SS: Its All Along YOU!!! Chapter 2- PG 6!

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Hieee Guyz!!!


Namaskaram! Vanakam! Sasriyakal!😃

I know you guyz must be thinking one more Monkeys Post and Sattire ...but neither of them. 😆

I know now what ever im going to say no one is going to believe...well even myself didnt believe until it turned out to be REAL!! 😆

I wrote a Short Story ...Yeshhh u heard it RIGHT. I Me Myself wrote a story...you can say it as fanfic or any thing as you wish.

Fictional characters have their own role in our lives nah. Some are fascinated by them..some are obsessed , some go crazy about them, some like them off screen, some onscreen. What eve we come to know them by this TV only.

Why am i blabbering soo much?? well coming to the point...two Fictional characters Fascinated me a lot!! a lot matlab a lottt.

One MSK from GHSP!! yeshhh im soo fascinated ...and his character is soo alluring and charming. any gal can go fida over him.
and other

Sultan!!! even before sultan entered show..i loved his name. It is such a Royal name!!! 😳

This story is not out of boredom...nor a random story.
The person who actually motivated me , asked me to write something NEW ...something to remember and cherish it.
that person may not know what she has done...but it surely Triggered me to write something OUT OF BOX!!! 😳 very unusual nah..i know.

Kittu and Romance...dont match at all. they are Poles apart!! Impossible to gel down.
But that person made it possible 😆

Rolzz - without U this story would never come into picture nor it exist in my life!!! This all happened because of U!!! 🤗🤗 U r such Darling i say!!!

here comes my two DQ's ...

The most INNOCENT, most DANGEROUS and world's best BHB's!!!

Avi and Aashu (Princess) - no one knows what these two have done...
emotional Blackmail , the most Precious WEAPON!! dont ever USE it on Friends. 😛😆
Hope you two are happy about my POST!!!
It all happened only because of you two people. or else i would have never post it. 🤗🤗 Thanks a lot BHB's!!! 😉

Reni( Cutiee) and Grape (Purvi) - awww my two sweetie pie's 🤗🤗. Thanks a bunch guyz. you have supported me a lot...through Thick and Thin.
You never Demanded anything ...but still stood by me. 😳

Deepa garu- i owe you a lot!!! I know how much i irritate you . you may never say that..but i know how much i bugged you and annoyed you!!! 😛😆. But still you cared for me , supported me when im Right. scolded me when i was wrong. U r like a Pillar to me. i can always Rely on U.
I may not express my love every time...but i Love U a lot deepa garu 🤗❤️. not just a story and MB forum...even outside the forum!!! Thanks a Lot ...🤗

er...this person...🤔 feels that she is not important. but how should i make her realize that she is Vital ?? She plays with words...and beautiful emotions will be filled in your HEART!!! she makes me Vulnerable with her narration...she takes you to an Illusional world and you would never know whether its Real or Not.😳 She has her own way with Words.
she is none other than


Noodles!!! hahaha aka Maggie 😛 - em chepali?? ela chepali??? you are just too good to words. 🤗 a big Bear HUG for u sweetheart!!! 🤗 Thanks a lot for proof reading!!

Guyz if at all you find my parts Good (IF at all) then Whole credit goes to Maggie.😊 Because she had done all the editing work.
Editing is Important.
If you dont polish the rock solid charcoal...you will never get to know what is underneath. 😳 and you will fail to see the Diamond!!! so Credit Goes to U gal!!! 👏

I know Diamond needs both Time and Pressure so to form into such a Poetic Justice!!!


I feel like im going a bit bonkers to be honest!! 😃😆
Sorry for my rambles...my thoughts are all over the place. 😛

@ All -Thanks for the support...each and every person i had interacted are beautiful and compassionate about their interest in their OWN way!!! 😳

I feel sooo good to meet such beautiful people. 🤗
Awww i miss you guyz a lot!!!😭😭

This post also turned out be one of my longgg essays lol😆.

NOTE : Okay coming to the point...though i started to write the story on Sulbala...but somewhere i was disconnected and i dont connect with them at all.
Except few PHYSICAL traits and attributes i dont visualize Avinash at all. Madhu remains the same (because none can replace DD) 😳

so HERE u dont find Sultan and Madhu names. Atleast i should entitle with this much freedom guyz .
But you are free to think as you wish!!! 😉😆

I am going to leave this forum for few months due to personal reasons.And i dont have any idea when i am going to comeback.

I will TRY my best to complete this before i leave and in my absence Maggie is going to update.
You may not receive any Pm's about the update. Can you guyz check this thread time to time ?? 😕
But please, please dont Bug her to update. Please its a sincere request. 😊

This is my first ever attempt...and please ignore my Mistakes!!!

Leave me your feedback and Comments Plz 😛...i may not reply to you immediately, but il try to reply asap!! 😊

Hmm the couple who inspired me to continue ...



Index is in the below post!!! 😃


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INDEX:

Chapter 1: Below!!




To all the Sulbala Lovers

Here it goes






To all the Maaneetians ( Darlzzz this is for U 🤗🤗🤗 i know how much you love to picture them in each and every FF) and i dont want you to be disappointed.
so here it goes Ur Maan and Geet 😉






SIGGIES credit goes to KAVANA and MERRY !!! Guyz these both make amazing Siggies and Gif's!!! They are just Mindblowing!!!

Thanks a lot kav 🤗 🤗 sorry for bugging u😛😆

Sorry merry i chorified your Siggies sorry 🤗🤗 Thanks a bunch 😳

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CHAPTER 1


When I opened my eyes'.i saw a pair of Green eyes looking at me 'intently'..with concern ,pain and well..various emotions can be just seen in just those eyes. How could I sense them?? There was anxiety'..strange kind of "Emotion" which I can't name . I know your next question ,why am I quoting only the word emotion..hmm'that emotion is very special.

Those eyes are boring into mine.even though my eyes are half open. That person is speaking to me but I couldn't hear anything. What the hell is going on?? Why I cannot hear what is that person saying?

Whats going on actually?? Where am i?? who am i?? who is this person with a pair of hypnotizing eyes?

Most importantly how could I know what are those eyes conveying?? I didn't speak anything. I was numb. That person was shouting for someone'who could be that "someone" ? I am not able to understand anything.

"whats going on here?" , " what happened to me?"

" Green eyes are you listening??" Neither that person looked at me when I was questioning nor gave an indication of hearing.

I was lost in those eyes'.but suddenly two Angels dressed in white were coming towards me. I could see same concern in those two pair of eyes. Suddenly my eyes are closed. But I could hear various noises. So many questions are buzzing in my mind. But none have an answer. What is with Green eyes'even after my eyes are shut ,why am I feeling those eyes ? those eyes are haunting me . I need to know why those pair of eyes are so prominent at this point of time. Though my eyes were closed and what so ever is happening around im not aware of'..but I was having consciousness .

And slowly I went into deep slumber. But those eyes brought a NEW solace to my soul!!! i don't know whether im still alive or dead.

I can hear few noises again. And again im back to my queries. I wrinkled my nose '.i can smell an odor. It hit my nostrils strongly. And back to square one. This smell reminded me my Green eyes.

Wait. What did I say?? My green eyes?? Correction its only green eyes!!! I so wanted to open my eyes. Why? I have no answer. Do you want to see those eyes again? May be yes.

Then it hit me that I have no idea for how many days, hours or minutes I slept??!!!

But what is crucial now ? My solace lies only in those eyes. This restlessness can be lessened if only I see them.

I am yearning for those eyes. I put all my will to open my eyes.

A small smile crept on my lips. I don't know why am feeling happy,even when tonnes of questions have to be answered. When I opened that smile which was blooming is vanished at the drop of a hat. There was no one. Disappointment filled me. Why did I expect that person to be present here? Because I can feel those eyes when I am in sleep. Don't ask me how could i? if my questions are answered'then I will answer your queries.

May be I was expecting too much.

Where am I ? white walls? Blue curtains? Various pungent smells. But there is one that odor where I can distinguish ,I can still smell that "aura" which was my companion besides eyes.

I concluded that im alive as im on BED!!! As soon as I made a mental note in my mind'.the door opened..i was anxious to see that person..my green eyes'nervousness was building in me.

The door was opened and closed immediately. None entered? I was about to shut down my eyes and reminisce that moment when I saw green eyes. But a hand clutched mine. I moved my head towards the source. A small person was standing there. There were tears in eyes. Crying bitterly holding my hand. I felt out of breathe. And finally that person uttered something..i couldn't hear but I understood the lip movement. That person referred me as

"Maa" !!!


Thanks Kav for beautiful banner!!! 😳

Hmm...so this is the first part ...and do leave your comments guyz.

and your take on the chapter.

you can criticise too...😆.

Leave your feedback (be anything) i will get back to you soon.

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finally you posted the story...glad that you did it...😊u made me sooo happy my dear...😊
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Yo Yo!🥳

Congratulationsss!!
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oh my oh my.. let me pinch my self.. och.. it is real... kittu wrote a stroy... oye hoi...
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btw dude the first pic of sultan madhu...did it happen? if yes provide me episode link I wasnt watching the show for so long but this pic might just make me watch it again
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Originally posted by: .Maggie.

btw dude the first pic of sultan madhu...did it happen? if yes provide me episode link I wasnt watching the show for so long but this pic might just make me watch it again


hahaha lol ledu 😆 Merry made that siggy. its awesome nah!!!

awww..all sulbala siggies are made by Merry!! 😳
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Originally posted by: honeygrape

finally you posted the story...glad that you did it...😊u made me sooo happy my dear...😊


Darlzzz 🤗 how is your MG?? 😉 hope now u can visualize them
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Originally posted by: KittuPratzz



Deepa garu- i owe you a lot!!! I know how much i irritate you . you may never say that..but i know how much i bugged you and annoyed you!!! 😛😆. But still you cared for me , supported me when im Right. scolded me when i was wrong. U r like a Pillar to me. i can always Rely on U.
I may not express my love every time...but i Love U a lot deepa garu 🤗❤️. not just a story and MB forum...even outside the forum!!! Thanks a Lot ...🤗






so emotional .. haa... u never bugged me ok... even if u do, for you anything and anytime 🤗🤗

i never knew u have this strong opinion on me... glad to hear that . love you too kittu... ❤️❤️Will miss you

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