Kittu, its lovely.
The intro is spell binding. A hundred questions about who the people are. What is the connection with green eyes? Who is the lovely child?
You have created a sense of mystery and seeking all at once. She does not know how long she has been there. It leads me to wonder how she got there to begin with. Will she recover and how long is the wait.
I am not much into sad stories to begin with but once I am into the characters I can read anything from sad to tragic. In a few words your characters are making me crave to know more of them. Very well done.
I will be eagerly waiting for more soon. What is this? You are going away also... Not fair...
Come back soon...
Thanks for starting this thread.
Did I already say katti canceled... 😆, yup katti canceled.
I loved it..
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