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Posted: 12 years ago
hey its s cute and lovely...
i love this part...
how sweet virat handle the situation... and the kids are damn cute...
i love each and every part of ur ff...
plz continue soon...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb...
Liked this one also...
Thanks for pm..
Loved their kids...
Maanvi nd virat also fab character in it..
Continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
um sorry to say this, it an advantage for us 'wen u are restless :p we are getting constant updates,, hurraayyy!!!!

lovely update dii..
the flashback was unexpected.. just a lovable romantic moment..
may be an example to show virat's possessiveness & protectiveness..
actually i found the flashback having a huge connection with the following incident,, u just made ur point clean & clear that virat is such a protective guy..
i just loved the sarcasm at certain instances, ''The next room is a library - huh? Go figure! Virat and books? '' the next moment manvi realises dat dose are hers & claiming virat as such a sweet guy was really sweeettt..
i go wow!!! at the description u give,, i feel like reading someone's feelings,, one such place was,
'' passion or love or a deep-seated need to pacify him travels through my body like current'' well dis was like the mentality of manvi, um amazed..

u made the whole tension serino of manvi hillarious,, i am rolling on floor laughing like mad at the scene,, the whole description of dat little,, oh no not little,, dat huge meany mountain, his parents, the way ria narrates wat happens and more than everything, virat saying ''Wait a sec, your brother punched that kid?" ,, well i was laughing crazily with virat,, my goddd um still laughing dii,, dats bloody hillarious.. 😆😆😆
i cant resist me from sharing those beautiful moments,, read dem again pls..
"But he is a meany momma, nobody likes him, he ate my lunch and pulled my hair and was making scary faces at me. He even said my hair looks like curly fries." Ria pouted with a sad face.
"What?" Virat stared at her shocked.
"Meany Mountain is back." Ria hid herself hugging onto Virat's shirt.
We both turned and saw two really big people, walking towards the principal room, they shared atleast 500 lbs between themselves. The smaller guy, who could only be their son was equally big and looked atleast 5 years or older.
"Wait a sec, your brother punched that kid?" Virat asked Ria. Ria nodded her head up and down. Virat started laughing crazily. Nikki looked at Virat laughing and relaxed a little bit. "Alright!!!" Virat opened his hand to Nikki and he comes and gives him a high-five grinning.

how adorable the kids are wen dey start complaining,,, Ria & Nikki,, so lovely, lively & heavenly, dey just wipe away all the tension..
each dialogue day come up with is so lovable,,
"Carry me!" Ria held her hands out to Blanco.
"Me too!!!!" Nikki followed her suit.
i have no idea how u are doing it, but i just go wow for the work, for the moments where the kids outcome with the EXACT behaviour, i mean, see, Ria orders blanco to carry her, the very next second Nikki also insist, how realistic,, godd um falling for ur writing so much, drug!!

manvi is like a fragile character wen it comes to love & sentiments nah,, i never expected her to cry linking every incident of the day, from the dream till now,,'' it must be the dream, my fears for Virat, school, Virat yelling at me, me yelling at my kids, possibility of something happening to my kids, their tricking me. Gosh! It is such a hectic day.''
she's a poor soul confused & disturbed,, i love her for her love is so deep & if shattered, she also shatters to the core.

what do i say about virat?? he is funny, overprotective, lovable, a very good teacher...
the way he sided Nikki & the way he laughed at the incident, goshh wat a parent,, like a friend,,''Sorry baby. I mean look at him and look at our skinny son. And the dude was bugging Ria."

the way he yelled at manvi scared me too "Enough Manvi, NOBODY MESSES WITH MY KIDS!''

he was damn funny wen he scolded Ms Tuner & dose 500lb parents :p
"You are out of your mind. Forget apology, if I see your son anywhere within 500 feet of my kids, I swear to god, you will regret what is going to happen to you for the rest of your life. And you, keep your hands off Nikhil and Ria……. and their lunch. Understood?"
i was laughing like hell at"...and their lunch"😆😆😆

virat warning Ms Tuner, ''I don't know if your problem is with me or my wife but let me make one thing crystal clear''
dat''with my wife'' brought back all the flashback of kids' interview, the way Ms Tuner had an eye on virat, the way she asked manvi if she is in good terms with virat, the way manvi was burning inside at the lady's glares at her husband & the most interesting thing, virat noting every reaction of manvi's jelousy face... it brought back everything along with once again manvi irritating virat with her words & Ria's too much sugar conditions... u made me remeber everything...magical
and i loved ''crystal clear'' perfect adjective!!!!

virat is a super awesome person,, from a mother's perspective whatever virat did was wrong, he set a bad example for the kids, well i thought so from manvi's side,, but d drama he made, the way he brought the grounding topic & the way he explained the outcome of his antics was awesome.. its so true, if Nikki hadnt protested, kids wud have got scared to go to school the next day,, if Ria wud have got hurt, the story wud be upside down,, thru virat's explanation u proved both manvi & us are wrong & definitely virat handled the situation cleverly,, smart guy.. (im loving virat more & more)

and yeah my diii,, i repeat for the upteenth time U NEVER FORGET things & EVERY HINT IN UR STORY BASICALLY DRIVES THE NEXT WHOLE CHAP!!!!!! last part the ''guys talk'',, & now this part is dealing about exactly d guys talk,, i least expected this,, u never ever forget things ryt? um AMAZED,, WOW👏👏👏

thanks alot for once again giving a family time...
love ur constant updates,, its a boost!!!
love u more & more,, hugs & kisses from me to u...
hats off again for giving an adorable,realistic update..
love u

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..
anu u r the best...
the flashback was amazing..
love each n every part ...
beautifully written.. 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
luv kids vry much
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wooowww amazinggg update...
I totallyyy luved all d moments..
Lolzz dat meany mo... I luved dere
Familyy tym.. How d kids nd virat was trying
to pacify her... Plzzz update asap..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another update...thank you.
It was a weekend treat for me. Loved it as usual.
Flashback gives the insight of their relationship in those early days. Nothing has changed. Both are still madly in love with each other.
Kids are super cute. didn't except anything less from Papa bear, Virat:)

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Posted: 12 years ago
Anu Anu Anu...ab main kya kahuu...kahaa se shuru karuu...u always make me speechless with your super mind blowing updates...👏👏👏...it was awesome, superb, amazing,brilliant...⭐️⭐️...this is so damn good...u noe wat whenever i read ur update i m in different world...i juz loved tat feeling...i juz read again n again without getting bore...i really can't get enough of it...sacchi main...n i m saying all these from my bottom of my heat...n i really need to tell u tat i m big fan of urs now...😳😳.i nearly read all the updates twice😳..i m so happy whenever i see ur pm😃...i would juz run n read it...😃...u r saying sorry for ur continues update...gosh Anu...i m saying thank u for ur continues updates...thank u so much ...it really make my day🤗...i can read ur updates day n night...tume likhtii jao aur main partii jao...😉...n coming to today update it was soo nice...so sweet cute...n beautifully written⭐️⭐️ flashback part was really awesome...virman romance..jealous virat...i really loved one of the virat thing is his possessiveness towards his wife his children his family...❤️...hayye...nikki and ria are soo cute as usual...nikki punch tat bully guy...yayy..aur sikhaa bhi kisse virat se..😉...nikki and virat manaoying manvi was so sweet...i was smiling throughout the update once again...u always bring a big smile on face😃...n the last scene...awwn...sweet family...loved each and every bit of the update❤️❤️...looking forward for the next update...will be waiting...thank u so much for the pm...n do take care Anu😊
Edited by yaminnthida - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Anu fabulous update!!! ❤️❤️❤️This is just awesome ⭐️⭐️⭐️.. Beginning was superb.. The flashback part, jealous and protective Virat, their romance.. Loved it a lot 😳😳.. The school part was hilarious!! 😆😆 Kids are adorable.. Nikki is such a cute protective brother.. Virat taught him how to punch 😆.. Well Nikki is a quick learner 😛.. Loved Virat's protective attitude towards his family.. Their momma manaofy mission was very cute and sweet.. Loved the last scene.. Group hug ❤️.. Wonderful update Anu 👏👏👏.. Each and everything is beautifully portrayed.. Btw why are you saying sorry for regular updates!!! Keep them coming buddy.. I love it 😛😛.. Will be waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Anu di...
you are an awesome writter di ...!!!👏👏👏
read all your parts of addicted in on go ...(By ystrday and today)😃

To be frank , when I read your part 1 (long back) ... felt like its a dark story .. virat with other girls ... didn't like the concept ... so i didn't give further importance to it ...
B4 we had chatted .. i know you as blue bolt who writes wonderful stories about virmaan ...so thought of giving it a try and read ...p1 .. came to a conclusion ...
for WHICH; I REGRET NOW DIii ...😭😭😭
I WANTED TO SLAP MY SELF FOR BEING JUDGEMENTAL ON AMAZING YOUR STORY !!!!

Though i was reading the story ... I felt like watching a HOLLYWOOD... BLOCKBUSTER ...BOX OFFICE HIT ...!! movie ...
with Virat .. Maanvi as hero heroine... their sweet little kids Nikki & Ria ...Blanco , Liz ... And offcourse ... Their pet dog "spiderman"...with all emotions ,fun ,action ,...and so on ...
" HANDS DOWN di ... " "hands down !!"... ⭐️

I really feel ki hummare CV's ke badle ... you guys should work on the story board of ehmmbh ...
But yes , maantha hoon ki tv pe "_ _ _ " *ahem * *ahem* scenes ko 😉
fast forward nahi kar sakthe... 🤣🤣🤣

loved the way both the kids are... they are so chuweet ...and naughty too ...😆
If i start about the parts in story ... ramayan se bhi lambha adhyaay hoga ...😆
i was totally keen in pointing out your hints ... about the mystery that was hidden behind Virmaan's life...
and the way you mentioned each hints like;
the way mer looked at maanvi after she told her about that day ... and many more incidents ...were superb !!!
you said in one of virat's convo with some one on phone ...during BUDDY & BUUNY's interview in school ...
"...staying with a five year old boy ." .. and this rob of Kids school; does they have any link ..????
looking forward to read more of your addicted ...
after reading your addicted ; I became addicted to your writting more and more !!!
keep going di ... 😃
Take care ...
Edited by totallyspies_1 - 12 years ago

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