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Shilalipi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
OMG!! i also thought maybe someone use else idea or something..bt it is a FF...an awesome ff!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
awesome
continue soon
thanks for pm
Edited by Angel13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
hahahaha lol
i was damn confused reading the name used 😲🤣
then read the prologue n saw its jus awesome ❤️
amazing but who used?? and whom?? 🤣
maan used geet or geet used maan??
or bhagu (bhagwan) used them in his gams of fate
anyways maaneet r nt together :'(
plzz bring them back soon
do pm me n update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Interesting start
Both in same field
Maan thinks she betrayed him
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Part 1
Geet Handa was packing her bags.Mumbai here I come she thought. She would concere Bollywood she promised herself.
At the other singing sensation Maan Singh Khurana was just leaving the studio, he had just recorded his song. While he left hs Phone rang it was Aadi his drummer asking him to come to the most famous disc at night.
Geet had just arrived in Mumbai she was unpacking her stuff when the bell rang. She opened the door to find Sameera standing at her doorstep.
''Hi honey''
''Sam come in''
''Babes what are you doing''
''Kuch nahi Sam was just unpacking my stuff''
''Forget that you can do all that latter let's go to a disc a and party all your tiredness away''
''Not a bad idea, just give me 5 minutes''
Geet went inside and changed into a short dress. She was wearing this:
Maan was sitting at the bar sipping his drink when Geet came in, his eyes went or her. He wasn't all to found of skinshow but he had to admitt she looked breath taking. Geet immediately hit the dance floor.
''I wanna dance all night,
I wanna party to the end.
oh oh''
Geet sang out loud together with the song, while she danced like there was no tomorrow.
''I wanna show to world,
there ain't anybody,
like me,
oh oh
''I wanna dance all night,
I wanna party to the end.
oh oh''
While Geet was moving the music Maan's eyes followed her. While dancing Geet noticed someone was watching her every move. She glanced to that side only to find superstar Maan Singh Khurana looking or better said drooling at her. Geet smirked to herself and kept on dancing not giving him another glance.
''I wanna danceee,
I wanna live my life,
the way I wanna,
Make mine all rules tonight,
''I wanna dance all night,
I wanna party to the end.
oh oh''.
Maan was still looking at her when Adi tapped his shoulder.
''What happened Aadi'
''I think we should leave now, we have to get up early tomorrow''
''Yes let's go''
Maan left from there shaking the images of a dancing Geet out of his head, though the kept popping back in his brains. When Maan left a smiling Geet walked over to the bar.
''one bloody mary please''
Sam came from behind.
''Why are you smiling like a fool Geet''
''Because honey my life is about to change after today''
''What do you mean Miss Handa''
''Nothing dear nothing''
''Seems like the alcohol is showing it's affects already you''
Geet just smiled without replying Sam. After Geet got home she she sat behind her laptop and started following Maan on twitter. She closed her eyes a slept with a smile playing on her lips. A month latter after the disc night Geet was siiting in her room going through a fashion magazine when her mobile buzzed, she was about to check Sam's message when she noticed that Maan had tweeted that he would be attending Aadi b-day party. Then he tweeted another message stating on my way to Bandra.Geet smiled time to crash a party she thought. She looked at Sam's message asking her to go out she messaged her a simple no and got up to find the perfect dress for herself.
She smilled she would meet Maan again tonight and she was sure he would look at her.Geet got in a cab and arrived at the party she sneaked inside while no-one noticed. She stood elaganty in a corner and started chatting with the first person she saw.
''Hi I am Geet Handa''
''Hi Pari, nice to meet you''
''Pleasure is all mine''
Pari smiled at her.
''Sorry I didn't reconize you what do you do movies, modeling
Geet interupted her.
''Singing I am a singer''
''Oh which sang did you sing''
''Well acteully I am a upcoming singer''
''I see''
They kept chatting while Geet eyes fell on Maan. He smiled at her, while she smiled back. Just then a waiter came to Maan, Maan asked him a paper and he left to get it. When he returned Maan wrote something on it and asked the waiter to give it to the girl in the blue dress. Geet read the note:
You look breath taking''
She smiled and wrote back.
''You don't look bad yourself.
'''Thanks, what your name''
''My name is Geet handa, Mr Khurana''
'' Beautifull name just as beautifull as you''
''Thank you Mr.Flirt''
No I am not a flirt but yes he do feel like flirting with you ;)
Oh really
Instead of sending a note Maan walked over to her.
Precap: Enchanted😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
nice update
oo maan is already flat seeing geet
waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Nice part
Maan is blown by her beauty at first meet itself
What is geets motive
Why she is behind maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
THIS GEET IS VERY AMBITIOUS AND SHE CAN USE ANYTHING TO GAIN SUCCESS
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
OMG U UPDATED FIRST PART N DID NT EVEN TELL ME JAO KATTI
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
BT I WILL COMMENT
NOT 4 U
U MY MAANU
Edited by tiakashyap - 12 years ago

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