-DHDAJS- Maaneet SS-#3- UPDATED Pt. 30 Pg 26 IMP NOTE Pg 30

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(Just one incident can change a person whole life, views, and beliefs
It can also bring in so many acrimony Memories to you,
Fear and Pain is what an incident can bring to one life but sometimes it can also bring Love to one life)

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A girl lost her love before she fall in love madly. A boy lost his love before she could ruin his life.
He fell in love with her again but she is scared to Fall in Love over again
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EAR, PAIN, and LOVE
Fear, is something that is within everyone
Sometimes we ourselves don't know what we Fear from
Yet, we Fear
And,
Once our heart is cages in the hands of Fear,
we intend to Fear from everything,
it's like living in hell,
it's like burning in hot lava till u become a puppet in the hand of ur own Fear,
Fear is losing, Fear is winning
Fear is life, Fear is death
the more u run from ur Fear, the more it follows u the more it will hunt u
and soon enough the Fear starts controlling your mind, heart, ur beliefs,
the Fear, fears you to love someone, thinking u will lose ur loved one
Fear, fears u of being left lonely once again,
its keep u away from every happiness fearing u will lose in the next moment
Fear, stop u from living in the moment, fearing u from your past
Fear, fears you for u future,
to move ahead thinking everything will be vanished next moment
Fear, fears u more than seeing death in front of ur eyes.
Now its ur decision to control your own Fear,
Or
u let your FEARS control YOU all your life.
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Part 26

Geet and Maan both look at each other with piercing look, as if they were both accusing each other putting the blame on each other for the condition they were stuck, for god know why, it wasn't either of theirs fault, it was the sudden weather fault that they are stuck now. Maan bangs his hand on the steering wheel making Geet to jump in fear. Geet gives Maan a glare and then looks up and says "Baba ji aakhir aap mujh se chahete kya ho, nahi nahi agar aapki koi mujh se personaly dushmani hai tu aise kyun nikal rahe ho, wo bhi is iss Maan ke saath phasa kar" Hearing that Maan looks at her as if he would kill her. As usual Geet spoke little loud enough for the person sitting next to her could hear her talk with her fav Baba ji. As Geet continued to talk with her Baba ji and complaining and blaming Maan for everything, she finally turned toward Maan to only meet with his furious eyes, who was all ready to kill her on the spot, but to his unfortunate luck and Geet gud luck he couldn't have done it.

"Miss. Geet Handa, If u keep ur blabbering mouth shut for a while then I will be able to think of a solution on how to get us out of here" Maan said gritting his teeth, to which Geet gave him a smile and said "Maan main ne tu aap ke brain ko sochne se nahi roka aur nahi aap ko sochne se, hai na, tu aap meri baatein pe dehayan dena chode aur apni brain pe concetrate karo ke wo kuch soche to get us out of here"

Maan just shook his head, and thought "ise baat karne ka matlab hai ke bang my head on stone." Maan looked back over his shoulder to see if the back is clear or not, once he was sure their was nothing that would get them stuck, he started the engine but it didn't. He tried again and again to get the car started but it went in vain.

"Maan what happened" Geet asked worried.

Maan- umm guess the Battery died.

Geet gave him a look of like she didn't hear to what he said and said "Maan tell me na what happened, why are u not starting the car"

"Geet didn't I just told u ke the battery might have died, then why are u asking me the same question" Maan said.

"then why are u still sitting in the car go and see what is the real problem in your khatara car" Geet shouted, fearing to stay with him. Maan gave her a glare and said " how dare u call my car a khatara, no forget the car how dare u talk to me like that and"

Geet interrupts him and says " don't start arguments with me right now, we can do that later, abhi u go and see what is the real problem"

Maan- Geeet No one, nd I mean no one has ever talked to me like that and here u are ordering MSK to do things.

Geet- Well then hello wake up from ur dreamland Mr. Maan Singh Khurana, I am Geet Handa that u have came across with, and yes I am ordering u, tu kya kar loge aap, hun.

Maan turned facing her and in a jerk pulled her toward himself as his one hand went into her hair and he held it in tight fist as he tilted her head back making Geet to flinch in pain and spoke "well then I guess u have to be punished for Ordering The MSK"

""Maan" Geet moaned in pain, and more with him being this close, it was making her lose her sense.

"What Maan" Maan spoke as he pulled her more close that his breath fanned her lips.

"Please go and see na, mujhe dar lag raha hai" Geet whispered.

"Is this an order or request" Maan asked nuzzling his face into the nape of her neck and pressing a kiss there on of her hair, along with tightening his fist around her hand.

"request" Geet moaned and then said "aab jao na please"

Maan- hmmm

He went out and checked the car, and to their luck the battery was out. Maan took a deep breath and looked around to see any house or anything that could give him shelter for right now and to his luck he found a house, more of like a farmhouse across the road, Maan quickly shuts the bonnet and went to Geet side door and opened it and said "Geet come lets go"

Geet- why what happened in the car

Maan- Battery died out, we have to go in that house and ask for help" and pointed her toward the house. "Maan what if their is no one" Geet said as she got out of the car and Maan closed the car after taking his stuffs. Once he was sure the car is locked Maan held Geet hand and Geet felt a current ran down her Spain and she looked at Maan, who without giving any care to what his touch was doing to Geet, he almost ran toward the house as the rain was poring heavily. Maan pulled Geet in front of him as they came under the entrance of the house and all the while Geet kept staring at him as if their was nothing around her other then Maan. As Maan felt her gaze on him, he instantly looked at her making her avert her eyes from him. "Kya huwa" Maan asked.

"kuch nahi...wo...wo aap...aap dekho na ke koi hai ke nahi andar" Geet said.

"Hmmm deakh ta hoon" Maan said and turned to the door and rang the bell after 3 to 4 ring the door opened and a young lady stood their. "ahhh wo our car broke down" Maan said.

"Who is it" A man voice came from inside.

"Mr Khurana" The lady spoke making both Maan and Geet to look each other confused as how do they know him.

"Mukti let Mr. Khurana in then, why are u making him wait outside" The man spoke again.

"Ji...please come in Mr. Khurana" Mukti said as she gave them space to come in.

once they were in Maan turned to Mukti and asked "do we know each other"

"aap ko kaun nahi janta Mr. Khurana, wo baat alag hai ke u don't know us" The man spoke as he came from behind. "Hi myself Prem Bajaj and this is Mukti my wife" Prem said as he forwarded his hand toward Maan, and they both shook their hand. "Hello Mr. Bajaj"

Prem- Prem, call me Prem Mr. Khurana

Maan- Maan then it is Prem.

Prem- ok Maan

Mukti- Prem if ur introducing secession is done then can u let them change or else they will catch cold.

Prem- thats right, why don't u take ahhh" he looked at Geet to which Maan said "she is Geet, my..." before he could say anything Prem interrupted him saying "mukti take Mrs. Geet Khurana with u I will take care of Maan" hearing that both Maan and Geet instantly looked at each other and their eyes met, their was this spark in Geet eyes, as if she was delight to hear Prem address her as Mrs. Geet Khurua. "Chale Maan" Prem said, breaking their gaze and Mukti took Geet to get her changed.

"come Mrs. Khurana" Mukti said as she led Geet to her bedroom.

Geet- Geet, please call me Geet

"Geet it is then" Mukti said giving her comfortable smiling.

"sorry Geet about these dress, actually we are here on few days holiday" Mukti said as she handed Geet a V-neck short sleeveless, knee-length nightgown.


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"Really sorry Geet, but I have only these kind of clothes for u to change in" Mukti said sadly as she herself was kind of embarrassed to give Geet this kind of dress to change in. Geet gave a little smile to her and said "its ok"

"You can change in this room" Mukti said as she led her to another room, it was almost like her ones but with different colors background. Once Geet left to washroom Mukti also went out and went to her room and quickly wore a long over nightgown and said "Hazar bar kaha hai maine Prem say let me take also some decent clothes but now, wahan kaun ata hai, ye bol kar he never let me packed any decent clothes, nd now here is the guest in our farmhouse and that too today, oh gosh how embracing it was to stand in front of Mr. Khurana in just a knee length nighty, and give Mrs. Khurana one of them, argg Prem I hate u for putting me in a situation like...OUCH" Mukti jumped all sudden as she felt a pinch on her stomach "Like wat darling" Prem asked as he rested his chin on her shoulder. Mukti waked his hands and came out of his hold and said "these nighty, do you know how embarrassing it was to stand in front of Mr. Khurana like this"

Prem- Mukti don't worry its ok

Mukti- what its ok, I had no decent clothes other then these nighty to give it to Mrs. Khurana.

Prem- tu kya huwa

Mukti- it's useless to talk to u Prem. coz ur not the embarrassed one out in front of them.

Prem- Jaan its ok, they are mature enough to understand.

"mature enough to understand that we don't do anything other than have s*x" Mukti said as she tied the string around her full length nighty, and left angrily from there.

"Uff its not only hard to understand girls but it sure is impossible" Pres said and then he also left to check on Maan.

"all set Maan' Prem asked as he saw Maan standing near the window in kurta and Track pants that he had given to him to change.

"Yeah, thanks for these" Maan said.

Prem- no problem Maan, cahle"

Prem took Maan to study room which was more like a painting room, where all his paintings were. Prem went in the corner to get something while Maan looked at the painting. "this is beautiful" Maan said as he traced his finger on one of the painting of two people walking in the night holding hands.

"you and my wife have the same liking, That one is her fav too" Prem said as he came and placed two glass with a wine bottle.

Maan- it sure is, so you are a painter.

Prem- no way, this is my hobby, I like to paint when I am free from my work.

Maan- so what do you do

" Owner of the Amani Trading & Exports Ltd" Prem said as he gave one of the wine glass to Maan. (its just a name of someIndiabusiness)

"Thanks, but I don't drink" Maan said remembering he had promised Geet to not drink ever again.

Prem- Maan you being the world famous business man and don't drink, that two thing don't go together, and I am sure Mrs. Khurana won't mind you having a one.

"kisi aur ko tu nahi bas use hi ek problem hai meri drink se" Maan murmurs and then turns to look at the door to see if she was anywhere or not.

Precap: Same as old one!

Prev: Part 25

Next: Part 27

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Edited by CrazzyBusy - 12 years ago
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Mrs Khurana... not bad... she is accepting slowly...
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toh geet k mann mein bhi kuch kuch hone lage magar shayad darti hai apne kismat se...iss liye maan se durr bhagti hai...

excellent n lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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part 26
awesome...
nice part...
cont soon dear...

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