Addicted--virman-SS-part 20-i - Page 86

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Daydreamer9: i think i should stop commenting on your updates.coz everytime... my mind goes blank.usually i'm not that bad with words but when it comes to comment on your works- i just don't know which words to use.your works have that effect on me.trust me :), well, your comments have an effect on me, thanks!...you're never gonna loose your edge.coz you're born to write.thank u!loved the portrayal of manvi's guilt.how she's now ready to go any extent to make it up to virat.absolutely brilliant!!!! loved how u yourself highlighted the dialogues that spoke volumes 'bout virat's love.loved every single thing 'bout the update.bless you!!!!awww'.love ur comments and always look forward to them!

Shruthi: finally u updated!!!!!im so happy 2 see ur bck again... hope ur xamz were gud..yes, they went well :)cuming 2 da update it was fabulous!!!!!as usual...ur jst amazing anu...i dnt hav words 2 tll hw ur stories r...da way u showed manvi's guit... nd all dos lines which virat said 2 her... awesome...da way manvi was trying 2 make up 2 virat was nice 2 see...missed ria nd nikki in it...cont soon nd thnx fr da pm...thank u shruthi!

Dina_Virman: Felt sooo good reading your update!! It had been wayyy to long!!! I missed writing about them too! Awww Manvi finally realized!! :D Glad about that!!! Update was super emotional ad romantic! Cant wait for the next uodateee hope there is some kids scene in that! Lol I love the kiddos! <3thanks!

Kulsum_virman: awesome update...just soo amazing ...manvi's thoughts her guilt her feelings her regrethe rinsecurities her fear and all...knowing the virat and blanco's relation change...then the virman romance...all awesome parts just soo woowwwi adore this virat he really loves manvi more than she loves him...update next part soon thank u so much, thanks for commenting so regularly!!

Kiekeboe: emotional wake-up call for Maanvi, happily she is trying to come to terms...lovely update and thanks for the pm Thank u! thanks for commenting regularly.

Vamps1996: urghhh i wanted to comment first naaa chalo koi nai but a biggg wali hugieee for u for updating so fast after being free from your exams and me to u for all ur super sweet comments! i reallyyy loved this update not becaz it was the best but becaz it was filled or it would be better to say overloaded with emotions... remember i told u once that i wanted an update regarding manvi's feelings during her pregnancy and u gave it and then i wanted an update again on manvi like about her guit and all and look here it is i can just thank u for giving what we always wanted to read I guess that's how the story flows and I am glad u feel that way!! coming to the update and my habbit of pointing out highlights I love ur traditions!!!please continue them!! but im sorry i cant becaz u urself highlighted all the things that were meant to be each and every thing that showed virat's pain and anger u mentioned it all over again and that was beautiful... the way manvi felt every word of her a slap on her face was kinda rite.. its obvious how she felt and she must...For godsakes Manvi, are you that stupid?? Can't you see how much I am into you. I mean for a bright woman like you, you should be able to read the signs. Do people who cheat on their wives act like me? I cannot even stay away from you for a few hours. You.got.to.learn.to.trust.me. What the world says, what people around us say is none of your f**king business. It's seems like whatever I tell you means nothing to you. I need you to close your eyes and trust me blindly!! Like.I.trust.you. If you cannot do that, then maybe you do not deserve my love." "Look at me Manvi, look into my eyes. You won't see anything but pure unconditional love for you. Only.for.you. I need you Manvi, I am broken and shattered and so many other things. I need you to fix me baby. I am dying every second without you Manvi. Open your eyes and look at me dammit.""'Do you know what I am going through right here? You are right in front of me but you act as if you don't care about me. You say that you don't love me anymore. It drives me crazy Manvi. I swear, I want to hurt you so much when you talk like this. I want to slap you left and right and put some sense into your stupid brain.""'. But, the very next minute, I want to hug you tightly and cry my heart out.'why are you doing this to me baby?"these were my favourites and u added them over all the update was amazinggllyyy superb as all other updates of yours are Thanks a lot hun ps: I really love your super long, spirited and sweeter than saccharine comments'muah!!!

Tuba_KSG: Huff !! Was Awesome .. Full Emotional Update ta , i just Loved it ..i like the way u shown maanvi's thoughts .. lOvely So touchy , kse vo guilty feel krti h Just Amazing Loved maanvi and Blanco Convo .. And Vow Bed rOOm scene , hayyyee shOoo sweeett ... virat was so cute n Understanding .. I loved their Romantic Moments .. awwwie'thanks so much!Update Soon Yr .. p.s thanks for the cute banners buddy!!

Chandiniebinda: Awesome yaar pleasee continue soon...You really update after long time..I am making up these days..lol Loved Virat and Manvi yaar..Cant wait for your next update...The first school day of there childeren..Thanks for the PM..thank u so much and so thanks for commenting regularly!

Bhabani90: OOohhhooo.. This is beautifully awsum..Just like a breathe of fresh air. That's very sweet! Thanks, thanks for commenting regularly

Surbhi.sur: well back dear...missed u vry much..N UR UPDATES..I missed writing them too hw were ur exms??? They went well, thanks! ok i finally read the update.. it was an awesum update as usual..manvi guilty of wht evr she did n said to virat...bt then happy to see virat n manvi together..thank u! got ur message too, it was lovely, thank u again! plz update soon...

Virumanu: lovlyyy...manu feels bad for viru...awww realy loved ur update...plzzz continue sooon

paddu53: Beautiful update...your back...continue soon...take care...

monikaksl: superb updatei like manvis pov so much update soon

Thank u virumanu, paddu53, monikaksl :)

roshreb: finally!!!! ive been waiting for days!!!
love the update..it was so romantic update soon n make it longer plzzz thanks so much!!

NourinNishal: only good? or should i say that was one of the best updates? every scene was written so beautifully..manvi's regret and blanco's description about virats pathetic condition..girl..u rocked it,and most importantly that tigress manvi..haye! blush, blush, thanks hun!That was simply bang on and was a treat for besharmos like me :p ..ekks..u deserve a standing ovation from us..honoured! and dont make us wait for so long plz..update ASAP thanks a lot!

Surovita: superb update !! lvd d way u potrayed Manvi's guilt. . . N their romance was so passionate. . . Awesum awesum update. Thanku!!

Rasp_beryy: Superb comeback anu...loved the old flashback scenes...its so refreshing...blanco n manvis convo was so frdly...he really do cares virat n his family...ahem ahem finally virat got his wife back in all sense...so cute...but i m scared after her dream...i think its going to happen in real too...yeah, it does look like that! nooo...i will kill that karan...but missed kids...cont asap thanks a lot!!!

Syed95: MindBlowing Update..~!! Awesome. Maanvi's guilt n then Virats changed attitude towards other...justified...N their Romance...Awesome...Loved their 'Love" Addiction...Waiting for the next n Thnks for the PM Anu..~!! thanks buddy!thanks for commenting regularly.

Virmanhus: Hey dii welcome back!!! & thanks for the update dat too on the very next day of ur busy shedule..dii dyu know how much sentimental & deep the update was??manvi remembering virat's intense & super awesome selected dialogues was more than a WOW!!!u just picked the pearls from the ocean,, so clever di,, those dialogues dat u selected to share with us, pour to us, or may be remind us were so soothing, lovely, full of life & damn carefully selected, beaded & what more made us to drown in the update..thanks sweety! i was so lost, tears did appear,, u know where?? the point where u gave by all means virat outrage, his anger & love to manvi & finally dat specific dialogue, "... But, the very next minute, I want to hug you tightly and cry my heart out...why are you doing this to me baby?"the best way to put manvi's state of horror at the very moment she learnt the truth about the mystery is definitely by herself recalling the way virat tried to calm her, make her undestand him.. but if u had just written "manvi was regretting & recalling virat's words" without tagging the past old dialogues, it wud have been mean,,true! but diii i know the magical writer in u again nailed it by tagging the heart throbbing dialogues dat were said by virat (obviously said by u) & moreover her ultimate & successful realisation "All he wanted in return was my love." SPLENDID dii!!!! awesome like heaven!!!!!!!! i was speechless wen my surrounding turned so full of emotions.. this piece carries so much beauty dii,, u dont know how um suffering here not able to cordinate the correct words to leave u a comment.. U manage pretty well, I'd say! i wish u were here near to me,, wanna hug u ryt away & give millions of kisses.. u deserve everything perfect,, u possess a rocking brain & the writing skill & critics!!,,, awiieee thanks a bunch! goddd murder me!!!!!!!!! lol "How can he forgive me for behaving like this? How much ever frustrating he got with me, how much ever angry he would get with me, he only tried to explain, convince, make me understand. Never once did he leave me and never once did he think about leaving me."same thuoghts did we readers have wen we learnt the truth along with manvi,, how did u design such a virat,, pure fantasy, guys like him unfortunately, do not exist! AMAZING character!!!!!!! he has acted in such a matured manner,, never ever wanted to slip manvi the details of mystery, thinking the fact dat she, his manvi, would regret.. how could someone pour so much love & care?? this manvi in the story is damn lucky in getting such a virat.. totally an imaginery world,, but ur work, ur skill, ur writing has made it so FULL OF LIFE & thus making us, the readers to get ADDICTED to addicted,, i cant accept the truth dat this is just a story & move on, the impact this piece of work carries is so much deep dat one couldnt express with words alone..what did u say about not finding words and putting them together again..:p'thanks a lot!!!"How much I want to replace all that with joy and happiness - he deserves nothing less. I want to heal him, fix him and bring him back to how he was before"if i call virat a matured guy, wat would i say manvi?? she was right from her point of view, she did nothing wrong.. it was all situational & fate,, but her regrets are so immense.. loved her,, loved her maturity,, loved her determination to fix him back.. may be she's gonna start a mission to bring him back,, um looking forward for that..yeah, she will! so ria & nikki are still in the story huh?? hehe was lost so much in the couple & realised dat two more souls are there to entertain us in the next update hopefully,, first day at school, dat leaves me alot of hopes & yeah the dream,, dat lady,, wen is she gonna show up??? waiting for the mysteries to get cleared as soon as possible soon:p yup dats it for now,, i dont know how long i cud give u or share with u each & every view of mine,, anyways ill try as much as i can, its a pleasure..love u loads diii,, love ur brain,, hugs & kisses..right back at u sweetheart! p.s. manvi wasnt the only person who regretted for her behaviour,, it was us too for siding manvi at times when we found virat in his extreme anger Husna, I absolutely adore and cherish every word u say, u r making me an emotional fool(copying ur words) thanks so much, its truly a delight to read ur comments 'a delight, a mood-fix, cute and emotional. Thanks a lot sweety!

Chandana123: Awesome update!!! Manvi-Blanco convo was so sweet...Continue soon...thanks and also thanks for commenting so regularly!

Aenna: Wooow an outstandinggg update..In starting i was really feeling bad for manvi.. How she was guilty... but sumwhere i even thought dat after manviwas gona virat did slept wid other womens..yeah, that should resurface some day! dat was his mistake also ya he was lonely but he shudnt hv done dat..so dey both did sumthing wrong manvi shud not feel dat guilty.. thanks buddy'thanks for following and commenting regularly! And in d end my god u always at d end make us feel happy lolzzz with dere romantic moments..It was really hot!!! Nd magical...Update asap...

Rachel19: awsome story just love it manvi feeling guilty and tried to make virat happy is so cute plz continue soon can you plz pm me thank u!

nrithyao: was waiting for ur update since a long time it was wonderful loved it a lot :-) thank u! the way u explained manvi's guilt was so awesome please continue soon

ash97: Mind-blowing,splendid and beautiful update yaar,words ain't enough to describe.When I started reading I was like- shit this Karan arrgg n it was just a bad ugly dream(relieved). It is one of the most passionate updates n waiting eagerly 2 read more. Continue soon n thx for the PM.thank u!

yaminthinda: Anuu u updated...yayy...i m so happy...it feel so great getting ur pm..N coming to the update it was super awesome Anu...manvi emotions are so well protrayed...her guilt...her fear...fantastic.virman romance..emotions romance...everything was brilliant...juz one word Anu...BEAUTIFUL..juz loved each n everything about the update..looking forward for next...will be eagerly waiting...thank u so much for the pm
hello, thank u so much! Hope all is well withya, love your comments and love that u never forget to leave feed-back!!! Thanks so much darling!

Niaksharma: Thanks for update..Ndt hanks for pm..Nd now abt update...Like always...Its awesome... Up to mark...Liked it...Continue soon..Liked maanvi's guilt... Hey, thank u s much, u have been encouraging me to write this ff from the start, love that u leave regular feed-back, that's awesome, thank so much! :-)

JESMY143VIRMAN: LOVED IT.YOU SCARED ME WITH THAT NIGHTMARE.AND A HOT ROMANTIC END.
THANKS FOR THE PM.haha..thank u!!

Meera.chaudhari: Welcome back Anu .. Missed you and your updates!! Update was wonderful as usual!! Manvi's dream was pretty scary! The way you have portrayed her guilt, her pain, her fear is just awesome.. Loved the flashback scenes also.. Manvi-Blanco conversation was nice.. Blanco really cares a lot about them.. NowManvi just wants to make Virat happy in every possible way!! That's great . Loved their romantic moments also! Brilliantly written Anu . Loved it . Please continue soon.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care Hello Meera, thank u, I always wait for ur comments, thanks for leaving them regularly and glad to know u r enjoying the story!!!

Pink1: manvi see bad dream and she come out for fresh air but dream she not ready to share virat he understood very well she hiding she feel guilty not trusting virat she remind how she hurt him she feel bad when blanco said how virat change after she left and thanks sending me pm update soon thank u!!

Nisha_virman: awesome update u scared me in the starting thank god it was nightmareluv manvi and blanco convo ,manvi guilt for not trusting virat end was lovely and romantic .continue soon thank for the pm Hey!!! thanks for the feed-back!

devilonmoom: awsm update... u really wrote well manvis guilty thoughts nd th flashback dialogues were cherry on top... th conversation between manvi nd blanco was heart touching... nd at th end th hot scene nd manvi making up to virat was superb.. loved it...thnks fr th pm nd pls cont soon this time... thank u!! love ur username..:-) thanks for regular feed-back!

ashni0905: i was waiting for your update, thanks for the pm...loved this chapter too..purely virmanish..thanks!

ShivaRajput: Anu like.. I loved it.. Love the way you portray Manvi's guilt and Blanco's story nd last part.. loved everythng.. Thanks Shiv, ur a darling, u never forget to leave feed-back, it means a lot..luv u!!!

Deepika 03: nice nice but y did u have to end it at such a great point???? Hmmm'thanks!had to stop somewhere..

Shaimah: awesome!!!this was so hot thanks for the pm!! :-)thanks!

Sabs: brilliant update loved it continue soonn thnks for the pm Thanks!

Anuvir: Hey, thanks for the awesome update! Great to see Manvi and Virat are on same page now. Manvi's guilt was so appropriate. Love the way, she is making up to Virat:) thanks!

Jayprabu: Its nice to see your update after long time. Superb update. Manvi's decision to bring back all the happiness to Virat is good. Continue soon. Thanks!

Sweets1126: ohhh! thank u very much for the update!!as usually ur updates r awesome!! and this one also!!:)continue soon!^^ Thanks!

Captain_pari: Anuuu..!! Welcome backkk missed you darling..!! :-) :-) <3Ahhh the old case of writers block its better now..lol coming to the update, it was brillianttt, the way Manvi went through the flashbacks and through herguilt, but i love Virat and the way he made her pay was...Ahhh , Hawttt..!! thanks!! Update soon..!! -Luv pari Thanks for following my story!!

Js1234: Seriously don't know what to say. How is it that we are running out og things to say but you are coming up with one aft the other amazingly entertaining updates. Dats very sweet of u! thanks! Thank you so much.

Smileysmi: I read first 10 parts in one go...
Wonderful story line...Impressively written each emotions...Lovely..
I will read the other parts soon n comment again...Thank u!!! will be waiting for other comments;p

Nanditam2107: Wait finally got over!!!!Loved the update, well it was obvious!!!Till now I thought Virat is wrong, he is guilty but today when Manvi herself was feeling guilty for not trusting him & said those bitter words which he didn't deserved at all, I realised that Virat is so innocent!!!! Being a great business tycoon, he is still a child, an innocent child from inside who wants nothing but assurance that his love will be with him always!!! Yeah..well said Well now its gonna happen, Manvi will stay with him forever & ever!! Blanco & Manvi's conversation was full of emotions, they both loved Virat equally & they were equally worried for Virat!!!!! I loved it that Blanco stayed with Virat even in his bad times & supported him & acted like a fatherly figure! Me too!Idea of Manvi to please Virat turned out to be hot!Wow!! Manvi not arguing with Virat for a day, this will be...different!!The update was as usual beyond excellence!!!! What should I say more, you always leave me tongue-tied!!!! thank u, good luck for ur exams!Well I don't think that I will ever be able to find out & mention any type of mistakes in your update...well I know its just not possible!!!!! That's sweet, but not true, I find so many mistakes when I re-read themBecause your work is always, it was always, & it will be always...FLAWLESS!!!!!Update soon...waiting already!!p.sdude, love : ur long comments, thanks for taking out the time for them'luvya for them!

Amgud: phewww... finally u update although after avery long time but u update atleast that enoughhh as ur writing is amazing n ur stories tu outstanding ha Glad!awww virat really knowsss manvi inside out thats why he was not telling her the truth as he knows that she's really sensitive n will be tensed over this which completely comes true as *this dream* at first i thought that they were actually kidnapped but as manvi said"" thankgod its only a dream""manvi is blaming herself for all this n its completely natural love it how u again showed us all those sayings which speaks volume of virats feeling as we can now completely relate all these words said by virat n can understnd his staten love blanco n manvi's convo tooo he really loyal n sincere n love n respect virat as a son as well as a boss respectivelyyyand i just love how manvi makes up to him n then their lovely romanceeeplzzz cont sooon its FAB FAB N FABthanks thanks thanks <3<3 n thanx for the pm ur welcome, luv ur comments, I lov comments which tell me what part of the update is liked, thanks for that and the regular feed-back!

eman-khan: Awww tooo cute.. as usual superb update.. manvi ws feelng bad.. n welcome bck :) thanks hun!