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sweets1126

@sweets1126

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#871

so sweet of you!!!:))) and its okaay!! we can understand that its impossible answer a each person!:))

continue sooon!:D

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deepika03

@deepika03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#872

nice nice 😊 but its getting a bit stagnant dont u think? i would like it if u focussed on da secret society thingy more now...

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js1234

@js1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#873

I just would like to say if cv's are stuck on ideas which they have been they should come to you

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monikaksl

@monikaksl

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#874

Super funny update 😆
I love school n after school part so much
I love dat fb scene also
Update soon

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#875

This is a great read so far.
I love the mystery element to it.

Update soon!

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Nandita

@Nandita217

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Posted: 12 years ago

#876

The update was very cute & family one!!!😃

Lol...nikki punched that guy!!!!! hahahahahha...amazing...you know when you punch someone, you have a altogether a different & great feeling!!!!!! lol...I knew this because I myself have punched a guy back in my school!!!!!😆😉

Okay, anyways coming back to update...both virat & manvi's pov were correct!!!!!

they both were correct but the difference is just that their pov's application is at different stages!!!!!

Nikki with defending should also run that this is only not the way to deal with matters!!!!! So both of them were correct!!!

The update was just fantastic!!!!!! As interesting as always!!!!😃

P.S. I don't know what is making you restless...hope you come out of it soon!!!
But dear, don't ever apologize for giving updates so early or back to back!!!!
Your updates are always like a treat to act, atleast for me, & whenever I complete reading your update, I start counting days at that point only, that when you will update next!!!!

So don't be sorry!!!!😊😉

Update soon, will be waiting!!!!😊

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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#877

Damn virat was just awesome amazing father figure
Loved how the kids are bonding with virat and the
Teasing was so cute superb update continue soon

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Zehnaseeb

@Zehnaseeb

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#878

Read the whole thing at one go, gosh you're a terrific writer 👏 the plot is so unique and refreshing👏 I've always wanted to read a story on these two with manvi running away with the kids and both meeting after 3-4 years and thanks to your FF got exactly that😆 the other girl helping Karan, don't know why but I have a feeling it's shweta😆
Continue soon and add me to your pm list please😊