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Posted: 12 years ago
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This ff is specially written on the request of Cherry. I hope you guys and my cherry pie will like it😉
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Prologue
Superstar Maan Singh Khurana fixed his shirt just before going on stage. He was ready to give one of his best performances on the Star Guild Awards. He took a deep breath he knew that his ex Geet would be just in the first row.At one side that was nerve wrecking but at the other side it was good cause this song he had written specially for her. Just then he heard the voice of the host.
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VKhR-jI4XLk[/YOUTUBE]
He had to go up.He walked on to the stage singing the next set of lines:
You have a way of coming easily to me
And when you take, you take the very best of me
So I start a fight cause I need to feel something
And you do what you want cause I'm not what you wanted

Geet's heartbeat stopped for a moment. She looked at Maan's cold eyes that pierced right into hers. She good see that his pain had left and made place for coldness.


Oh what a shame, what a rainy ending given to a perfect day
Just walk away, no use defending words that you will never say
And now that I'm sitting here thinking it through
I've never been anywhere cold as you
The crowd went wild with the intensity Maan was singing. People could feel ever word. They found him amazing but what thet didn't know, was that he indeed meant each and every single word. The only one who knew was Geet Handa a promising newcomer in the field of acting.

You put up walls and paint them all a shade of gray
And I stood there loving you and wished them all away
And you come away with a great little story
Of a mess of a dreamer with the nerve to adore you
You never did give a damn thing honey but I cried, cried for you
And I know you wouldn't have told nobody if I died, died for you
Past memories rushed into Geet's mind. Yes the words Maan sang where harsh,and she wished she could run away from here. But alas that wasn't possible but Geet also knew she did give him that feeling and perhaps he was right about that Geet. But that Geet had been gone on one faithfull day, a day she met with the knew her!!
She tried her level best to keep a fake smile on her lips. A fake smile that had lately become her best friend infront of the whole world. She thought no she wanted to believe that no-one could see through her fake smile. But even this false hope of her got crushed down, with Maan's next line of words.
Oh what a shame, what a rainy ending given to a perfect day
Every smile you fake is so condescending
Counting all the scars you made
And now that I'm sitting here thinking it through
I've never been anywhere cold as you
Of course her Maan no not hers but Superstar Maan Singh Khurana could see through her fake smile. But if he could see everything why couldn't he see the love her eyes for him.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😆 LOL me was actually like "what used? who used?" as i read the topic name
And then opening it i came to know its your bew story 😉
Haayeee MSK the rockstar ⭐️ Aowww choti actually dreaming maanu in that rockstart avatar 😳
BUT Geet ko usski EX bana diya mummyyy yaha toh lubb story start hone se pehle hi the end kiya huya hai 😭 So not fair

BUT I want them together soonnn, SAMJHE???? 😡
Ummaaahhh Lubb yaaa Mel diii 🤗
Chollyyy i know m getting lazier day by day not commenting on any of the works , but vaccaations actually making me a lazy bum 🤢😉

Owww aur ek baat, mei bhul gayi but Happyyy First year Friendship anni 🤗 remem one year back on 27th was the day we chatted first 😉
ummaaahhh Thank you for making me your choti and being my Mel di ❤️
Lubb you alwayzzz 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti

😆 LOL me was actually like "what used? who used?" as i read the topic name
And then opening it i came to know its your bew story 😉
Haayeee MSK the rockstar ⭐️ Aowww choti actually dreaming maanu in that rockstart avatar 😳
BUT Geet ko usski EX bana diya mummyyy yaha toh lubb story start hone se pehle hi the end kiya huya hai 😭 So not fair

BUT I want them together soonnn, SAMJHE???? 😡
Ummaaahhh Lubb yaaa Mel diii 🤗
Chollyyy i know m getting lazier day by day not commenting on any of the works , but vaccaations actually making me a lazy bum 🤢😉

Owww aur ek baat, mei bhul gayi but Happyyy First year Friendship anni 🤗 remem one year back on 27th was the day we chatted first 😉
ummaaahhh Thank you for making me your choti and being my Mel di ❤️
Lubb you alwayzzz 😃

OMG OMG awww you remembered OMG I am truly touchedEmbarrassedI am speechless at the moment love you my lazy choti.I can't even blame you for being lazy kya hai nah you sis is also lazy😆
love you sooo much choti. You are such a adorable litle sis to haveEmbarrassedand I fell really Lucky to have you in my life❤️
hmmm let's what happens, but you don't drool to much or else mom will scold me😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel-ki-shona

OMG OMG awww you remembered OMG I am truly touched😳I am speechless at the moment love you my lazy choti.I can't even blame you for being lazy kya hai nah you sis is also lazy😆

love you sooo much choti. You are such a adorable litle sis to have😳and I fell really Lucky to have you in my life❤️
hmmm let's what happens, but you don't drool to much or else mom will scold me😆

Haa tohhh how would i not remember?????
You know ek din aise hi me was wondering ke hum sissys kaise bane , coz meko kuch yaad nai tha that how we came this close. Toh aise hi me thought of going through the old threads of Dirty revenge where i commented for the first time, and saw my comment and ur reply which was on 27th, xactly one day after me joined IF 😃.
Sacchiii even after one whole year i cant describe wat i felt when you called me Choti ❤️ it was sooo touching for me 😳
Ummahhh Choti too lubb her Mel di lotsss 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Singing Superstar 😆 U r reminding me of my 2nd hero Sis ..! Amazing prolouge sis ... Will be waiting 😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
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YIPPPEEE...My most awaited one...Thanks a ton SB...me so very happy

OH MY MY...Maan a superstar and Geet a budding actress

Though I so much wanted this..but seeing Maan so broken and cold is so unbearable yaar..but still would love to see/read this side as I so wanted

So Geet too realized and is in love but she has lost everything and Maan is not at all ready to see thru her pain, just reading her like open book, but thinking that she is still cold of any emotions I guess

Prologue is too interesting...the song is just so much showing his emotions, his as well as Geet's state of mind to some extent...waiting to know when and how his love was broken too bits and how she has recognized her love and sin...

Lots of love and hugs for considering my request❤️❤️ my not so sweet Devil😆...muaaahhh
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti

Haa tohhh how would i not remember?????
You know ek din aise hi me was wondering ke hum sissys kaise bane , coz meko kuch yaad nai tha that how we came this close. Toh aise hi me thought of going through the old threads of Dirty revenge where i commented for the first time, and saw my comment and ur reply which was on 27th, xactly one day after me joined IF 😃.
Sacchiii even after one whole year i cant describe wat i felt when you called me Choti ❤️ it was sooo touching for me 😳
Ummahhh Choti too lubb her Mel di lotsss 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

awww that's so sweet choti
it's true yaar it's so amazing how we became sisters I remember I first few pms when you where trying to figure out how if worked and your first b-day here that reminds me your b-day is coming up😉awww and I can't tell you how happy I am to be your di
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's awesome ...
pls cont soon ...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb
thanx for the pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fantastic start 😊
Little puzzled why u keep this title ''USED'' 😕
Lets see if we get the reason behind this word ..pls continue ..thanx😃

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