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bebovirdi

@bebovirdi

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Posted: 12 years ago

So,,, me back yupieee😊

This one is especially dedicated to my zebbie di ❤️.

CHARACTER SKETCH:

***ACP ZEBBIE DAMSINGH RATHOD: Encounter specialist of ETF; bff of Ayesha; baby doll of rathod; has past

***ACP SAMEER DAMSINGH RATHOD: ETF CHIEF; bff of Arjun, In luv with Ayesha; nothing is important to him more than his baby doll😊

***ACP ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE: ETF sec command, bff of rathod; no past.😊

***INS. AYESHA KAPOOR: In luv with rathod, orphan...; zebbie's best friend.😊

***TECH. EXP. SHREEKANT SEN: same as show but has feelings for liza but never show it as tries to make her away from him

***COMMANDO CHANDRAKANT PATIL: same as show; dating his 11:30 wali ALIA😊

***CRIME JOURNALIST SAKSHI ANAND: Admirer of Arjun, bubbly chirpy...😊

***FOR. EXP. LIZA D'CRUZ: Madly in luv with shree,❤️ but never able to understand why shree gave her so much pain always...🤢

Other characters will be updated as story continues...

HOPE U ALL LIKE IT...

EAGERLY WAITING FOR UR VIEWS...😊

PROLOGUE- PG2

CHAPTER1- PG4
CHAPTER2- PG7,8

CHAPTER3- PG11

CHAPTER4- PG14

Edited by ...amanvirdi... - 12 years ago

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Oh Boy...
CS bohut superb hai...
Cant wait anymore...
Jaldi jaldi story ka first update post karo...
Thank u so much for keeping my request...

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JeeLeZaraa

@JeeLeZaraa

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Posted: 12 years ago

sounds very interesting :) plz continue soon

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Sabia Khan

@BDCTG

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hmm...nise CS. But ye kya?

Yaha Sakshi ko bhi entry karwa diya?

Haaye, zebbie darling! Competitor eshe geche re!!

Edited by BDCTG - 12 years ago

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: BDCTG
Hmm...nise CS. But ye kya?

Yaha Sakshi ko bhi entry karwa diya?

Haaye, zebbie darling! Competitor eshe geche re!!

haha...
Aag dono taraf se barabar lagegi...
But,Arjun toh mera hai.

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bebovirdi

@bebovirdi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

haha...
Aag dono taraf se barabar lagegi...
But,Arjun toh mera hai.

Di,,, overconfidence jayada nhi ho raha 😉

Arjun kiska hoga yeh toh baad mein pra chalega😉

🤣

Just wait to saw ur expression after 2 part because di story ki heroine ki entry 2 part mein hogi😉

Tab arjun ko dekhte hain kya haal hoga😆😆

N sakshi ka😆😆

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NSohi13

@NSohi13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey sounding nice dear Plz continue it soon :)

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bebovirdi

@bebovirdi

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Posted: 12 years ago

****PROLOGUE****

Our most favorite couple romancing: $A$HA 😳es baar mein garranty deti hoon aisa romance hoga haas hass kar pagal ho jaoge
Arjun teasing them 😉
Shiza Romance 😳 ; Shree avoid liza
Chotu convo on phone 😆 😆
Sakshi n Arjun nok jhok 😉
bro-sis meet 😊 I want to make it super emotional

HOPE U ALL LIKE IT

LET ME KNOW THAT

Edited by ...amanvirdi... - 12 years ago

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NSohi13

@NSohi13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Aman prologue is sounding very romantic... Noki-jhoki... Maza aane waala hai :) Plz jaldi update do na and Plz-2 pm me whenever you r going to update it :)

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bebovirdi

@bebovirdi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: NSohi13
Hey Aman prologue is sounding very romantic... Noki-jhoki... Maza aane waala hai :) Plz jaldi update do na and Plz-2 pm me whenever you r going to update it :)

Sure dear

1st part aaj raat sone se pehle update kardogi

just remained update

but i need a long wala commnet from u😉