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Posted: 12 years ago
part 28 - omg ..what was maan doing in his drunken state...hope he will cross his limit and hurt geet...ya phir ...ye kahi geet ka sapna to nahi hai, precap se to yahi lagta hai
loved maaneet moments
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 28
nice part...
yeh Maan bhi na...
but nice moments...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
kyun geet maan nehi pa rahi hai maan ko...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb
awesome update
liked a lot dear
very well written
continue soon
waiting
have a nice time😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

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By the early morning around at 4 Geet felt Maan moving off of her and just as soon he moved off of her she moved as far away from him fixing her dress and then went and laid on the sofa and stared at Maan thinking abt all that took place between them. For a sec she had thought she would be angry at him for all this at the morning but it was nothing like that, she was blushing and feeling happy. She turned and stared looking at the ceiling and then thought that why isn't she feeling any kind of emotion that could relate to guilt, anger, regret, unhappy abt all this but she felt nothing like this. She wanted to at least let the guilt take over her for letting a strange men touch her like this when she knows its only husband right to touch a girl like this, but here she felt happy, she felt completed to have been touched by him. when sleep took over her tired eyes she didn't realized it until she heard the knock on the door and she instantly sat up and looked at Maan hoping he didn't woke up yet as she wasn't ready to face him after what happened, she quickly stood up to go and open the door as she didn't want to disturb him but on the way she quickly picked her over nighty and wore it and then opened the door to see Mutki standing der with a glass of water which looked like a lime water with coffee's.

"Gud morning Geet" Mukti said as she handed her the tray.

Geet- Gud morning.

Mutki- here is ur dress Geet, aap log freshen up ho jaiye breakfast ready hai

Geet- Thank u" saying that she closed the door and tuned only to see maan string in his sleep as if trying to find someone, Geet went and kept the tray on the table and went and got freshen up quickly before Maan wakes up.


"Maan uthe late ho raha hai" Geet said as she woke him but all he kept doing was burying is head with the pillow and saying "Nahi I want to sleep more"
Geet- Maan hum late ho rahe hai, Prem ji and Mukti are waiting for us at the breakfast table" Maan removed the pillow off of his face and turned to face her, and der she sat with her wet hair few curls in front teasing her cheeks, just like he had always dreamed of seeing her in the morning and waking him up. Feeling his gaze on her Geet turned her face and tired to move away from him but felt his hand on hers and she just stops in mid while Maan sat up moving closer to her and then held her chin & made her look at him but Geet kept her gaze down, she didn't had in her to meet his gaze as she knew the moment she will look into those hazel eyes she will again find herself lost in him. "Maan wo" Geet tried to speak but even words were shying in front of him to come out or was it the after effect of their last night moment that didn't let the words come in between them. Maan slowly cupped her face in his hands and then placed a feather like kiss on her forehead and Geet closed her eyes feeling his touch on her. "Bauth pyari lag rahi ho" Maan said as he tucked in behind the curl, she blushed and ned her head down not wanting to look in his eyes while Maan laid staring at her as if he was worshiping her. "Aap ready ho jao" Geet said getting up away from him and then walked to the table where his clothes and the lime water was kept, She brought both thing and gave it to him and said "aap ye lime water pee lo it will reduce your headache" it was then he remember as the whole thing flashed back to him that happened last night and he looked at Geet trying to read her face, but all he could see was her avoiding him. Maan instantly stood up and held Geet by her shoulder and made her look at him but her eyes still avoided looking at him mkaing Maan to close his eyes repenting on his act and said "Geet I am sorry, I am really very sorry I didn't meant all that, Please forgive me" just as those words left his mouth Geet looked at him remembering all that happened between them and was shocked thinking all that didn't mean anything to him, he is repenting their moment, her eyes welled up and seeing the tears maan cupped her face and said "please don't cry Geet, sachi I didn't wanted to do all that but I couldn't help it, it was, main ne prem ko bola bhi tha ke..."

Geet- ye...aap...aap kya bol rahe ho
Maan- I am really sorry Geet, I know I promised you to never drink again but sachi kal raat bhi I didn't want to drink wo tu prem ne force kiii" Before he could continue Geet placed her hand on his lips while a smile touched her lips thinking he was sorry about the drinks & not their moments, but wait does he even remember their moments or he doesn't. Maan was so happy to see that smile on her lips and in that moment he just kissed her hand making Geet to jerk her hand back and she instantly turned her back to him and thought it would be better if he doesn't remember what had happened last night as she remember her own talk to him saying she doesn't want to except their So called marriage and now a fear engulf her heart thinking if he remember anything that had happened between them then he might expect more from her and how could she, there was no future to this relation she had nothing to do with him or he to her.

Maan- Geet...wo

Geet- everyone is waiting aap ja kar fresh ho jao

Maan- Geet I am sorry I really didn't meant to drink

Geet turned toward him and without meeting his gaze said "its ok"

Maan- so you are not angry with me na

Geet- na...nahi" hearing that Maan came and hugged her and said "Thank you" saying that he was about to leave to washroom when Geet stopped him and gave him the lime water, and he like an obedient child just drank it one go and left to freshen up.

"Thank u so much for everything" Maan said as he hand shook with Prem, who in return gave a smile and said "It was my good fortunate to help u both in time of need and have u with us" Maan hugged him while Geet hugged Mukti and they left. One last time they waved goodbye to each other and started walking toward their car that was now charged fully with the help of Prem. As it was all wet and muddy Geet slips twisting her leg, but Maan was fast enough to caught her by her waist before she fell on the ground, and pulled her toward himself causing her soft chest come colliding to his toned one and a soft hiss left from Geet lips as her sore N***** were pressed with his toned chest. "Kya huwa, tum theek tu ho na" Maan asked in concern, to which Geet lowers her head and nods in yes.

Maan- Chale

Geet- hmm" as she tried walking she stumbled and this time she held Maan tightly stopping herself from falling. "Sorry" Geet whispers to him and let's go of his hands as she felt his gaze and his questioning eyes. Maan was noticing her since morning. no no since the breakfast time she wasn't being her own self, each time their eyes met she would in a sec look away from him, and would lower her eyes or just walk away from him. "Geet kya baat hai why are u not talking to me" Maan asked.

Geet- ku...kuch bhi tu nahi

Maan- yeah right isiliye subhe se ur ignoring me. I said I am sorry na, I didn't meant to drink, Prem ne zid ki thi isiliye I had just one glass, that's all.

Geet- nahi nahi its ok I know u didn't drink purposely

Maan- then what is the matter.

Geet looked everywhere else then him fiddling with her duppata as the night memories came to her. How could she talk to him or meet his gaze after what they have done, she knew what they did last night was wrong, but the thought that her heart was making it all the way feel that whatever happened last night was right, there was nothing wrong, nor she was wrong nor Maan was wrong, was making her feel low about herself, how could she let something like this happen when she knows these are wrong, only the person you love has the right to do such a thing like this, and here still her heart was carving for more, how could it.

"Geet" Maan called out to her seeing her lost in herself.

"Hun" Geet said.

"chale" Maan said to which Geet nodded and then she felt herself being swift up in the air. "Ahh" Geet closed her eyes as she let out another painful hiss. Maan just gave her a look filled with confuse, but then thought her leg must be hurting so he didn't asked her any question and started walking, but Geet knew more than her legs it was her sore n****** that were hurting whenever it was pressed against his chest.

kinna sohna tenu rab ne banaya ' (2)

dil kare dekhda rawan

kinna sohna tenu rab nay banaya

As he settled her in the car, he stood staring at her feeling her lock teasing his sense. He was again getting drown in her beauty. He tried to look away from her seeing her getting uncomfortable but it wasn't in his control to look away from her and he stood staring at her same was with Geet, she tired looking away from him but again was left conquered in front of her heart and sat staring at him.

dil murda nahee lakh samjhaya ' (2)

dil kare dekhda rawan

kinna sohna tenu rab ne banaya ' (2)

dil karay dekhda rawan

kinna sohna tenu rab ne banaya

Maan slowly creased her face and tucked her hair behind her ear as it was coming in between his view, and leaned toward her placing a soft kiss on her forehead and once again said "sorry" to which Geet instantly covered his mouth her palm and nodded in no.

dil wich teraa pyar wasa ke, wekhi janwan kaul betha ke ' (2)

tenu dil wale shishe wich sajaya ' (2)

dil karay dekhda rawan

kinna sohna tenu rab ne banaya ' (2)

Maan sat behind the wheel and started driving as the roads were clear now. They sat in the car silent but stole glance of each other every now and then, and would find Geet all red. He gave her few questioning looks when their met but instead of giving him answer she would turn her face toward the window. And after like what seems ages he heard Geet shouting "Maan stop the car" he abruptly stops it and looks at her and says "kya huwa"

Geet- wo mujhe Mandir jana hai, see there is the temple.

Maan- abhi

Geet- please" now how was he to ignore her puppy look that she gave him. He stops the car in side and they both went in the temple.

pyar teraa hai jindigi meree, karni ay me puja teree ' (2)

tenu ankhian de wich me wasaya ' (2)

dil karay dekhda rawan

kinna sohna tenu rab ne banaya

Geet gives the thal of pooja to pandit and ask for to do the pooja, as the pandit did the pooja, Geet closed her eyes and folded her hands, while Maan Stood facing her and stared at her angelic face. He was letting his heart out of his control seeing her, he knew she was never his, but being with her was breaking all his control over his heart. He stood staring at her and then looked at the ideal in front of him and thought how they could make someone that a person would want to see them the whole life and could never get bore of watching her.

dil murda nahee lakh samjhaya ' (2)

dil karay dekhda rawan

kinna sohna tenu rab ne banaya ' (7)

As Geet turned toward him to give him the parsad, she found him standing facing her not where he should be. "Maan" Geet called breaking his trance.

Geet- aap ne pooja nahi karni

"meri Pooja tu mere samene khdai hai" Maan said lost in her

Geet- kya

Maan- kuch nahi, chale

Geet- par aap ki pooja

Maan-ho gai Geet, now lets go" Saying that he walked out while Geet followed him thinking over his word.

Geet- ek baat pocho main aap se

Maan- hmm

Geet- will u tell me the truth then

Maan- Geet we already went over it na

Geet- haan but u didn't tell me the real reason behind you anger

Maan- Geet main ne kaha na I was not angry with u

"Mat batiye, aakhir main aap ki lagti kya hoon jo u will share anything with me, waise bhi I am just an stranger to u, so why would u share anything with an stranger" Geet said angrily and went ahead of him without looking and she bumped into someone, and when she looked she found a Baba standing in front of her.
"I am so sorry Baba please mujh maaf karde, main ne aap ko dekha hi nahi" Geet said.

Baba- koi baat nahi beta, galtiya tu insaan se hi hoti hai" saying that he tried to pick his things but Geet stopped him saying "baba main utha deti hoon" Saying that she picked his stuff and handed it to him, and then she touched his feet to get his blessing and just as the baba placed his hand on her head he removed it as if he felt a current, Geet and Maan both looked at him who gave them a horrifying look. "Baba" Geet said as she stood up.

"Tu use kho degi beta, tujhse teir wo keemti cheez, jo tujhe khud se bhi zidya aziz hai tu use kho degi" Baba said.

"Baba" Geet said frightened. "Baba aap aise kyun bol rahe hai, mujh se koi glati huwi hai" Geet asked with whimper voice as if she will gust into crying. Seeing the scene Maan wasn't getting a good ambiance out of all this. He quickly went to Geet and tried taking her away from there, but then they both stops hearing the baba again saying "you can take her away but u won't be able to change the fate that is written, u won't be able to stop that storm that is heading toward you. Lakh kosish kar le par jo likha hai wo hoke hi rahe ga"

"Baba" Geet said trying to go to him but Maan stopped her saying "Geet this is all nonsense, chalo yeha se" saying that he gave one angry glare to Baba and took Geet away from there. He made her sit in the car and then he himself came behind the wheel and drove to home, none spoke but the fear on Geet face was visible. The fear on Geet face feared Maan.

Precap: Will Geet Forget Baba words or not & Maaneet moments & ACCIDENT


Prev: Part 28

Next: Part 30

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Wishing Everyone a Happy Ramadan. Will be off of IF for a month and I will try to write as many chap I can but can't promise I can as I have other very IMP works to be look after. I will try to update after I come back...
Thank you Enjoy this part, Sorry for the mistakes.


Edited by CrazzyBusy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god yeh kya kardiya itna badiya update ke baad last mein yeh kya twist daali.

aur tho aur iss update ko cliffhanger mein chodkar 1month nahi aaogi kaise rahe precap ke baaremein soch kar dar lag raha hai kahi maan ko kuch na hojaye.

but liked how geet is slowly accepting maan she didnt feel any guilty for what maan did to her.

happy ramdan and enjoy with ur family and pray for all to keep all safe and happy.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet has alredy lost Dev.ab kya maan ko bhi kho degi
I don't want this to be happened
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update hope maan ko kuch na ho waiting 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update dear. Geet is not feeling guilty for the moments they shared. Hope she will realize that she loves maan
last part was scary.
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely part...loved maaneet moments...maan doesnt remember anything that happened bet maan & geet in night...he was asking sorry for his drinking...what baba said, where he was hinting...accident...?

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