arjun ff - chaha wo na paya, paya wo na chaha p4 pg5 n imp note on pg5

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Vishal sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

guys it is only arjun ff with roshni's memories. in future if i made couple then it will be arakshi. but now its only about arjun. arjun had no relation with any etf team member. in this ff riya is dead and i m not going to make her alive but she had important role in this ff just like arjun serial. she had not any relation with any ETF team members. arjun have some memories of riya. riya is related with arjun and roshni.

guys another request pls like this post for pm and also send buddy requand pls suggest the name for this ff.

prologue

breaking news- acp arjun suryakant rawte is back. the super cop is back. yes, u heard right, he is back. he is not dead. he is alive. criminales be carefull becuse arjun is now back in mumbai

good evening everyone. according to our sources acp arjun rawte had been seen in mumbai.yes its a unbelivable news. he is alive not dead. everyone thought he is dead 3 year ago in a bomb blast but according to our sources he was not dead. he was escaped from that bomb blast. how he escaped, nobodies know about this. its still mystery but good news is , he is alive.>for more information we r going to our cameramen vivek

vivek- we already told that acp rawte is alive. now we r standing in front ofBreach Candy Hospital, mumbai. you will be surprised to see that from last 3 years arjun was in coma in this hospital. yesterday he become conscious. according to our sources many criminals already knew about this so they all r planing to hide. acp arjun is already a thread to criminal's but now according to our sources he will join ETF which is known for his case solved ability. ETF had been cracked many difficult cases and now if arjun joined ETF, it will become the powerfull team. rahul with cameramen vivek, mumbai, aaj tak.

so we know arjun is back but for mor information about ETF, we r going to our cameramen ashok

.ashok- good evening everyone. now we r standing front of ETF office. in this team six members r working together. they all r very efficent in their work.

acp samir damsing rathore- ETF chief .He loves his job and his first priority in life is his duty; nothing or no one comes before his duty. He is smart and intelligent. He is strict but sensitive and his whole team looks up to him with respect. join ETF 2 years ago

Ayesha kapoor- Highly intelligent and experienced cop. encounter specilist. join ETF 1 year ago.

>Sakshi anand- a journlist. join ETF 1 year ago

Sreekant sen- technical expert. join ETF with sameer. best frnd off sameer

Chotu- a comando. join ETF after 2 month later then sree.

>Lisa D'cruz- forensic expert. join ETF 2 month before ayesha and sakshi. best frnd off sakshi and ayesha.

these six members made a brilliant team. but know it will be 7 member team. but again a problem. acp rawte always work alone with his own rules and acp rathore is oppsite him. he obeys the rules.how will they work together. we hope it will not create any problem between them becuse both r the angry young men.

cameramen ashok with rajeev, mumbai, aaj tak.

how is this guys.

chp-1-------page 1

chp-2-------page - 3-

chp-3----- page 4

chp-4------page 5 and important note about pm

character sketch ...

Edited by visu12 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

u continue dear
as soon as u update the teasee or part 1 we will be able to get idea what is in ur mind so we can help u to get the title 😊

eagerly waiting
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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nyc concept dear
waiting
title may be zindagi ke raaz..
upto u!!
only a sugestion :p

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Posted: 12 years ago

Update it soon nice concept dear:)

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Vishal sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

chapter- 1

8 persons were siting in a room.they all were watching news on tv. then a person about 28year old through the remote to another side after turn off tv. all the other person turn their face to his side. after some silence he said- "damit, this medial always said rubish. why i will fought with him. he has not joined ETF yet but media start talking about our relations." after sometime another men about 45 year old spoke- "they r right sameer. he always broke rules. " silence filled in room then again he spoke- " but you hv to deal with him sameer. we hv no choice. he had his own method to deal with criminales but u hv to make sure he will not create any problem. " i will do comissner sir" replied sameer. " it will not be easy rathore. and one more thing, dont ask him about his past" another person about 40 year old spoke to sameer rathore. "why ragu sir" a girl asked. ragu said- " i cant tell about anything ayesha but always remember dont ask about his past. you all also remember this ." pointing toward sakshi, lisa, chotu and sree.

sameer- we dont know anything about him. i heard his name 3 years ago but i dont remember.

sakshi (to camissner) - cohelo sir, why media is saying this be carefull criminals. is realy arjun has this effect on criminales?

cohelo and ragu smiled and turn their face to others. all seemed curious about this. then ragu said-" arjun is joining ETF tomarrow. he will work as second comand of ETF. u will be know him perfectely. now we hv to go,"

sameer- sir we want to meet him today can you..

ragu- ok, i knew where he can go.saying this he left in ETF suv with other team members leaving behind comissner cohelo.

cohelo open his ballet and took a photo from it.in photo two girls were standing keep their hands in each others. cohelo slides his hand on the face of both the girls and said-" i hope your last wish will complete my doughters. i hope he start living again. i hope..." a tear slides from his eyes.

a person was standing on the shore of sea. he was watching the moon. after sometime he said facing the moon- " i hope, i could save u roshni. i hope i could save her. but i m not. i failed both of you. i give promise to you to keep safe her but i failed."

flashback-

a lady was full off blood lying on the floor. a man is also laying some feet away from her in pool of blood. the difference was that it was coming from his head while other side the blood coming from her stomach. both were trying to come close to each others. after some strugle men come near her and hugged her. the lady said-" i luv u arjun." a tear come from arjun's eyes and he said-" i m sorry roshini. nothing will happen to u. we r going to hospital"

" no arjun, dont said sorry. i hv proud off u. i m proud of myself that i m ur wife. dont feel guilty arjun. u saved them. always remember i luv you. promise me arjun u will take avenge of me. u will kill him. and also u will keep safe her".

"no roshni dont go, i cant live without u. pls take me with u"

" arjun, no, u hv to live. u hv to punish him. u hv to live for me, for her. u hv to keep safe my sister arjun . arjun promise me u will do it , i hv not much tim arjun. promise me" said roshini.

" i promise roshini, i will kill him. i promise i will keep riya safe with my last breath. i promise roshni" saying this arjun fell unconscious.

flashback end

present

" i tried roshini, i tried till my last breath to save her but see i could not save her i was also dead roshni but i dont know how they saved me. i hate myself roshni..i cant forgive myself. i broke promise which i given to u roshni." saying this he turn his face to other side. for his surprise there was 7 person standing in front off him with shocked faces.

sometime ago

all the team member were in suv with ragu sir. ragu stop the suv near a sea. everyone was thinking that why ragu sir took them here. then they saw a figure in front of them. they could see his back. they start going to that direction but stopped hearing something. the man front off them was looking at moon and was saying something. they heard him saying"" i tried roshini, i tried till my last breath to save her but see i could not save her i was also dead roshni but i dont know how they saved me. i hate myself roshni..i cant forgive myself. i broke promise which i given to u roshni." , they were confused becuse they did not see anyone near him. may be he was talking with himself but then who is roshni and who is that girl. and why ragu sir come here. who is this person.

then the person turn his face to them and they understood who is this.

how is this guys, pls coment

Edited by visu12 - 12 years ago