenting some another girl saying no one was beautiful than her. She was furious that she wanted to strangle Rey then and there but controlled herself "Cassanova" muttered Kriya and left from there stomping here foot .
Seeing Kriya go, Rey smirked "Ok I gtg and change wil talk to you later, Bye" He hurriedly ran towards the changing room and saw a furious Kriya muttering curses and finding something or throwing things around.All Rey could do was smirk and think "Plan accomplised, Jealous He leaned towards the wall and was starring at her, Kriya was not able to see Rey due to the curtains beside the door and was busy cursing him.

"Kitni cute lagti meri Baatcutter jab jealous hoti hai tab" thought Rey smiling and looking at his Jealous Kriya

"Uski Yeh choti si naak kaisi Red ho jaati hai, and uske yeh Cheeks, I feel like biting them and her pink rosy lips when she speaks, I feel like kissing them. When will you be mine Kriya?" Sighed Rey
.

He came ot of his trance when he saw Kriya sliding sown her pallu from shoulder and now it was lying on the ground .
Rey was simply gawking at her back, he wanted to take hi seyes off her, but his mind was not in his control .

Rey unknowingly walked toward Kriya . Rey was completely hypnotized by Kriya's beauty . Here bare back driving him crazy . Rey traced his hand on her back . Kriya jumped from her place .

Kriya closed her eyes and fell back on Ray chest . With every single touch of Rey her breath rate rises . Rey passed his one hand around her waist and with another hand he opened her blouse . Slowly he nudged his face in her crook and placed some wet kissing on her neck .

Kriya clutched Rey shirt with her both hand . She passed her right hand in Rey's hair and pulled her more . Rey with his right hand slipped her blouse down . he start kissing her on shoulder madly . Kriya become weak so she shift her whole weight on Rey's body . Rey picked her up in her muscular arms . And walked toward bathroom .

Rey placed her down . Their bodys are completely in touch . Their body's heat up . Kriya started sweating badly . Rey touched her cheek then turned her back toward him . Kriya again shifted her weight on Rey . Rey shifted his weight on wall . Rey touched her waist . Kriya moan his name slowly . Slowly Rey turn on the shower .

Cold water passed from her head toward her eyes then her lips . Rey sucked water from her face . One droplet passed from her lip rey sucked it . Placed a small kiss near her lips . Kriya completly lost in this moment .

With left hand Rey slipped Kriyas blouse from her shoulder . In a blink Kriya was out from her top . Few voices from outside gained their attention . Kriya realised her situation . Kriya was in tears . She hugged him tightly . Hiding her self in his embrace. Rey realised that what he did . REy closed his eyes and remove his shirt and covered Kriya with it .
Rey looked outside and found no one walks out "Sorry " he spoke before leaving . As soon as Rey leave Kriya Broke into tears . She was feard what if someone saw them in that condition . God knows how long Kriya sat there on floor under shower . Other Rey cried a lot sitting on terrace . What if Kriya start hating him . HOw he crossed his lines . Kriya will never forgave him . Rey hit his hand on floor . Kriya she was feared because she thought Rey didn't like her . Both cried whole night .
With trembling hand Kriya opened her room door . Kriya sat in window and think about whole incident . "Better ignore him " Kriya promised her self . Other hand Rey promised himself that he ill made her realised that she love him .

Next day entered in college as old Rey . The dashing hero . Kriya kept ignoring him . rey got irritated with this behaviour . Hey literally picked Kriya in his arms and dashed into fire exit . He tried to talk but Kriya ignored this .
"Kriya listen to me for once " Rey tried to calm her . "Stop this non sense Rey " she walked toward door "app ek casanova ho . that's it " she left . "What"
"Okay main ek casanova ho Kriya cool , now i will show you what is meaning of casanova" reys ego once again come between his love .
Okay i will leave you forever Kriya but still i will confess my feeling to you in front of whole college .
it's evening time . Kriya was passing through atrium . Rey pulled her in smooch in front of everyone . Everyone looked at them with wide open eyes .
After few second Rey pulled back . Kriya looked toward Rey with teary eyes .

I always love u Kriya . You are the first and last girl whom i kiss . I only belongs to you . I am not casanova . I only love you . I thought you understand me . But no , you also ignore real REy . My heart always belongs to you . No one will take yourr place in my heart . But if you think i don't deserve you then , i will never intrupt in your life . By , but still you always remain in my heart .Rey left from there with teary eyes .

Kriya taken aback because of sudden incident .
Rey came out after long hot shower . He was tired after long long rehearsal .
Someone pushed him in shower . Rey balanced himself with the help of wall . The girly femina harshly pulled her in kiss . Rey tried to digest the fact but then femina against his body pushed hard him on wall .
By Mistake shower turned on . Both become wet . Both started kissing madly . If someone saw them surely he/she think that they will kill each other . "Kriya" Rey spoke in between their kiss . Kriya wrapped her legs around his waist .
When they got enough from kiss they parted . "If someone saw us in this condition " Rey questioned Kriya . While Kriya took deep breath and held Rey from his hair "no one is here , raat k 8 baj rhey hey " and pulled his hair . "Ahh its hurt" Rey looked at Kriya . "But i love this " Kriya again pulled him n warm kiss .
Rey pushed Kriya against wall and took the charge . Both parted again . "You looking hot shirtless " Rey slipped his hand in her top but stopped and looked at Kriya . "Carry on ".

She bit her lower lip . but he picked her in his arms and walked toward his car ."Where are we going ?" Kriya questioned him . Rey shh him and drove of with her .
As soon as he reached at his destination he gathered Kriya in his arms and walked toward his room . Rey slowly softly placed Kriya on bed and come upon her . He touched her face with love . Both sensed each and every part . The desire , and passion raising high . Finally Rey made his way in her . Kriya shouted his name loudly . with each passing second , Kriya shouted his name more loudly . Rey loved this melody . when they reached at the peak of their passion Rey fell beside Kriya . They made love whole night showing their love , pain , need eachother . Both sweating badly . Rey covered them with silk sheet and Kriya cuddle her self in his arms . "I love u " Rey slowly spoken . "I love you to " Kriya replied slowly before drift into deep slumber . Rey kissed her "Fruit of love" and drift into sleep while holding her tight .

**THE END**

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ITs really very hot

this imagination killing me
so main itna he likh payi .
guts nahi hey other wise i will dead
m freaking out
i need one glass of water
u know madhu just because of u i write this
and while writing this m listening song sung By Falak
this OS and song combo killing me
today i felt that love is really a lovely feeling
hope mujey b koi Rey jesa mila
ahhh
emotions u know

i hope u guys like this
likes and comment please
luv u all
AROMA_RUBHARU
i need some fresh air now
LOVE ah this word now hunting me badly
*BLuSH BLUSH*☺️

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Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
By god. . . . .
Aro. . .
Awsome OS. . . .
Actully RED HAAWWWTTT OS. . . . . . . . . . . .
Lovd it. . . . . .
Wow. . .first the jeolus kriya, and our super flirty rey. . . . . .
And the unka changing room wala scene. . . .
Mumaa. . .it was . . . .godd to hawt. . . .
Then kriyaansh ka ronna. . .dis part i didnt likd . . . .
Bt,the nxt part in whch kriya was ignoring rey and then unkA F.E wala scene. . .bilkul mast. . .
And then rey ka kriya ko pure colg ke samne atrium mai kiss kerna and confsion krna. .haiye. . .i was so loving dat part. . .
Fir humari bold kriya ki entry in R.H. . .by godd. .i was like baap re. . .
And then bedroom scene. .i was like so,blushy -blushy. . . .
Super Haawwwttt OS. . . . .
Lovd it. . . .
Aro. . . .aise OS likha ker with more discription. . .
Hope u undrstand. .
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres

hayee itna hawt and romantic update the

loved it

so awesome...


Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res

Unres

Yeh kya tha? 😲

It's to hot over here and I wonder why?!! 😆

Wow just every single bit of this!

Wow di kya imagination hai
👏

Just loved it!!

Love ya

😊

~Anu~
Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres
awesome os di 👏
and hawtt 😉
di tumhe jaldi hi rey jaisa koi mil jayega 😃
Edited by MOON_ARSHA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
res
unres

it s damm hattt
i m literaly swatng
amooch sen ws fab
kriyansh ka roop tera mastana dance aankoke samne aa gaya
thnks 4 remain da song
aro,tu hume burn krne ka pln kr rahi hai kya?
Edited by chand91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesomeee🤗
damn romantic and hot☺️
loooveedd ittt😃
beautifully written gal👍🏼
wer u talkin about this os aro wen v wer chatting😳
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow super hawt os❤️
Jealous Kria is really cute 😊
And Rey's confession was damn adorable
Wish I could get a guy like him
Amazing os Aroma
Thanks for the pm 😃



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishu3003

awesomeee🤗

damn romantic and hot☺️
loooveedd ittt😃
beautifully written gal👍🏼
wer u talkin about this os aro wen v wer chatting😳



nah wo to main 27 ko post kroogi us din meri halat dekhna i will dead that day ☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hot , sensuous...but awsome...just loved it... 😊

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